AasYa OS: Interrupted! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: nikki.171

I loved it to the core. I wish I had read the original Maaneet version being a die hard fan myself.
U forgot to change one 'Babaji' to 'Allah Miya' and reading that made me so nostalgic. I miss Geet so much and I am so glad to meet another Maaneetian.
Lol. I realized I too am rambling.
Coming to the story. This was amazing. One of the best I have read. U write brilliantly. From portraying each of their family member to the interaction between Asad and Zoya, everything is picture perfect. I have already fallen in love with your version of the Khan family.
I am having one of those feel good moment after reading this brilliant piece and I would love to read more of ur works preferrably with THIS Khan family ( hint hint :P )
Please PM me for ur future works?
One again. LOVED IT! 👏

oh god! i am embarrassed now. i dont know how that slipped out of my notice. i edited it... THANKS A TON!

lol like i said the other version has a bit of changes. so you are welcome to check it out as well as others of that same pair works.

check your PM 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
This was lovely. The perfect length and loved the whole concept.
The entire concept was so sweet and I love your writing style.👏

Will you continue this OS? Because the readers would love to read more. 😆

Glad I didnt miss this one.Pleaseee continue this?
Cheers. :D
P.S.- Have you written stuff on AsYa before? Do PM the links if you have written before or write in future 😃
Edited by -ARLover- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Loved to the core...
Would luke to read sone more of ur works..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
I love this please write more, Asad is one horny lad.
Very nice and beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
This was such a fun OS, Absolutely loved the whole thing !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Loved it!! You gotta continue this!!!! Hilarious and amazing!!
Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
What a interesting... you did very well... i just roll and laugh.. so good 🤣

are you planning to continue... plz pm me
Edited by Linsie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
okay i'm here again to request to continue please. Its awesome. there's so many roam to continue the story. please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
OMG

I totally loved it
It was exactly what I love man its like wow can't even tell u how much I loved reading it.
It had family, romance,fun, hot and naughty everything eh

Loved it

Ru gonna update or u ended it there
Will she tell him what bet they had?

Plz plz do con and pm if u can plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
OMG I love this OS! So feel-good, light and smile-inducing ❤️ I love love your DP too!

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