Always with you!!! AsYa FF #1 - Parts 1 to 30

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zoeasad

@zoeasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Superb..the best ff I have ever read!!!

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

AWESOME...ASYA ARE SO MUCH FUN...

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

it is really really super😊.. Plz continue soon frd...

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

superb ..continue & pm me to

pari

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Just one request
Can u plz update an index?

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Mariya

@mariya_a

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

That was really good I love how you don't make asad and zoya seem different from the actual asad and zoya in qubool hai like some stories use words that are not like them (dont know if you get what I'm trying to say)
We need an ZOYA vomitting and finding out she's pregnant track like they r on the table she vomits donesnt know why Dilshad thinks something fishy zoya faints and then dr says she's pregnant or something and then asad has to tell zoya personally himself and he's shy too because she's asleep when the dr came and maybe tanveer trying to kill zoya baby by giving her pappaya
That would be an amazing part I would write it if I could but I'm rubbish as stories
Who would like this track?
Please pm me when you updated thank you