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t1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

I'm not sure whether to laugh at those sending you abuse! Like seriously, I didn't know people did that!
I for one believe that Ayaans going to fall for Zoya in the actual show and I'm excited to see that play out!

Back to your story, I love it!!!
I loved this chapter and how he held her hand and even though at first she was uncomfortable, she now needs his support
And I know in time, they'll both be each others support and Zoya will help him through his pain too!

I know I'm greedy, but ... update soon :))
Can't wait to see where this story's heading!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Great update Faiza!! loved it! Please continue soon!! And sorry for the small comment, reason below!

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CupofCoffeee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Faiza..I love you for the hand holding thing🤗

Super Update...I cannot remember anythin ither than the fact that they hed hands, infact, they are still holding hands, n its to be continued☺️ I wanna read more, wat happens after the presentation gets over n the clients leave☺️

Its clearly visible that Asad wil b thre for her NO MATTER WAT n she feels confident n comfortable wen he is around, moreover, he is with her!! Just a mere hand hold gave him the confidence she cud never regain by herself, she Trusts him sumwhere deep iin her heart but I wish n I hope she soon realizes this😛

This is a great progress in AsYa story...thank u🤗

I feel bad for Ayaan :( Poor guy!!

n I am so curious, who was the guy who wanted Asad n Ayaan to no longer be working together??😲 Was he Ashar?? Or Akshay😲 m waiting how its revealed!!

Plz plz update regularly😃 Waiting eagerly for the next part babes🤗

P.S. - I am shocked to read about the PMs😲 Love Ya Faiza 🤗

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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Nishita Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

This is a very interesting story..Im loving every bit of it..Please continue..

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SeRene.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

loved it!!!!!!!!!!! continue sooon!! 😃

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

I am liking this better every day, please continue soon

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princee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

superb yr really nice..amazing...asya hand in hand..waooo.continue soon & update soon...

pari

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Rumz_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Umm hi. I normally don't comment on people's ff's nd stories, reason I am just plain lazy. And neither do I read any asya ff's or stories which do not have the original storyline as in the actual show. Hope u are getting me. But ur story just made me want to read more. Trust me u are an awesome writer. I really luv ur story line nd the way u present ur thoughts. It's not very easy. Well I just wanted to tell u dat it's awesome nd hope u cont soon. I luv this asad who cares for zoya ONLY

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Loved the update... My stalking tendency has increased pretty high just because of this fiction.😆 I keep looking for an update and when its their I have a smile on my face...

As usual loved the update , amazingly written... I was so scared that zoya would leave.. But, Ayaan stopped her.. Even if the reason he gave her may have hurt her pretty very much.. She must have felt like someone stabbed her once again.. But, then its for her good...

She was so very nervous.. Anyone would have been. I mean you cannot except a person to give a presentation without preparation.. But, it was not that she ain't having knowledge.. Its just that she was nervous.. And, then Asad helped her. Just a touch of his and she was calmed.. Such a small effort and she was fine.. I loved that part.. She gained her confidence once again and this shows that come what may Asad would stand by her anytime.. He'll protect her , guide her, sooth her... and be with her.. Loved it.

As far as Ayaan- Zoya track is considered.. I don't think that is even possible because this an Asad- Zoya fiction with other characters playing an important role of their own.. You have mentioned it already. So why to complaint. I love the way the story is going.. Just perfect.

Do continue asap.

Dee

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deedeez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Awesome update!!.. He held her hand and she let him..😳.. So adorable.. A simple gesture like that and so out of character for Asad..You have no clue how impatiently i wait for these updates...And i wont bug you for now to send me PMs.. I understand they can be a pain..😆