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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Wow so now the triangle begins

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Can't believe her brother could be behind this!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: nupsie
Nice Update Faiza...😛
Plz now start AsYa story soon...😃

n plz dun make me hate Ayan in ur story...I see he is liking her more n more each day!!

n update regularly babes🤗

P.S. - I hav got some thoughts about Giselda's "SIR"...I'll share wid u !!😃

Noopur! 🤗

Thanks a lot sweets i know ure sooo eager to read about AsYa! Il see what i can do to hurry it up! 😆

Aray relax baba. I wont make u hate Ayaan forever.😆

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
OMG I like where this is going 😉 Wonderful update, this story is honestly very intriguing and I'm loving it! 😃

Thank you so much, KulfiBai! I always await your comments! 😳

Originally posted by: Akilla
Now scared...I can truly say that have no idea what's going to happen...and i love it!!! your writing is aweeesome!! Keep writing beautifully and update quickly...plleeezhhh

Hahaha im so glad youre trusting me on this. And liking the story. Thanks a lot! 😳

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
ayaan and asad both are falling for zoya

gosh

that would be hard

wonder wat will asad do if he finds out ayaan likes zoya

well zoya is soi pure and innocent

this story is definately taking a huge turn

plzzz update soon

Well Chapter Black's the name. It has to be twisted and weird 😆

But u wont hate it, i promise.

I hope you like it though 😃

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
Interesting chapter..😉 I guess we have got 3 negative characters till now..

Lets not assume beforehand ;)

Thankyou so much :D

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
great one. Bt i seriously dont want zoyan track

I hear you. But all i can say is trust me! 😃

Originally posted by: awesome
awesome part

Thankyou so much! 😳

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Another brilliant update.

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: sowmy18
nice update!eagerly waiting for ur next part!
dont forget to pm me!😛

Thank you, no i wont 😃

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Finally Zoya has joined Asad's office but this Akshay guy doesn't seem right to me either. With both Ayaan and Asad feeling for Zoya, I wonder what's going to happen next !!

You're all hating Akshay. What did the poor guy do abhi tak? 😆

Originally posted by: Zara_92
OMG Faizu !! Loved the Update 🤗

Is Ayaan falling for Zoya as well ?? 😲
Though I know u won't make Zoyaan happen still but 😛

Loved it soo much !! Update sooon ❤️

Zaraaa! 🤗 thanks a bunch babes! Dont worry, kuch nahi hoga. 😆

Originally posted by: Jassieg
It was interesting chapter. Love to see how she will react to when she comes to know the owner of this company. I wonder what Akshay has in store,..love to read the next chapter..plz post soon.

Thank you so much! Means alot. You shall soon find out 😃

Originally posted by: Endless-LOvE
you are making me go all the way saying:
NO ayaan and zoya please!!!!

anyways it was an awesome update!!
too many mysteries lol
i somehow don't have a good feeling about that guy names akshay!!
and i wonder whose the man with the scar!
wonder what will be zoya's reaction when she comes to know that asad is her boss and ayaan also works there.

continue soon :P
cant wait for the next part :)

Farah<3

Awww Farah! 😆

I knoww you've made that clear but sachi hear me out when i say i promise esa ganda wla nothing will happen. This is important for the story, believe me! 😔

You guys dont get the scar wala man? Whyyy?? I mentioned his name. :(

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: Cindrella3
No. I can't even think of hating you. You are such a wonderful writer. Do continue soon. Waiting eagrly...😊

Awww thank you so much! Im glad you trust me 😃

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Your note kinda assured me and made me happy too that there would be no Zoyaan track ... :)

Anyway fantastic update !!
Wokay !! So Is Akshay a negative person ???

Aha !!! Loving the jealous Asad to the core ... ;)

Yess please stay assured. Nothing that any Quboolian cant handle.

Guess guess guess😆 thankyou so much 😳

Originally posted by: deepthoughts
When I started reading this chapter, I thought Why is this Ayaan thinking about Zoya like that???? because i remembered last time you mentioned there would not be Zayaan track and thought what is this twist now?😡 and at the end when I read about your A/N...i was relieved 😆

Btw...Nice chapter...You write amazingly well...All emotions are very nicely expressed ⭐️...Continue soon...

I am glad my note caused some relief! 😆 stay relieved and whenever u feel weird about Ayana Zoya, think of it 😆 thankyou so much, means alot to me. 😳

Originally posted by: t1234
I'm really loving this story!
And can I just say I love that you update regularly! And you don't make us wait eons for the next part, so please keep that up!
I love your writing style, it's such a pleasure to read and I always look forward to reading what's coming next!

Thank you so much! Im glad you like it so much. It means alot to me. Encourages me alot 😳

Originally posted by: sasir
i am glad u said no zoya-ayan. rest the update is nice. continue soon
isnt ashar was the zoyas brother. but y he bacame her enemy all of sudden.
plz update soon

Yeap. Trust me on that! 😃 thank you so very much! You're one of the very few who gotit right. Ashar is Zoya's brother.

Originally posted by: tvpremi
Amazing update...so a lot of fun coming up...just eagerly waiting for the next update...plz plz update soon...

Thankyou so much! Fun? You could say😆

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl
Awexome update...
They way u write each n every scene n emotions u portray...that superb n fab...
Update soon

Thank you dear. It really means alot to me! 😳

Originally posted by: Linsie

Update soon!!!

Thanks a buch dear <3

Originally posted by: nikki.171
Allah Miya ! I just dont know what to say.

Zoya is such a gem of a person. Despite her plight, she never failed to touch others with her own tenderness. One of the reasons why we love her. And Ayaan - I wonderf how things are gonna lead through with him. Since u've assured us there will be no Zoyaan yet Ayaan seems to have developed some sort of feeling for her - what, that is sth only time and you can tell us.

And Asad. He is a hurt soul and he has got the first signs - feeling 'right' with Zoya.

Now I wonder who this Asher is and why he is after Zoya. Does it have sth to do with the death of her family? The poor thing.

I have a really bad feeling for this guy, Akshay.

Love this update, as usual. Reaally looking forward to the next part and the unraveling of this mystery.

YOU! I missed your comments on my works. How did your exams gooo?

Thank you so much. And im so sad you didnt get who Ashar is. 😔

Believe me on the no Zoyaan part.

Thank you so much for the comment, Nikki <3

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Umm.. So Ayaan is feeling something something for zoya.. Well, she is beautiful, innocent and so very elegant.. Anyone will just fall for her.. Ayaan kya chiz hai.. And, more over they are leaving together... And, he could see how courageous she is, going through so much but still keeping the cheery side.. That is zoya.. Anyone would get attracted to her..

She is all alone.. Just has some memories of her parents, her family.. My heart pains for this poor soul.. Why are these people after her.. What harm has she done to them.. Their is so much yet to reveal and I really can't take it.. You really need to continue asap.

So she is finally working and in the same place where Asad is their.. Good.. It will be full one drama... Love it..

Off course we trust you , you will never bring ayaan and zoya together , that can't ever happen.. I trust you and m just enjoying the story , the way you are narrating.. I don't feel bad if ayaan or else any other guy has a soft corner for zoe.. It happens... I am all happy until I get good Asya scenes.. And, that we receive from this story.

Do continue soon.

Dee

Oh Dee thank you so very much for trusting me! Im glad you enjoy the story! And you nailed it. Zoya is a beautiful woman, Ayaan just feels infatuated to her. Many men would.

Thankyou so muchh!! <3

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
superb...jst too good..i love this hide & seek..pls bring asya scenes...fast..i m waiting

pari

Thankyou and will doo! 😳

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
Faiza! Now I'm really really angry! You forgot to PM me, AGAIN! 😡

Anyway this part was FAB!
Already hate Akshay! And please beg you can we please have more AsYa scenes? Pretty pwease? 😳
Giselda is such a b*tch! Please make her go away!
And who is the man who wants Zoya so bad? He is giving me the creeps yaar! 😔

Babes how could i? I didnt send pm's when u commented 😆

Thankyou s much! Bechara Akshay is hated so much already. 😆 yeah i know. More AsYa coming up.

Thankyouuu! 😳

Originally posted by: Udaya2
I just loveddd d update👏
It was superbly written
And hope AsYa love story start soon😳
No ZoYaan plzz😆
Nd u dint pm me😭
Plz update soon n pm me😊

Thank you so much! And i didnt pm anyone when u commented 😆

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is really a good one...wonder who is tat guy tat always call gisele an ask fr zoya...zoya is just too cute n hw she run around n getting so excited fr her first day of wrk n to imprese the boss...wonder hw will she react when she know tat asad is the boss...wow both asad n ayaan got piss wit tis akshay guy...wonder who is he...ur story is really very interesting...im just glue to it n always waiting fr the updates...it just superb awesome...u should be a writer cause tis is really beautifully written...please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...totally luv it...

Aww was i that unclear? It was Ashar? It doesnt ring a bell? Thank you so much! Im glad you like my work! Bug hug!

Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva
Great update Faiza. This story is very intense. So, love you for writing this 🤗 Is it possible to give another update today?😲😆

Viyaaa! 🤗 thanks a bunch darling, im really glad you like it, sachi! 🤗

It wasnt and so couldnt, sorry 😔 pakka today 😳

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
Faiza! Now I'm really really angry! You forgot to PM me, AGAIN! 😡

Anyway this part was FAB!
Already hate Akshay! And please beg you can we please have more AsYa scenes? Pretty pwease? 😳
Giselda is such a b*tch! Please make her go away!
And who is the man who wants Zoya so bad? He is giving me the creeps yaar! 😔

Babes how could i? I didnt send pm's when u commented 😆

Thankyou s much! Bechara Akshay is hated so much already. 😆 yeah i know. More AsYa coming up.

Thankyouuu! 😳

*Le me stalker of Chapter Black* 😆

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: srilu_123
amazing one
pleasemake sureayaan and zoya are freinds
and no triangle

Thankyou so much! Haha yeah will do 😆

Originally posted by: stereohearts200
I cant describe ur writing skills with words, ur that awesome!

Thankyou, means a looot to me! 😃

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-
superb update as usual

Thanks a lot , Yaari! 😃

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Great update...loved it...update soon...

Thank you, will do 😃

Originally posted by: cutiesanya
res
unres

ab zoe keo pane mein akshay bhi aaa gaya
kain isme akshay na jeet jaye / akshay - never dies😆
but the update was really gud
luved asad affection fr zoe
update soon

Dekho who wins this baazi. Kya patta akshay hi? 🤣 nahi nahi 🤣

Originally posted by: zoas91
thank thanku thanku there is no zoya and ayaan here *phew* great update!! would love to read more! :D plz pm me!

Yesss no way ! 😆 will do with pleasure 😳

Originally posted by: angelgirl_a
It's AWESOME i love ur ff more and more with each episode!
But it always leave so many questions unanswered...
I guess that's what make me come back for me... :)

Awww it really means a looot to me! Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: deedeez
Who's that scary scar-faced villain?? And he wants to take revenge from Zoya? Hmm.. Now i am dying to know what happens next.. Please give us some more AsYa.. I know i'm being greedy, but after today's episode i am looking for some positivity !!...Wonderful update as usual..

Im sad not many guessed who it is. More AsYa, definitely. Thank you sooo very much 😳

Originally posted by: janestone6
Bang on.
I totally loved this update. It's getting better with every update.
Is Ashar Zoya's brother? 😲. If yes why would he want his sister to live in that HELL

I should say BANG ON to you! Cuz you're one of the 3-4 people who guessed. 😆 thankyou so much!

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA
great updates...
very well written...
plz start asya story...
and conti real soon...cant wait
thanx or pm 😊

Thankyou so very much! Will do 😳p

Originally posted by: rajnid68
absolutely black but adorable. .
actually had mixed feelings about it..but once
started spent about an hour and a half to come
till the last full stop..
your pace, imagination , characterisation is brilliant. .
love to have pm hence forth

Im glad you waited till the end to make the final decission 😆

Thankyou so very much and i would love to pm!

Originally posted by: ilovebieber
go team asad!!! plz make him use less bad words ya!

I know i hate it myself. But characterization ke liye its important. He will lessen them down soon.

Originally posted by: spn2013
Thanks for pm. I like this story. So I regular check for updates.
I already read your all updates they are fantastic.

Im glad you like it. Thankyou so very much, means a lot 😳

Originally posted by: Anjinie
Lovely update

Thank you.

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl

Babes how could i? I didnt send pm's when u commented 😆
Thankyou s much! Bechara Akshay is hated so much already. 😆 yeah i know. More AsYa coming up.
Thankyouuu! 😳

*Le me stalker of Chapter Black* 😆

Hahahah awww 🤣

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: Prizi
U knw i so so loved ur ff...ok so ayaan atracted to zoya

Attracted, yes 😆 thankyou so much 😃

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs
Nice ipdate...thnks 4 pm..plz upfate soon..

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Nice update dear

Thank you dear 😃

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
nice update !!!
ayaan is falling for zoya ..."hmmm"
i don't think you'll give us zoyaan as it's always asya
and who is this new guy , akshay?
hmmm... he'll be a problem for both asad & ayaan 😆
i'm wondering what'll zoya's reaction be when she find out about her boss AAK 😆

kiki

I like your reaction, kiki. Hmmm 😆

Hahaha thats going to be something haan? 😆