AsYa ff: Moments in Time: Last Chapter Pg 55

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

AMAZING! That's all I can say, absolutely amazing

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

The perfect ending :)

Although it was short, it was amazing. Your pulled at my heart and made me tear up. Asad and Zoya's love in this story is nothing short of epic. You know if you wrote a few more chapters, with more gaps filled in, this would make a really nice short novel 😳 You should think about it 😃 (and by gaps I only mean more Asya scenes haha😆)

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milanR

@milanR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Amazingly written 😊

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Indianbuddy

@Indianbuddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

This story pulled so many strings on my heart...this is one of the best pulled off stories I have ever read. This story made me so sad then so happy! You could feel the emotion your reading...so good!

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

i cant believe the story finished..
but the ending was beautiful..
lovelyyy ff... best one i must sayy...
u r an awesum writer.. u made all of us cry literally wen they were not together... but if all is fine if the end is fine.. :D
a very heart touching story about true love...
lovelyyy...