Always with you!!! AsYa FF #1 - Parts 1 to 30 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful! Like how she is being so possesive... hihihi do continue!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes my sixth update...second one for today...hope this is just like what we all want to happen...😊

Part 6:

Asad made an excuse to Zoya and went to a public telephone booth nearby.

Asad: Hello, Listen everything is ready right?? Okay I shall reach in 20 minutes. I shall use the short cut. I will send Zoya home now only. I am coming. Bye!

He came to Zoya who finished having her ice cream.

Asad: Zoya, I will get a taxi and you leave home. I have some work. Once it's done, I will reach home.

Zoya: Allah Miyaa, what's wrong with you?? What work do you have this late night???? It might rain also. Listen, You do those work tomorrow, let's leave (in a commanding tone)

Asad (shouted): Zoyaaa!!! I have said you not to do this wife type behavior with me. I am not a kid. I know how to take care of myself. You go home now. I can't explain each and every thing to you.😡

Zoya looked at him with tears filling her eyes.😔

He called out to a taxi and signaled her to get in and gave her the home keys.

He went in the front and said the driver in a low tone: Listen, this is the address (giving two notes), drop her at home safely.

Then he peeped at her seated at the back, she just turned her face from him angrily. The taxi left. Asad too got inside his car.

While Asad was driving he said himself: Bacchii!!! Cries immediately at anything!!!! (And he smiled)🤪

Zoya in the taxi (hurt): Allah Miyaa, whats wrong with Mr. Khan??? He has short term romance loss or what?? At times, he behaves romantically like Shahrukh Khan and at times he becomes Gabbar Singh!!!🤣 What does he think of himself??? He can tell me anything whenever he wants??? I hate him... (After a five second gap) not actually!!!❤️

Location: Beach House

She reached home. When Zoya was about to pay the taxi driver, he said Asad gave him the fare already and handed a note to Zoya.

Zoya: How dare you??? Giving me love letter???😡

Taxi Driver (to be on the safe side): Areeyy BEHEN JIII!!! 😆Your husband asked to give this to you..

Saying so, he drove off. Zoya opened the note;

"You need not wait till I come. Just come inside"

Zoya: Allah Miyaa, what's wrong with this man???? He has written as if he is inside the house. Mr. Buddhu Ahmed Khan!! Doesn't know to write to communicate also. By the way who wants to wait for him? If he comes late, he will sleep outside the door...huh!!!😆

She opened the door, and stood mesmerized over there. The house was beautifully decorated with lanterns and red balloons all over the floor. ❤️She was walking through it wondering what is happening, when she spotted a pink basket over the table. She went to it and saw a dalmatian puppy in it...😊

She took the basket in her hand and started stroking the puppy's head with a smile in her face.

She exclaimed, "What a cute puppy!!"😊

She saw a note tied to the puppy's neck. She took it and opened it. It was written "Mujhse Milo"

She remembered what she had said to Dhurandar Bhatavdekar about her and Asad's fake first meeting and how she said similar to this.

She blushed and asked the puppy lovingly: Kahaan milo???☺️

The puppy ran towards the room near the backyard. Zoya opened the door and met with a shower of rose petals over her. She enjoyed the shower with her dimpled smile and the found the room to be decorated with pink roses all over along with her photo frames all over the room.❤️

Zoya: Allah Miyaa, what's happening here??? Am I dreaming or something??? Whatever stories I said that day to Mr. Dhurandar, is happening for real here???? My favorite pink roses!!! (She said impressed)

She found a table with a candle in the middle and all her favorite dishes including pizza, cheese cake, kachori which ultimately brought a smile to her face and she found a note too...

Zoya: Allah Miya, this looks like a treasure hunt!! How much adventurous!!!😊

She read the note "Look to your right"

She turned to find a board over there, with some writing in it which read,

"My life was a black and white picture till the day I saw you in the mazaar. You brought colour to my life Zoya. I still have the picture of your beautiful face I saw the first time, engraved in my heart. I am unable to tell these things looking at your eyes as I completely get lost in them" (MITWA MOMENT)

She gave a shy smile and moved to the next board nearby with writing in it.

"What I felt about you before is not the same what I feel about you now...I always wanted you to be away from me before, but I can't spare a minute's separation from you now. You taught me to listen to my heart and not my brain. I never knew when you became Zoya from Miss Farooqi in my life. May be it was because of that special feeling I have towards you"❤️

She rushed towards to the next board desperately to read the next,

"Your importance became evident for me when you almost died in Mangalpur. I came to know that Asad Ahmed Khan is just a lifeless body without Zoya. That special feeling towards you became stronger from that day. I started enjoying your antics which I used to hate once. I even enjoyed your jealousy towards...well I don't want to tell the name and make your smiling face an angry one!!!"😉

Zoya laughed at that sentence, and turned to search the next board and she bumped into Asad and he caught her by her waist (MITWA MOMENT)

Her saree fluttered in the breeze with her hair brushing Asad's face. He moved her hair to the backside of her ear.Asad brought her face closer to hers.❤️

Asad: I will give you the answer for your questions today Zoya. Why I wanted you to stay back here, why I stopped you at the airport and wore a ring in front of everybody, why I rushed to save you from the electric shock, why I did all the marriage rituals with you portraying it to be a false one, why I said to your Aapi, that everything is true, why I married you..

Zoya looked at him emotionally with tears in her eyes and with a question also.

Asad continued: I have only one word answer for all these questions. LOVE!!❤️ It was because of the love I had towards you.

He cupped her face and said, "I LOVE YOU ZOYA"❤️❤️❤️

A tear escaped Zoya's eyes as she finally heard what she wanted to. In her satisfied happiness she hugged Asad and he too hugged back her lovingly.🤗

He released her from his hold, and took a bouquet of pink roses and went on one knee and extended the bouquet to her.

Asad: Will you accept my love Zoya? Will you be with me in all circumstances of my life? As Ammi had said, will you complete my incomplete life??? Will you be with me always irrespective of what happens? Will you give me the love which I had been longing for since childhood??? (He asked her with tears in his eyes) (SAD VERSION OF MITWA)

Zoya emotionally took the bouquet from his hand and extended her hand to him and he stood up.

She cupped his face and exclaimed: Mr. Khan, even if I didn't love you till now, I would have fell in love with you this moment. Do you think I would reject your love, this love which no one has ever showed me till now??? I always expected you to tell me what's in your heart. But I never expected you to tell me this way. I will fulfill all your conditions Mr. Khan. MUJHE ASAD AHMED KHAN QUBOOL HAI "❤️

Asad smiled and placed her hands close to his heart.

Zoya: Okayy, so this was the reason for you rude behavior some time ago??? (Pointing to the decorations) Such a dramebaaz you are Mr. Khan!!😊

Asad: Only you know to make plans with Raabert???😉

Zoya smiled looking down.

Asad: I have two requests from you. Will you do it???

Zoya: Kya hai Mr. Khan??

Asad: First one, please tell Ammi that I expressed my feelings to you and give your
feedback of my proposal to her. She thinks I am a useless duffer.😭

Both of them broke into laughter listening to it.😆

Zoya (laughing): Aur, doosra???

Asad: I want you to tell me "I love you Asad".❤️

Zoya blushed and turned to go away, when he pulled her back and hugged her from the
back.

Asad whispered near her ears: You have to tell me Zoya!! I won't release you till that.Kabse intezaar kar raha hoon main!!!

Zoya turned to him, and looked into his eyes and said him "I LOVE YOU ASAD" and kissed him on his cheek and he returned back one on her dimpled cheek as well.❤️

As if even the angels were happy at this moment, it started raining.

Asad took Zoya's hand and ran with her to the backyard of their house, located near the beach and pushed Zoya in the rain. She started circling in the rain (just as in their Sangeet)

They shared a passionate dance for the song "Raabta".❤️

Asad lifted her up lovingly and they went to their room. The rain poured down to earth happily signifying the wonderful beginning of a madly-in-love couple's life.😊

That's it for now people...my next update shall take time because I am leaving to India for my semester vacation...so I might not be able to give updates much...that's why I thought to end with a lovely scene❤️...And yes this ff doesn't end here...i shall come up with more Romantic tracks...in the upcoming updates😊 Please do comment your reviews!!!

Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
such an amazing proposal,simply wow!! n dat request..calling ammi..n tell her about d proposal!! dat was jus awesome ;-) <3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
back to back updates...and i loved it...❤️

wat a proposal...love asya...

u are awesome...so well written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I'm melting right here!! GAHHH!!
I think I want Asad Ahmed Khan for myself. The proposal was so romantic and AWESOME!! ☺️
and please do pm me when u update.
Edited by haro170 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awwwiiieee innni cute updt
chooo chweeettt!!
how I wsh asad would propose her d same way he did in ur story!!
it ws sooo beautifully riitten! marvellous!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
tnx dea 4 D PM!!
iv jst got it aftr posting d cmmnt!!
tnxx aloott!!
btw I would again love to say tht d updt ws no less thn PERFECT!!
it wss awwwsmmm n sooo romantic!!
hattts offf!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
That was beautiful!!!!!!! Omg I loved it sooo much!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
I loved this...pls update soon...and pm me when you update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
tat was amazing... waiting for ur next update >>>

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