OS: A Glass and Curtains... - Page 2

Awww it ws so cute. Love the whole scenerio

so beautiful!!! it will be lovely to see that in the show!

Originally posted by: friendsall

V beautiful will u continue? pl

Thank you very much! I thought this was complete as an OS. But I am planning to write another OS about the actual confession of Asad. And may be a little more internal turmoil from both AsYa. Hope you like my othe rwors as well, in future

Originally posted by: hkhb17

so beautiful!!! it will be lovely to see that in the show!

wouldn't it? Actually while writing I had the whole scene played out in front of me.😳

Oh wow.. you wrote this so well! I loved how everything flowed naturally from one point to the next! And I really did love how you made Ayaan interrupt them.. and added some humour to this! I can picture Asad's embarrassed face!

You described everything really well! Took us through Asad's thought process, and made us realize along with him just how much he actually loves Zoya! Gosh in the show I have a love-hate relationship with that guy!! lolx..

Oh.. one more thing, you kept it really clean! Well done! I was expecting more in their bedroom.. maybe because recently I've come across some really detailed fanfiction's or OSs.. LOL! I personally find it hard to digest such detailed stuff.. But when I saw you kept it so clean, I didn't mind going back to the start and reading it all again!

Wonderful job! Please do write more stuff like this! :)

Love,
Sanaa

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Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Oh wow.. you wrote this so well! I loved how everything flowed naturally from one point to the next! And I really did love how you made Ayaan interrupt them.. and added some humour to this! I can picture Asad's embarrassed face!

You described everything really well! Took us through Asad's thought process, and made us realize along with him just how much he actually loves Zoya! Gosh in the show I have a love-hate relationship with that guy!! lolx..

Oh.. one more thing, you kept it really clean! Well done! I was expecting more in their bedroom.. maybe because recently I've come across some really detailed fanfiction's or OSs.. LOL! I personally find it hard to digest such detailed stuff.. But when I saw you kept it so clean, I didn't mind going back to the start and reading it all again!

Wonderful job! Please do write more stuff like this! :)

Love,
Sanaa

Thanks a lot Sanaa! It was a super comment! your appreciation means a lot. I can read the detailed stuff but while writing I prefer clean... I like to work on feelings more...

Originally posted by: StonerGirL

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Awesome!!! LOL i dunno if we get to see this in the show but even then...issi se kaam chal jayega!

Hey Thanks a lot. Glad you could make it to this post!

Originally posted by: neha2607

Awww... Asad was jealous

Haye kitna cute lagta hai with thse jealousy wale expression...

Do write more [iss baar no kabab mein haddi plz :p ]

Issi baat pe Arz kiya hai,

Asad ne kiya Zoya ko kiss

Asad ne kiya Zoya ko kiss

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kardia jisse Ayaan ne miss

wah wah wah