Asad Zoya OS - A Silent Storm

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Oh this is amazing, I really want something like this in the show, Asad really needs to understand Zoe's value in his life.. you are awesome, love it...

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This is bloody perfect. Are you a mind-reader by any chance? Because I had wanted Zoya to same exact same dialogues with some addition.:P 😆 You write so well. This made me feel so much better. Let him suffer.

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Fabulous work...👏 Though I don't expect anything to happen in the show at all,still,I felt good after reading this.😊

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ariel1985

@ariel1985

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

That's one lovely OS..very well written...I could feel Zoya's pain by just reading it...👏

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JJN

@JJyoN

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Great OS.

🤢 Hope both Asad and Zoya realize Tanveer's true face soon.

Edited by Azriya - 12 years ago

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

That was So brilliant! I would love to see Zoya talk back to Asad this way too. Oh how i wish CV's read your OS and added a scene just like that. I really want Zoya to shout at Asad and give attitude. I mean enough is enough. I loved your OS.

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

very nice ! well written

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OMG ur OS calmed my soul in reality !!

I wish I could actually imagine this scene in my head it felt so real !

I was like yes thats how you get back at him Zoya !

I wish CVs learn something from this OS of yours !!

Very beautifully written absolutely felt like all my frustration from my heart was coming out !

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abditory.

@abditory.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Ok uhmm I am always in Asad's favour 🤣 but the guy has kinda lost it now.

Your OS, they are amazing. You don't write some sex, making love or romance thingy. You write the reality from the show with the characters in your mind. This was exact thing in my mind. Asad needs to understand now. It was beautifully written with exact amount of emotions and feelings. The best thing about your stories are the feelings of Asad. Perfect. The conversation, back answers everything PERFECT.

Loved it^^