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StonerGirL

@StonerGirL

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

I have a habit of doing this...each time things don't go as i wished for them to (unless they go even better) i make up my own version of what i believe happened and stick to that...sort of like small OS's but i never pen em down...simply bcuz im too lazy...but this time...I CUD NOT HELP MYSELF...so here i am...with my first piece of writing on ASYA..

It basically starts off from the hospital spoiler..now i dunno what tht is...but what happened here...in my version is...the MS...followed by a fire...which zoya got saved frm as well...by billo and billos in the hospital however since the docs ddnt allow them to stay overnight the khans came back home EXHAUSTED...and in this asad DOES suspect billi...and so the much hated last scene of the MS was a drama...k so here it goes

Late tht Night:: Everyone was tired so they all had gone straight to bed after returning home::

Asad lay awake in bed..no matter how much he tossed and turned'sleep was smthing he wud definitly be deprived of tonight'the events of the night'jus didnt seem to leave his mind'zoya'how unbelievably beautiful she looked tonight'just like a doll as always'she was a doll infact'his doll'the happiness tht ayaan gave him by coming'then dancing with zoya'wht cud be more perfect than tht'only he knew how badly he wanted time to jus stop right there'but it didn't and instead'and then the horrible flashes of what followed came rushing back before his eyes replacing the previous beautiul ones of their sun zara dance'the chandelier'zoya on the ground'the fact tht it was just ONE SECOND'if not for tht one second..he wudnt be laying in bed right now'rather'and then the fire... he sighed sitting up'he couldn't even bring himself to go there'only he knew what went through him at that very moment'the thought of loosing her forever'a lifetime full of darkness'without her'without her laugh'her smile'her voice'without those eyes'tht had nearly become the reason to his existence'and without any delay'he found himself walking towards her room..his heart racing'for a reason which even he couldn't understand'he KNEW she was okay'she was in his house..safe'in her room'possibly asleep'but then again'only he knew that none of this was over yet'and if what he thought was true'even though he was praying with his LIFE it wasn't'then this was possibly just the beginning'he reached her room finally'still debating between his heart and mind'if the step he should take would be necessary or not'or would be right or not'and with a trembling hand..he slowly reached up to turn the knob'when he heard loud raindrops crash against the kitchen window'he looked over to see the window was open'.and the rain was coming through'so before he went to check on her'he rushed over to close the window'however as soon as he reached the window'the sight that caught him'made his heart nearly slip out frome the sole of his feet this time'this girl definitly would be the death of him today'if not from fear of loosing her'then with the simplest smile that could possibly adorn her face.

Zoya exhausted from the same questions rushing through her head'to which she had no answers'and had no hope of finding answers to'exhausted from running away from mr.khan every time he tried talking to her'exhausted from two near death experiences..exhausted from the jerks'twists'pulls'pushes'life was throwin at her'she didn't know WHAT to do'who to turn to'she was helpless. she couldn't help but hate herself each time she saw aapi or phoopi happy..she couldnt help but get carried away with them'in the rasams'in the excitement'just by the mention of her being asads bride'which people constantly reminded her of day'and night'she couldnt' help but reach cloud nine'by his touches'his eyes'his actions'that dance'and a small smile spread on her face unknowingly'as she remembered the dance'not wanting to remember anything else'especially not his rants of all this being fake'of the reminder tht the only reason she was this frustrated or stressed was because of him'and him not knowing what he wants'one minute he hugs her the next minute he was with tanveer'and she cud feel her body heating up even under the cold raindrops'she sighed'reminding herself she swore to forget about it ALL for tonight..and breathe'leave it upto fate'to destiny'why worry herself sick'when clearly nothing was in control'so she forced her mind back to the dance'his smile'his touches'his eyes'those words'and within a matter of a few seconds'the same'small smile was back on her lips'as she found herself swaying around silently'under tha rain'to the music from her ipod'her eyes closed shut..and atlast she was at peace'she was happy again'she was zoya faroouqi again'in her own lil bubble of happiness while the rest of the world was on fire.

But how could that bubble survive'when smbdy named mr.khan was around to bring the fire to her'no matter how far she ran from it.

But this time..it was something she wasn't expecting..AT ALL..(even though it was all she ever dreamt of)

SO need many likes and comments to continue..trrust me its far better than well get with tannu lurking around in QH..

Edited by StonerGirL - 12 years ago

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niki_12

@niki_12

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing! Very much needed right now! How I wish the cv's would give us scenes like that...even the introspection!

Please continue and pm when you update if possible. Thanks :)

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful start. Very much needed. Continue soon.

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hmmm that was awesome!
continue soon.

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StonerGirL

@StonerGirL

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

PART 2::

Zoya felt smbdy snake their arm around her waist…and grip onto her tightly..she felt her body jerk forward and collide into smthing rock solid..while she felt fingers slightly brush against her cheek…for a bit…before running up her spine…and resting right at the tips of her wet hair..lazily..running in a slow…painful manner thru the tips of her hair…simply against the cloth of her jumper…even though she had recognized who it was simply by the first touch…she still couldn't bring herself to believe it was actually him…and forget tht…WHAT was he doing…she slowly opened her eyes as the breath tht had been caught in her throat escaped as a small cough…before becoming uneven again….and only once she realized tht he had begun swaying around with her slowly as well…did she finally lift her eyes to meet his…to ask him wht he wanted…wht he was doing…but the minute her eyes met his…nothing but the usual happened…she drowned in them…in the look they had…as they stared deep into hers…and while they continued swaying..drowning in each others eyes…zoya failed to realize when her arms went around his waist…and remained there…nor did she realize…one of her headphone had gone missing and was now resting in his ear…as he danced with her.

For asad the minute her eyes met his..there was no more questioning if this was the right step or not…it somehow felt as if it was the ONLY right step…and the ONLY thing that should be done…nothing could be more right than this…and before his mind could even question his hearts thinking..his thoughts found themselves to his lips…and fell to her ears…

Asad: (barely a whisper) do u trust me? (and he felt her grip around his waist loosen…her feet stopped moving…and her smile had vanished…but her eyes didnt part from his…rather they were staring deeper..as if searching for smthing….answers to her confusion actually) (Before she could distance herself from him though…like he feared she would…he pulled her even closer to himself…with a slight push on her upper back where he played with the tips of her hair previously..and kept a firm hold on her…while zoyas eyes became wider..her breathing heavier…there was a slight tremble in her body as she felt his breath on her face)

zoya: (closed her eyes…gripping onto his arms tightly) mr…m….mr…kh…khaaan…

asad: do u trust me…miss faroouqi?? (there was smthing in the way he said it…smthing like a plea…like he NEEDED her to trust him…and she could tell the question meant more…then what she was hearing..and once her eyes found their way back into his…and she saw the look that always reminded her…rather assured her…tht NOTHING wud ever happen to her as long as mr.khan was there...

zoya: never with my heart…(and she felt asads fingers nearly stab into her skin..as she said those words…she winced slightly…and looked up to tell him he was hurting her..but the look on his face..rather in his eyes…SCREAMING "plz dnt say tht" rather begging her…hurt her jus as she knew her words had hurt him…and she cudnt help but to smile a lil…jus 4 words..jus the fact tht she "MIGHT" not trust him hurt him so much…but she cudnt see him hurting so she put an end to his misery by finishing wht she had began saying)

zoya: never with my heart…(her eyes filled with tears) kyunki…past mein apne mera dil itni baar tora haike…(and she cud see the tears brimming in his eyes now…his grip on her was loosening…it looked as if hed nearly loose his balance…his eyes dropped to the ground she sighed…as she ran one of her hands up his arm to his shoulder and clenched it tightly)

zoya:: but i trust u…with my life…completely. (and asads face shot up…shock..surprise…disbelief..yet satisfaction…gratitude…happiness written all over it…his lips formed a trembling smile on his face…as a lone tear made its way down his cheek…SHOCKING zoya..while he removed his hand frm her back and gripped onto her hand tht rested on his shoulder….interwining his fingers with her before locking them TIGHTLY as he rested their hands on his shoulder…it was almost as if…he was preparing her..rather them for what was coming next)

Asad:: Marry me. Now.

Precap:: She read the note while holding onto the beautiful red dupatta it said: Jeans pehenke bhaag mat ayega…dupatta leke aayega…molvi sahab behosh hojayenge