{|AsYa| OS: I'm A Star} - Page 2

U made me cry, wot a story. Loved it so nicely written. 👍🏼

It was soo beautiful it made a bit sad man!

u... u made me cry... i hate u for doing this...

Thats soo sad but well written

I know it was sad and emotional but I did like it. it was very well written.

Awww it is damn Beautiful ...hats off to you darling ..my eyes were breaming with tears bluring while reading

Thanks for wonderful os ..
.love you

I forgive..u for the injustice you did to zoya... but i like father daughter convo... beautiful

very sweet and beautiful well done! it brought out all sorts of emotions and im not at all an emotional person. and now let's just hope tannu's secret comes out before everyone before anything happens to zoya or anyone

*sniff* 😭 For a while there, I thought the girl with the pretty brown eyes brimming with tears was Zoya.
Asad. Oh Asad. I love him sooo much. How heart breaking to see the one he loves dying in front of his eyes and that too by a person he trust.
What timing you have Faiza. Last night I saw a show with a similar concept. It was heart wrenching. I cried buckets and now this. This depression is going to get to me, I tell you.
Ok ... getting back to Asad. I adored it when he said those Allah Miyas and Had hai.😳 I read those lines again just to be sure.
And Ameena. Her parent's angel. I really try to dismiss this idea but I cannot help but think of this as a continuation of 'A precious gift'. I want to keep that OS as a happy and satisfied one but this thought keeps coming that this is the same Ameena only grown up.
U really showed the relation of Ameena-Asad wonderfully. The bond a father daughter share is a beautiful and bitter-sweet one and I am so glad that you portrayed it.
And lastly Zoya, the star. I see the star as a reflection of Asad's idea of Zoya being 'the roshni in his andhera'. She was the twinking star in the darkness of the night. ⭐️ The star that bridged the temporary gap between the father-daughter, like always.
Lol. I realized I wrote a long comment of useless remarks. But there you go - I loved it. 👏 A sad one but it touches you. And yes you were right, it has a type of sweetness and I totally enjoyed it.

YOU LUCKY GIRL. I am sooo jealous of you.
How come u finish your exams wen me no finish? *pouts* No fair! 😆
But hope you did great. *sigh* Soon my day will come... the day of freedom!
And lastly I apologize to have not commented. I read all of them; the last part of Under the Rain (You must write the epilogue), update of Jungle Mein Mangal and the second installment of your FF.
All of them were a treat to read! You see I read them all from my mobile and its pretty hard to type up a good comment from it. Hence.. I rest my case. Sowie! 😕