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Manpreet23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: webuser7
Very nice, Bheegi. Today's episode was disappointing. Tomorrow looks like its gonna get worse. So, enjoyed reading some halke moments between AsYa in your OS. Umm, bruschetta! Yummy!!

Can I be presumptuous to give you some future ideas:
Honeymoon Pe Jaana Pade Toh?
Shopping Ke Liye Jaana Pade Toh?
PicnicPe Jaana Pade Toh?
Gaadi Beech Raaste Band Pade Toh?
Jungle Mein Kho Gaye Toh?
Movie DekhneJaana Pade Toh?
Game night - Game KhelnaPade Toh?
Office PartyJaana Pade Toh?
Asad sick, Zoya nursing him: Akdu Patient / Hot Nurse Ko Jhelna Pade Toh?
Zoya helping him with some tech issue at work. : Office Office Khelna Pade Toh?
You've probably thought of most of it already!

😆😆

Office office khelna pade toh 🤣

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: webuser7
Very nice, Bheegi. Today's episode was disappointing. Tomorrow looks like its gonna get worse. So, enjoyed reading some halke moments between AsYa in your OS. Umm, bruschetta! Yummy!!

Can I be presumptuous to give you some future ideas:
Honeymoon Pe Jaana Pade Toh?
Shopping Ke Liye Jaana Pade Toh?
Picnic Pe Jaana Pade Toh?
Gaadi Beech Raaste Band Pade Toh?
Jungle Mein Kho Gaye Toh?
Movie Dekhne Jaana Pade Toh?
Game night - Game Khelna Pade Toh?
Office Party Jaana Pade Toh?
Asad sick, Zoya nursing him: Akdu Patient / Hot Nurse Ko Jhelna Pade Toh?
Zoya helping him with some tech issue at work. : Office Office Khelna Pade Toh?
You've probably thought of most of it already!

😆 😆

yup... awesome tittle... you should consider... agree

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

Tannu isn't going anywhere for a while so yeah bring no your writings!:D Your writing makes me feel better!:)

ya.. i comfort myself...with all the stories... i dont want waste time with tanveer... track

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smily21

@smily21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

feels like its a relief after past 2 episodes..

loved the way you wrote this part...

"Zoya walked out of the bathroom in a light blue chiffon churidaar suit with dangling earrings and beautiful dupatta lacing her neck. Asad couldn't help noticing her simple but elegant look. By now, Zoya had learnt to gauge how pretty she looked by his eye expressions. Those familiar dreamy looks with droopy eyelids were the best compliments she could receive from her husband. She knew he would never say anything and she was alright with that. He was capable of messing up a perfect compliment with his words; his eyes never lied unlike his words."