Asad Zoya OS: Betrayal - Page 3

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Scene 2 : Asad and zoya are thinking over the situation in their rooms.

(Asads Room)

Asad : (got his face in hands and hes tearing up) main aise kaise kar sakta hoon,maine toh tanveer ko aisi nazaron se kabhi nahin dekha!(expression gets even sadder) Aur aaj maine zoya ko kho diya (puts his hands over his face again and tears fall into them)

(Zoyas room)

Zoyas: Main ab tak yakeen nahi kar sakti ki Asad ne aisa kiya. Haan tanveer ne unhe kuch pilaaya,par main iss baat ko toh bhool nahi sakti ki (pauses and face contorts on pain) un dono ne ek saath raat bitaayi hai. (Burst into tears) Nahi mera dil unse nafrat karne ki ijaazat deta hai aur nahi mera atma samaan unse pyaar karne ki. Ab kuch nahi ho sakta. (crys into her pillow)

(song playing as they weep for their lost love)
Ek galti:
Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hu
Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hu
Ek aakhri mauka de mujhe
Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan manta hu..
(this is the link for the whole song)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HVnO-2ge9yc


Scene 3: Asad and Zoyas POV
Zoyas POV:

Zoya woke up the next morning with a headache,today she just couldnt go out and face asad and tanveer,she would leave now and come back in the night and go to sleep. She couldnt bear to see them together.When she used to hear of women who forgave their husbands or boyfriends for cheating she would be disgusted but the thought of living without Asad just killed her and they werent even married.Her heart was being torn apart and there was nothing anyone could do about. She needed some time to think and most importantly she needed to be away from him."Allah miya ab aap hi meri madad kar sakte hai"

Asads POV:
Where was she? Ammi,najma were sitting at the table and tanveer in the room but where was SHE? He couldnt even ask ammi or najma because they didnt know anything about what was going on!He finished his breakfast and went into his room and tried to work.
Hope flared up in his heart as he heard a knock on the door."Mr khan",he imagined her saying "Darwaaza kholiye na!" and then talking to herself "issi baat pe ek sheyr arz hai":
Darwaze khulte hai logon ko milane ke liye
Darwaze khulte hai logon ko milane ke liye
Kuch kamro ke faslon ko kum karne ke liye
Kuch dilon ki dooriyon ko mitane ke liye

"Shukriya! Shukriya!"

Another knock brought him out of his dream that was to be unfullfilled,it was ammi who had knocked to tell him that zoya had gone to ajmer sharif and would be back in a few days. Okay she was coming back,thank god for that. That would give him some time to figure out this mess he had created.

(He goes out in the hall and is reminded of all Zoyas shayris and her playfulness. He goes to make coffee for himself when he remembers how she teased him about his black bitter coffee and feels a stinging in his heart,he puts down the coffee in frustration) Is this what it feels like to miss someone? He wondered.(song plays) (this is the link if you havent heard it : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nHtiUCMJqbE )

Choti choti baatein
Yun hi aate jaate
Yaadein sehlaake
Jaati hai

Sees the place where she danced in an orange sari to make him remember the night.
Goes back to his room and remembers when she said" mere dil mein ek bharosa rehta hai ki Mr Khan hai" Tries to sleep when he remembers how they were laughing the night where they had bhaang and sees her smiling and talking of her dimple.

Raaton ko sihraane
Baasi muskaane
Mujhko sulaake
Jaati hai

Gets up and goes to the place where he has kept her earing safe and takes it out realising that even though he made himself out to be irritated with her shayris and eating habits and craziness,he would do anything to be able to hear one her shayaris right now or watch her as she ate her cold leftover pizza and smiled at him mischievously.

Then he remembers the pain in her eyes when she found out about tanveer and him and and their convo,"ab kuch nahi ho sakta"

Maine nahi jaana
Tune nahi jaana
Jaane anjaane jo hua
Galti nahi hai teri
Galti nahi hai meri
Phir bhi gilein kyun hai
Tujhko bhulaana paaon
Tujhko bhulaana paaon
Yeh silsilein kyun hai

"Zoya main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta par main jaanta hoon ki main tumhare layak nahin hoon." Sits down and begins to cry.

Sab kuch wahi hai
Par kuch kami hai.
Teri aahatein nahi hai
nahi hai...

*End scene*

CVs should learn something from this. Yahi scene e dal dain drama main. Asad seriously needs a reality check.

Asad was going to Tanus room to speak to her when he heard her speaking on the phone to someone and laughing,strange considering that just a few minutes ago she was crying and apologizing to him because Zoya had left on her account.He was on the verge of knocking when he froze as he heard what she was saying"Maine jammy ko apne jaal mein is kadar phasa diya hai ki ab woh chahkar bhi bahar nahi nikal sakta,usse toh lagtaa hai ki Zoya galat hai aur main sahi aur yeh bhi ki humne raat guzaari ek saath jo humnein nahi ki,hahahaha(Tanveer talks about all the times she tried to kill them and zoya accidently saved them and all the times she tried to murder zoya),ab finally Zoya bhi raste se hat gayi aur ab mein tanveer banungi iss rayeez khandaan ki bahu" Asad slammed the door open and saw her recoil in fear as she realised her mistake. "Phoophi?" "Najma" Asad heard Zoya call out,she was back he thought joyfully as his heart skipped a beat. His thoughts were brought back to Tanveer as he walked closer to her in fury and she tried to defend her self. He caught hold of her and dragged her out into the hall and said to tan veer "tell her the truth or else I will have you behind bars for attempt to murder faster than you can say Zoya." And so Zoya listened wide eyed as Tanveer revealed herself and Asad listened shocked at all that had gone on without him knowing. After which Asad promptly called the police and handed Tanveer over,disgusted that he had once called her a friend.

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If he doubts her again, he definitely needs to hear this. Very well written. Loved it!

Ahhh where is she? I have a sinking feeling... Please continue soon!