AsYa FF|~Woh Actually~ PARTS 1 - 7 NEW THREAD LINK ON PAGE 1 - Page 5

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Res!!

*Edited*

OMG!! I'm on the first page!! *does a jig*

I'm sooo proud of myself *Fari pats herself on the back* 😃

Anyway now coming to the FF, OMG!! I'm loving this alreadyyy! Congrats girl! You've got me hooked with a single chapter of yours 😳

I absolutely LOVE chapters with a lot of dialogues and this one of full of them so you can guess how much I loved it 😃 Ahhh they're both such stubborn and pigheaded people and I love them 🤣

Would LOVE to see Miss Farooqi as a wedding planner and Asad as the typical angry young man!

Ohhh and I love the fight in the cab! It was sooo natural and sooo well written! Good job and continue soon! Samjhi? 😳

Originally posted by: sophiya_92

res😳

unres😉

Sadie this was one of the best bickerings I have actually read so far..So true to their characters!!!! Oh my gosh gurl Mantaals are proud of you...🥳

TERA JAWAB NAHIIN BLOOPER DETECTIVE JI😳

The Co-director is ready for the "LIGHTS CAMERA ACTION" 😳 😉

Originally posted by: enrique

Wos its pretty good

Love this bold and chipping nature of zoya

Lovely part

First meet dat 2 with fight wow

Expecting 2 read lot of masti and fun fights

Updare soon

Thanx 4 pm

And pm me wen u update

Originally posted by: risingsea101

OMG that's great

All of you together, this is gotta be fun

Lol, I am loving it already

Continue soon Sadie

Love you :)

Originally posted by: Alveena12

Amazing SS, i love how they both were just casually swearing in front of each other, that was funny and their bickering was funny too 😆 i liked this SS and please do update soon and pm me when you do, thank you 😊

Wow...dat was awsum...luvd it...n the cab thing dat was funny ;D
N the way zoe was using her sarcastic comments on rehan dat was 2 gud..amazing updte
Cntinue soon

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Eeeppp i'm so happy everyone loved this SS with just the first part!

and since every1 is so happy to read AsYa bickering in the next part ill add some of it mixed with some mitwa ishq pe zor nahi!

thankyou so much for the comment!😃😃😃

Yesss!! You do exactly that and fast 😃 😃

continue soon

Originally posted by: etmartian

continue soon

well scripted

great concept

lot to imagine

much more to think

waiting eagerly for updates

the dialogues are awesome

good start..continue soon..😊