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PART 4
Khan residence:

Asad's mind was reeling,he had called Zoya again and again and again and searched for her in every possible place he could think of,even called Ayaan but he hadnt been able to find her anywhere.Where could she be? "Zoya...if only I had listened to you,If only I had trusted your judgment it wouldnt have come to this." She was missing and he was to blame.Indirectly he had put her in danger again and again,his heart caught in his throat as thought of what could have happened if Tanveer had been successful in her endeavours.

A Mazar in Bhopal:

Zoya was distressed and in a terrible dilemma. This was the place he had first seen her,the place she had taken refuge in when she was in distress. And here she was again. "Allah miya ab sirf aap hi mujhe rah dikha sakte hai.Aapko toh pata hi hai ki main Ajmer Sharif man ki shanti paane ke liya gayi thi aur aapke sahare ek faisla lene gayi thi. Maine apne dil par pathar rakhke Mr khan aur mera alag hona maan hi liya that ki Tanveer ka sach mere samne aa gaya. Iss duniya mein daggabaz bhare pade hai. Ek ye dil,jo ek baar pyaar kar le to khud ko dagga dekar kissi aur ki taraf kheecha chala jaata hai,ek ye man jo kabhi dil ki baat manta hi nahi,ek Asad jisne mujhe dagga kabhi diya hi nahi par kisi aur daggabaaz ke jaal mein khud phas gaye. Mera dil toh kehta hai ki main sab kuch hul kar Mr Khan ko maph kar doon par mera atma samaan yahi kehta ki nahi Zoya nahi,unhone har mauke par tumhe galat theraaya aur tanveer par vishwas kkiya,yeh bhi toh ek tarak ki dagaahbaazi hai.Main karoon toh kya karoon,Allah miya mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai,main karoon toh kya karoon.She heard someone speak but she did not dare to hope it was who she thought it was.
"Mujhe meri Zoya waapis kar do,woh hai toh main hoon,woh nahi toh kuch nahi."She opened her eyes to see the man himself Asad Ahmed Khan sitting opposite her and praying,she felt a wave of shock go through her as she realized he was crying and in his hand he held the same red dupatta she had worn on her head when he had first seen her here. Her head and face were covered and so he had not recognized her.A scene of the past recreated with roles reversed. And so the two sat in the same scene and prayed,strangers at the time but now anything but that.They prayed for their love that was lost and found in fear of losing it again,they prayed for each other and to each other hoping somehow,by some strange miracle they could be heard by each other and be together after all the trouble they had borne.He continued talking and she listened silently.Bina koi kaaran,sirf kuch matlabi logon ki wajah se hamara parivar toot gaya aur uske saath saath hum bhi.Meri Zoya ke saath yeh na insafi mat hone do,Mujhe meri Zoya wapis lauta do,ab uski zindagi mein aur dard nahi seh payegi woh,main sehne nahi doonga usse. "Maine usse bahut dard diya hai aur iska dard mujhme taa-umra rahega,agar woh mujhse saari umra nafrat se pesh aaye yeh bhi mujhe manzoor hai bas mujhe meri Zoya sahi salaamat wapis lauta do." With those words,she felt the black cage of betrayal,pain,doubt and anger unlock itself and set her heart free. Free to to care for him,adore him,trust him,love him and give herself to him completely. His few words of genuine pain,love and honesty had set her free.


As Asad sat in the mazar desperately praying and hoping for her to be alright and for her to return to him,he felt a strange feeling as though she was somewhere around him.He continued to pray for her safety as the fear of losing her consumed him and he wept and sobbed for his love and his life,his Zoya.He opened his eyes and felt an explosion of joy in his heart as he saw her sitting in front of him with love in her eyes...for him? He dared not hope for that but he felt relief wash over him as he realised she was safe and well.
(They continue to look at each other like two lovers who have finally found each other after a long search)
(Song plays,tujhmein rab dikhta hain(male) Asads POV)

Na kuch poocha Na kuch manga
Tune dil se diya jo liya
Na kuch bola na tola
Muskura ke diya jo diya
Tu hi dhoop tu hi chau
Tu hi apna paraya
Aur kuch na jana
Bas itna hi janu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun

Sajde Sar jhukta hai (Asad bows his head down asking
for her forgiveness through his eyes and
they both walk out of the mazar)
Yaara mein kya karun

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karun

Khan Residence:

Asad is looking at Zoya with love in his eyes as she eats on the dining table,the minute she looks at him he lowers his eyes in guilt.He takes the spoon and begins to feed her as she looks at him eyes filled with astonishment and happiness.Once they are done,Asad hands her a gift,It is a long red dress. She is reminded of a day in the past. "Mr Khan,dekho yeh dress kitni pretty hai,kya main aapke office party mein yeh pehen sakti hoon?" "Miss Faarooqui,Ammi ne kaha hai iss liye mujhe aapko leke jaana pad raha hai,the least you can do is wear something decent aur kuch aisa jo humare culture ko suit karta ho." "You remember"...she said amazed."Yes,I do...I remember the excitement in your eyes when you set your eyes on this dress and the excitement leaving your eyes as you took in my harsh words"..."I know I've hurt you a lot and so I may be asking for more than I deserve,but I would be honoured if you were to wear this and spend this evening with me,just this once."

Zoya wore the dress and came out into the hall but Asad was nowhere to be seen,instead on the dining table there was a pink coloured basket in which there lay a small dalmation puppy and around its collar a note which said :
Meet me on the terrace
-Asad
"Actually mein bahut sporty type ki ladki hoon,
toh ek din mein jogging kar rahi thi,jogging karte karte maine
dekha ek bahut hi cute sa pink colour
ka basket hai usme bahut hi cute sa puppy hai"
She smiled to herself as she thought of how she had cooked up this story to convince Mr Dhurundhar that they were indeed in love.She stroked the puppy and played with it for a bit before proceeding to the terrace with the puppy in the basket.She burst into laughter as she saw the next sight before her.On the steps there lay pizza boxes which said,DO NOT PICK UP,THESE SHALL STAY HERE FOR AS LONG AS ZOYA FAAROOQUI WANTS THEM TO STAY. Ofcourse,Asad ever cynical and boring had tried to make the story as realistic as possible.

"Aur phir main khada ho gaya
jo pizza boxes Miss Faarooqui ne zameen par
pheke the woh maine uski sahi jagah yaani
dustbin mein dal diya."

Still smiling to herself she stepped out onto the terrace to find a scene that took her breath away.The entire terrace was decorated with pink roses and there in the middle of the terrace floor was Asad down on one knee looking at her with...was that love in his eyes? Before she could absorb the sight before her,a gust of wind blew over her and and she was met with a long and continuous rain shower of rose petals.
She walked towards him in a dreamlike trance as he stood up and held a hand out to her as the song bol na halke halke began to play.

"Aur maine dekha ki saara room pink roses se
sajaa hua that,my favourite colour aur
Mr Khan room ke beech mein down on one knee aur phir unhone kahaa..."

"Aur phir music bajne laga aur Mr Khan na kahaa..."

"Zoya...I love you,Maine tumhi se pyaar kiya hai jabse maine pyaar ko jaana,pyaar ko samjha hai,sirf tumhi se pyaar kiya hai.Aaj main apne aap ko iss layak nahi samajhta ki tum mujhe haan kar do,aur mujhse pyaar kar paao lekin agar tumne mujhe haan keh di toh main apne aap ko duniya ka sabse khush naseeb insaan samjhoonga aur main saari zindagi koshish karoonga tumhare dil mein bhi utna hi pyar jagane ke liya jo ki meri dil mein tumhare liya hain. "Kis baat ke liya haan Mr Khan?"Zoya heard herself say in the midst of her joy and amazement. Asad went down on one knee and said..."Zoya Faarooqui,Will you marry me?" Zoya heart filled with joy as she said,I love you too Asad,always have,when we met,when we fought,when we made up and fought again,through it all I have loved you and only you. "Asad fearful heart quivered with hope as he heard her utter those word that were like a balm to his aching and fear filled soul. She loved him? Inspite of it all,she still loved him?Could he dare to believe that such joy was to come his way? "Yes" he heard her say..."I will marry you." And in that glorious moment the two hearts that had been yearning for each other met in warm embrace holding onto each other as all the pain in their hearts melted away in the union of their two souls now one soul dwelling in two bodies forevermore.
(Song plays tujh mein rab dikhta hai (male))

Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon
Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu


Khan Residence,a few months later:

Quazi: Zoya Faarooqui tumhara nikaah Asad Ahmed Khan,Walid, Rashid Ahmed Khan se tayee hua hai.Kya tumhe yeh Nikaah qubool hai?

Zoya:Qubool hai!

Asad:Qubool hai!

An so ends the tale of a love that was intended by fate,a match made in heaven,they fought,they cried,they loved,they lost and found themselves and each other again in their glorious love, finally accepting each other wholly in utterance of those two simple yet deeply meaningful and powerful words:
"QUBOOL HAI"

(Note:Im not Muslim so please forgive any wrong portrayal on my part as it is due to ignorance,so sorry for that)
Edited by Ronz - 12 years ago
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Hey that was superb fantastic and awesome what else can I say the story was really good it's a shame you ended it you did a fantastic job keep it up 👏
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awesome continue soon plz pm when you update next
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wow such a dreamy update!!

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