Asya SS: You Are My Life (chapter 9-pg30) - Page 5

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Thankeww😊
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Awesmmm update ! 👏
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Hey frnzz...m back...really very sorry fr the late update...so without wasting ur tym here goes the next chapter...

CHAPTER 3

living room

asad: ammi m office ja rha hu (he said looking towards ammi and den towards zoya)

ammi: asad kal hi tumhara nikaah hua h aur tum aj office jaane ki baat kr rhe...(she said in an angry tone)

asad: ammi bhot important meeting hai aur ghr me beth ke bhi kya krunga?

ammi: kya krunga matlab...ghr me nayi bahu ayi h use ghumane leke jao...shopping krao...yhi to din hai...fr to tumhare chintu mintu aa jaenge fr to tumhe time hi nahi milega? (she said smiling)

asad: ammi chintu mintu? (he said confused...same expression on zoya's face)

zoya: han ammi ye chintu mintu kon hai aur vo yha aa rhe h? (she said excitedly)

asad: ye ladki pagal hai (he whispered)

ammi: arae arae mere buddhu bache...m tumhare bacho ki baat kr rhi hu...ab kch time baad vo aa jaenge to fir tum ek dusre ko time thodi na depaoge

asad: ammi (he said rubbing his forehead with fingers)

asad thought "yha propose to kia nai abi tak to bache?????...ammi bhi na"

ammi: asad tum to ladkiyo ki tarah sharma rhe ho...zoya...aaye haaye meri bahu ko sharmana bhi ata hai? (she said looking at blushing zoya)

zoya : ammi ( n she ran to her room)

asad smiled

ammi: ahem ahem asad

asad: ji...ji ammi?

ammi: to tum office ja rhe ho?

asad: nhi (smiling)...ah vo nhi ammi bhot important meeting hai jana hoga...

ammi: acha toh thk hai...jaldi ana aur zoya ko bhr leke jana thk hai?

asad: thk hai ammi ap use keh dijiyega tyaar rehne ke liye

ammi: nahi asad tum use bologe

asad: par ammi...acha thk hai tn he leaves)

ammi smiled : mere budhu bache

tanveer who was standing behind the pillar listening to their convo said: acha to bhr ghumne ka plan bnaya ja rha hai...par tanveer ke ke hote hue aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta...hahahah bg: billo rani

in asad's office
asad: meeting to ho gyi par ab zoya se kaise bolu...han msg bhejta hu ( he took his mobile and started typing msg)

text to: zoya
zoya vo ammi chahti hai ki

asad: ammi chahti hai? nhi unhe acha nhi lgega( he again typed)

text to : zoya
zoya vo actually

asad: yha pe bhi vo actually...zoya thk kehti h m hu hi emotionally challenged (he smacks his head)

asad thought: yeah asad u can do this be a man

asad: what the hell am a man

( so one is emotionally challenged asad denoted by E n one is loving asad denoted by L)
(E sitting on left shoulder of asad and L on right shoulder...jst imagine when E speaks asad turned to left to see him and when L speaks asad turned to right to see him)

E: asad hw can u do dis...dis is so difficult

L: isme difficult kya hai u emotionally challenged...apne woh actually ko piche chod aur aage badh...be a man...tell her that u love her

E: ab isme love ki baat kaha se aa gyi...abi to bas bhr jana hai

L: han han bhr jaenge baate krenge aur fir ilu ilu just like a romantic u know...huh how do u know...kbhi woh actually se aage badha ho to na :/

E: ahh its so difficult...vo kya sochegi...no asad u cant do dis...tum use propose kroge...romantic date...howww??????

L: abe emotinally challenged insaan isme difficult kya h...u can do dis...be a man

E: no asad u cant

L: yes asad u can

E: no

L: yes

asad: chup kro tum dono jao yaha se chlo niklo (he slaps his shoulders to shoo them away)

L and E both: arae marta kyu hai bhai ja rhe hai
(:D)


asad: dimaag khrab kr dia...asad u can do dis yes be a man...u shuld tell her today...

text to: zoya
zoya be ready at 5 pm...will pick u...n ya wear a saree u look beautiful

n send

asad: huhhh done...but abhi to kch hua hi nhi (he said sadly)

asad: par aj to bol hi dunga...arae in sab chkkro me ajmer ki tickets to bhul hi gya...abhi book krta hu...vse ye hmari shadi ke baad phla trip hoga (he said smiling)

home (asya's room)

zoya: ji appi mr. khan kal ki ticket book krva rhe hai...ji hum apko pick kr lenge...ji m bilkul thk hu ap mer fikr mat kijie...acha ab m rakhti hu kal milenge allah hafiz

as she cut the phone she noticed (1 text msg from jahapanah)

zoya: (shocked) jahapanah ka msg?
she read the msg

zoya: jahapanah ne mjhe date pe bulaya hmari first date yesss (she jumped with joy)...5 bje par abhi to 3 hi bje h...it means i hv to waid till 5...sad :(...chlo koi baat nhi tb tk khuli hwaa me jaate h
she went to terrace and sat down on the swing...

zoya: lagta hai aj barish hoga kitni thandi hwa chl rhi hai

here tanveer was noticing all this

tanveer: so 5 bje...kbhi nhi hahaha

zoya didnt know when she went asleep sitting on the swing...n when she opened her eyes she immediately looked at the phone to check the time 5:00 pm

zoya: allah miya! whats wrong with me...m so kaise gayi...aj to jahapanah chodenge nahi...


n she rsn downstairs only to be slipped by something on the stairs

zoya: shhh

asad who jst had enteres the house saw her and ran like a mad man to save her...but too late

asad: zoyaaa

she slipped from 4 stairs n due to that got a strain on her foot

asad: zoya tum thk to ho na (he said bending in front of her and hugging)

zoya: allah miyaa m apko thk lag rhi hu?...allah miyaa

asad: kaha kaha lagi? (he siad breaking the hug)

zoya: foot pe( she siad pointing towards her foot)

asad: acha chlo room me chlo m dekhta hu

zoya: ahhh ouch no its hurting like hell (as she stands up)

asad: let me (n he picked her up in his arms and moved towards the room)

tanveer: maine tumhe jaanke 4 sidiyo se niche giriya zoya...abhi to tumhari so called date cancel krni thi bs...tumhari life abhi thodi si aur pdi hai...jiloo jii bhr ke hahahaha

asaya's room

asad placed her on bed n moved towards her foot n when he touched her foot

zoyah allah miyaa mr. khan its hurting

asad: tbi dekh rha hu mrs. khan
(n he touched once agin to be scolded by her)

zoya: mr. khan...i said its hurting

asad: shhh zoya...acha tumhe pta hai m kya laya hu?

zoya: kya?

asad: guess
(in meanwhile he caught her foot and turned it in such a way so that pain shuld be removed)

zoya: ahhh mr. khan...ye koi trikaa hai badla lene ka...(clutching his shirt tightly)

asad: zoya m badla nhi le rha hu (he said rubbing his fingers to his head) acha apna foot move kro

zoya: OMG its not hurting anymore (she said walking)...wow mr. khan what hv u done?

asad: jaadu (smiling)

zoya: ahan mr. khan not bad (pulling his cheeks)

asad: zoya what was dat (rubbing his hand on his cheeks)

zoya: its what we call teasing mr. khan (n she ran away only to be caught by him)

asad: acha to m btau teasing kya hoti hai? (he said moving closer n closer)

zoya moved back but stopped by the wall as he came closer she tried to ran from sides but he placed his hands on both the sides

asad: so mrs. khan ap kya keh rhi thi? (he said moving closer n closer)

zoya: woh...woh main actually (looking in his eyes full of naughtiness)

asad: wo mera dialog h (smirking)

zoya: hain????...acha vo...mr. khan codiye na koi aa jaega (she said pushing him but our body builder didnt move an inch)

asad: kon ayega mrs. khan ammi najma to bhr gye h (whispered is her ear)

zoya: (breathing heavily) m...mr. khan tanveer aa jaegi tanveer han...ab chodiya na

asad: nahi ayegi use pta hai ki newly wedded couple ko time dena chaiye nai? (he said looking in her eyesy

zoya: (blushes) mr. khan chodiye na

asad: abhi to pakda hi nahi mrs khan (smirking)

zoya :( turned red) mr. khan jaane dijiye na

asad: arae ap to bilkul tomato jaisi ho gyi h red (smiling n lifted her chin...he was so close to her that she can feel his breathe on her face...due to such a close proximity she closed her eyes n he leaned forward n kissed her cheek then he moved to her neck n placed a wet kiss there then her shoulder removing her hair...then he came back to her face...their lips were just an inch apart...she was breathing heavily...he moved closer n closer n then)

"ahem ahem"

they immediately moved away seeing tanveer at the door

asad thought "damn why didnt i lock the door

zoya thought" ise bhi abhi ana tha 2 min baad nahi aa sakti thi

asad: ummm han tanu bolo

tanveer: jammy vo hum bas ye puchne aye the ki ap bhr ja rhe hai?

asad: nahi...umm aur kch?

tanveer: nahi kch nahi (she keep on standing there)

asad: tannu kch chaiye

tanveer: ahh nahi...acha hum chlte hai

asad: hmmm (and he moved towards the door n locked it)

n turned to see her standing there...her cheeks crimson red
he slowly made his way to her...she thought"ye to fir se aa rhe hai"

when he reached in front of her he pulled her cheeks n said "aaye haaye meri tamatar"

her eyes popped out "what was that?"

asad: badla (he said running n laughing)



to be continued...

plz tell me hows it? likes comments, reviews...

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n silent readers plzzz hit like plzzz ;(





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LOVE IT PLZ CONTINUE SOON
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Awesm update ! Luved it ! ☺️
plzz continue soon ! 😛
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What a romantic couple plz continue..
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nice paet dear...plz update soon
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loved the updates...plz pm when u update...
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STUMBLED UPON IT BY ACCIDENT AND READ THE WHOLE UPDATE.
IT WAS AMAZING. 👏
PLS DO PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT
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Awesome!
Ans sooo cute!
Tanveer ko bhi abhi ana tha!

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