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Posted: 12 years ago
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One of d best FF I read so far!! read all parts jus now n u write so well. comic n romance r superb in ur writing!!
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Hello friends, thanks for liking my ff and encouraging me to write updates amongst my busy schedule 😊 Here is my next update😊

Part 8:

Location: Asad's Residence

Tanveer sneaked to Dilshaad's room and went in search of her cell phone. She was scrolling down the call log list to find any numbers which could give a clue to know where Asad was.

"Tanveer!!"

Tanveer startled suddenly and turned back to find Dilshaad standing back of her.😲

Dilshaad: What are you searching in my phone Tanveer?

Tanveer: Wo…Khala. I wanted a number. That's why…

Dilshaad: Whose number you want??

Tanveer was in loss of an answer as she didn't expect Dilshaad at that moment.😕

Tanveer: Grocery waala's number Khaalaa.

Dilshaad: But why would you need his number?? Usually Najma only contacts him for grocery materials.

Dilshaad was determined to get a proper answer from her.

Tanveer: Wo..Khalaa…

Dilshaad: It's okay. But hereafter if you need anything, ask me first. I don't like people nibbling on my personal belongings. Hope you don't mistake me. (With a serious face)

Tanveer: Ji..Sorry Khala.

She left from there angrily and frustrated.😡

Dilshaad thought to herself: (I am very sure she didn't search grocery waala's number. This girl is upto some problem I feel. I should keep a watch on her.)

Location: In the beach house (after a few days)

Asad was nibbling on his phone trying to repair it. Little did he know, his extra ordinary genius wife had shown her skills on it.😉

"Asssaddd!!!"

Asad dropped his phone on the floor hearing Zoya's scream and the phone broke into pieces.

Asad placed his hand on his forehead and stared at Zoya.😡

Asad: Zoya, what was the necessity to shout now??? Do you know because of you how much phones have I broken yet?😆

Zoya: Allah Miyaa!! What's wrong with you??? You don't know how to handle phones Asad. 😆 What can I do for that??? By the way I thought you are a macho man. But you got scared for my scream??? (She laughed in a teasing manner)😛

Asad: Wo…actually…by the way why did you call me?? (Trying to hide his embarrassment)😳

Zoya: Well, shall we go back to Bhopal??? I am missing Ammi and Tamatar. (With a sad puppy face)😔

Asad was happy to know how Zoya loved his family so much more than him.

Asad: Okay. We shall go tonight. Happy?😊

Zoya: Thank You Baby!!! (She went and gave him a cute hug and ran to her room)❤️

Asad gave his famous shy smile and walked away.

Location: In a shop at Mumbai

Asad and Zoya went to buy dresses for Dilshaad and Najma.

Zoya selected dresses for her Ammi, Tamatar and her beloved hubby and then started selecting dress for her as wel. Asad kept his hands folded and was wondering why ladies take so much time to select a dress.🤔

Zoya: Wow!!! This dress looks nice!! (holding a grey top)

The sales guy: No Ma'am. Actually this colour suits your skin better. (Taking another top)

Zoya: Oh Yeah, actually you are right. I shall take that one only.

Asad stared at both Zoya and the sales guy.😡

Asad: Nahi. It doesn't seem good. Take this blue top. Blue is your favorite colour right?

Zoya: Well, I liked the one which the sales guy showed. But it's okay; I will take the one which you like.😊

Asad smiled at her and she went to the next section.

Asad to the sales guy: You are a sales guy only right?

Sales Guy: Yes Sir. (Puzzled at the question)😕

Asad: Then just do that work. I know which colour suits my wife better. You need not suggest (giving his angry look at him)😡

Zoya was watching this from a distance and was enjoying her husband's possessiveness. 😃They purchased dresses and left home.

Location: Asad's Residence:

Asad and Zoya reached their home at Bhopal in a taxi.

Meanwhile at the living room, Najma was talking with Dilshaad.

Najma: Ammi, I miss Bhaijaan and Bhaabhi a lot. 😭 It's been so much days since I listened to Bhabhi's shayaris.

Dilshaad: Haan Najma. Home is not at all nice without Zoya.😔

The doorbell rang.

Dilshaad: Who has come at this time??

Najma went to check and opened the door.

Najma: Bhaabhhiii!!!! (She exclaimed and hugged Zoya)😃

Dilshaad too came and welcomed her bahu back home.

Asad : Ammi, tamatar. Very nice. I was the one standing near the door. You people didn't even notice me??Everyone wants Zoya only.😭

Dilshaad: Asad, not only us beta, even you want Zoya only right??? (She gave a naughty smile at Asad)😉

Asad and Zoya gave an embarrassing smile and Dilshaad hugged both of them.

"Jammy!!!"

Tanveer came running to Asad and caught his hands.(her usual irritating hold)😡

Tanveer: Jammy, It's been so long since I saw you. I missed you a lot Jammy.

Asad was not feeling comfortable with her touch and Zoya was staring at Tanveer. Suddenly Dilshaad came to Tanveer and took her hands from Asad's hands.👏

Dilshaad: It's okay Tanveer, now he came back na?? Let them go and relax. Asad, Zoya, go freshen up and come for dinner.

They both went to their room.

Tanveer did not like the way Dilshaad was behaving with her nowadays. She was walking to her room, when Dilshaad called out to her.

Dilshaad: Tanveer, if you don't feel bad, can I tell you something??

Tanveer: Ji Khala (wondering what it could be)

Dilshaad: I don't care how you behaved with Asad before his marriage. But now, since he is married please maintain a little bit of distance with him, as now Zoya is there with him. You may be his friend, but as a wife, Zoya has the highest priority on Asad, more than me also. Hope you understand.👏

Tanveer (shocked at her statement): Ji..(And she walked to her room irritated)😡

At Asad's room, Zoya was unpacking her things with an angry face. Asad offered help and she refused. Asad came to her sensing her anger.

Asad: Zoya, why are you angry with me?? I didn't catch her hands. She only caught me na??

Zoya: Thank God Asad!! First time in life you understood the reason for my anger. If she catches you, why do you too catch her if you are not comfortable?? It's not that I doubt you Asad. Just as you are possessive about me, I am possessive about you. Even Ammi understood my feelings, but you don't know how to react also.😔

Asad (caught her hands): I am sorry Zoya. Hereafter I will not behave in any way which will hurt you. Your wish is my command. Khush??❤️

Zoya was overwhelmed at his reply and hugged him. (MITWA MOMENT)

Just then Tanveer opened the door and came inside was shocked at the sight she witnessed just then.😲

Asad and Zoya broke from their hug suddenly.

Asad: Ye Kya hai Tanveer??? Don't you know you are supposed to knock the door before coming in?? 😡(With a little bit anger in his face which he had never shown to Tanveer)

Tanveer (shocked at Asad's response): Ehhh…I am sorry. I came to call you both for dinner.

Asad: We will come. By the way please don't repeat this again. Zoya, I will freshen up and come.

Asad went to the washroom and Zoya gave a mocking smile at Tanveer. Tanveer left from there wondering and irritated at what happened to Asad.

Zoya thought to herself: (So sad Tannu, today your Jammy scolded you as my Asad. This is just the start. There's more to come😊). She smiled and sat down on the couch.

Hope you would have loved this update...And as usual reviews please!!! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Gr8 update

Thx for the pm

I loved the way Dilshad scolded Tanveer

And Asad shouting on Tanveer... Wow

Loved the way Asad spoke to the salesman



Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

WOOOW i wish the same from the cvs now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res! Vl b bck soon! :)
im back chollyy im late!! 😳 😆
it ws awwwsm dea...
speciallly d part where asad scolded tanuuu haaayee i just loved it!!! 😳 👏 👏
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aplzzz continue soon and plzzz pm me for the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
very nice update😊...loved how dilshad & asad behaved with tanveer ha ha...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its just awsm superb update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. Continue soon.

Dee

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