Asad Zoya OS - A Silent Storm - Page 5

Good one
U should compete it

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

Good one
U should compete it

thank you.. Are you serious?? It's complete! I'm not having her go back to that ass any time soon! 😆

This was so CATHARTIC!

fabulous!! totally fabulous, my God the way zoya reacted and spoke everything sooo rightly.. every word is true if we see it from a view apart from romance and heartache, simply blew my mind off!! awesome script and awesome narration.. do write more, wud love to read more from u... well done

fabulous!! totally fabulous, my God the way zoya reacted and spoke everything sooo rightly.. every word is true if we see it from a view apart from romance, simply blew my mind off!! awesome script and awesome narration.. do write more, wud love to read more from u... well done

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Aah Sanaa! I Love how you write what exactly i have been feeling since the episode that day! And this happens almost everytime!

Asad needs to understand that if you Love someone, even if that person is to kill someone and says she hasn't then you still have to believe her! Love is unconditional! But aah Asad realising that will take like a zillion time to understand then!

Really glad to read an amazing OS like this! The way you described their feelings, was outstanding!! Just LOVEEE IT!! <3

Awhh..!! Thank youu..!! you're one of my favourite commentors😃

Originally posted by: arshikavya

Wow this is just mind blowing. Really want something like this to happen in the serial as well. Only then Mr. Ahmed Khan will realize his love for Zoya :)

Great work :) <3

yeah I thought so too. I know trust builds with time..(as I read a post on the forum) but if you love someone, you don't unnecessarily hurt them! In fact, you don't hurt them period. And that's what Asad's been doing for ages.. Hence I think he needs to lose her to realize her value..

Thanks you soo much!!

Originally posted by: BellaK

OMG u r so talented thats how i would like Zoya to act. Asad need to stop treat her like dormat all the time. No girl diserv that NO1. Choise of words and ur writing skill is amazing. Lots of love/Bella

Awhh.. thank you loadz!! The words just kept pouring out as I thought of everything Asad had done to Zoya..lol😆

Originally posted by: Champa2012

Loved it. But it will never happen like that in the story though. One word from him and she will melt like ice cream and run to him. I feel puppies have more attitude than this girl.

Nahh.. don't expect it to happen. Hence I write my own stuff..😆 Thanks a lot 😃