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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

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UNRES!im back!!
woooww millli!! u r ritng 1 more FF!!yipppeee!! oyeee ballle ballleee!!!
yeaaah!! now iv gt 1 more chnc 2 eat up ur mind n GIIILOFY ur posts vid my OL TIME FULLL AAANSU vn u dnt updt 4 long!!! 🤣 🤣
jumping japaang! jumping japaaang!! yaaahooo!!!!!
it ws luvllly shonu monu!!
infaact it ws awwwsmm!!
aaah im dieng to read d STORY!!!
ooohooo millliii ws ths a QUESTION 2 b asked????😲😲😲
obviouslllyyy continue it yaaar n tht TOOO on a SUUUPERSONIC SPEED!!
LUVVV U MUAAAH!!🤗

AALU I WAS WAITING FOR YOU...OR YE QUESTION TERE LIYE NAI THA...TUJHE TO IN HONA HE HAI...CHAHE MAIN KUCH BHI BAKWAS LIKHU...😆
AKHIR TU HE TO MERI DOST HAI...DARLING!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mili meri jaaan !!!

Kya intro hai babyyy!!!

Loved it...ab jaldi jaldi updt kar... Nehi toh yaha bhi asu se flood kar dungi! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fimmy

Mili meri jaaan !!!

Kya intro hai babyyy!!!

Loved it...ab jaldi jaldi updt kar... Nehi toh yaha bhi asu se flood kar dungi! 😉

kitna intezaar karwaya fimmy jaan...😳
and DHAMKI!!!! HUD HAI YAAR!!
TUM DONO KO DARANE KE LIYE KOI OR LINE NAI MILTI...I SWARE..KISI DIN MAAR GHE DALOGE...RO RO KAR...
BECHARI MAIN!!!😭
Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

chapter 1

"Ammi...Ammi..mera haath chhut raha hai...Ammi...mera hath...AMMII!!!!!!"
Zoya screamed and woke up.She looked here and there and realised , it was just a dream and she was sleeping...
"It was a dream??" zoya asked herself.
she wiped the water droplets formed over her face due to the nightmare.She pulled up the jar placed next to her table and tilted the jar to pour the water in the glass.The jar was empty.
"mmch!!"she chuckled
she took the jar to refill and headed towards the kitchen.She filled the water and turn to come back to her room.
On the way to her room she thought to put a glance on her parents,because the dream was quite disturbing and she wanted to be assure that mom was ok!.
so she slowly turned the knob of her parents room and piped inside.She breathe a sigh on seeing her parents having soundless sleep.She smiled on both of her sweethearts and came back to her room.
This was not the first time she dreamed about loosing her mom.Such dream often haunted her through out her life. Making her go restless and giving her a sleepless night.
There was something about this dream which she felt has happened with her sometime ago but was not sure.She tried talking to her mom but her mom gave an affirmation of no such incident have ever caused in life.so she decided to end the topic here and then...
she look at the wall clock.It says 1:30.she quickly grabbed her phone from the table and unlocked it.
The screen showed 29 sms.she started reading one by one and slowly slowly a smile started forming on her lips.Something strike her and she scrolled the button down..until she read 'Ayu' on screen.
she opened the text to read
'Happy Birthday Tsunami..aa chal rock karte hai... celebrate bhi kar denge..main purane ade k pas hu..aja m waiting!
-Ayu'
Zoya read the msg .she smiled on the word Adda ..god he is such a Circuit ki atma..she thought to herself and a smiled followed her her lips.she quickly ran to change in to a good pair of clothes for masti!
"lets have fun..zoya " she smiled at herself

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1 hr later...

"Ayu" Ayu" Ayu" the group cheered, specially girls ...there were 8 bikes in line standing together in the middle of the road with their respective riders..With a lot of audiences waiting anticipate to start the race .There were girls cheering the name of riders on bike..but the maximum time a name could be heard was 'AYU'.

"Kaha ho tsunami...m waiting!" Ayu asked zoya over phone.

"bas pas me.." says zoya

and suddenly a bike came from nowhere and stood next to him.

Ayu smiled at rider.Rider signed him all the best with thumb.Rider removes the helmet.

"Tsunami!!"
zoya smiles at him
"to tumne kya socha main yeh race miss karungi...chance he nai" she chuckled again.

Ayu was always fond of her bindas nature.but she always surprised him everytime."you are mad" he whispered softly to himself and both wore their helmet again.
The race was going to start a man on the road stage announces the cash prize for winners and a girl in a short skirt stand exactly in the middle of the road facing the bikers drop the red scarf with that BOOM!!! the race started.
With a voice of Broom!!! and smoke all over the race begun..
zoya was on 4th position were Ayu was on 3rd..
2 lapse had finished.It was the last lapse now and there were only 4 still in race including ayu and zoya.Rest biker either fall of thier bike of could not make till last.Zoya was in last position.
when suddenly Ayu lowered his speed and came parallel to zoya.
He teased her by giving a thumbs down signal.he raced the bike and picked up the pace again.
Zoya maintained her speed till she saw the end..and then with a speed of 330 or above if possible she took the bike balance on back Tyre lift the bike from front and maintained balance.It amde her bike move faster and thats it she was ahead than three and finally made till end..
she took circles in same place for 2-3 rounds and then got of the bike just to hug her bestie..AYU..who was standing there in corner smiling at her.Whole crowd kept on repeating her name ..air was filled with claps and appreciation for her...

This is Zoya farooki...a girl with no fear!
Ayu whispered slowly in her ear..while giving her a shabashi wala tight Hug!!

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i know i m supposed to introduce both the character, but i felt to first show their life and then
start with my story...
now all joota chappal are welcome!!
still you like it please leave the feed back..i would love to read it!


milli😊


Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 start milii...i luvd how u introduced zoya in dis...do continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Milli awesum update..btw the no copy thing works only on the first post..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur welcum..waiting for the nxt chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start...loved it...thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good, interesting introduction, i'm waiting for Asad's introduction now, please update soon and pm me

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