TS - Was there ever love? (Last Part Page 8)

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Hey friends,
Thank you for the awesome comments and encouragement. You guys inspire me to write more. I cannot tell you how much that means.
This started as a one shot song piece inspired by a song but turned into a three shot, only because of the encouragement from you guys. But this I am afraid is the last part. There are some stories that should end to make way for new stories. Hope you like it.
Please please do comment.
PS : Please ignore any errors. I have not proof read this peice.
PPS : Please let me know what you think:
Was there ever Love : Part 1
I swear every song I hear I picture Asad and Zoya 😕 Going crazy I know. This is another little piece based on a song - Kabira from Yeh Jawani hai Deewani..(take a listen)
After watching yesterday's episode, I will keep my opionions to myself about the episode, but lets just say I HATED so much that I re-created it my head 😳 - this song fitted perfectly in my head...
Its Short..but do tell me what you think..
PS : Please ignore any errors.
PSS : Thank you everyone for reading my crazy thoughts..
Loads of Love
Deen
Was there ever love???

Zoya closed her eyes as the insults poured. Nothing changed, I am so foolish thought Zoya silently. The tears streaming down her face. This time Zoya said nothing and let him continue with his tirade. Dilshaad squeezed Zoya's shoulder as reassurance. "But bhai-jaan, the doctor needed a blood sample" Najma tried to explain. "That's not the point" roared Asad. Dilshaad pulled Najma back and asked her to be quiet, it was no point explaining anything to him. Asad continued with his rampage "Miss Farooqi is careless, everythign is a joke to her, she doesn't care about others or how they feel. After Tannu saying she was afraid of doctors, Miss Farooqi still drew her blood. Then changed it with chicken's blood, what are you trying to prove Miss Farooqi" roared Asad. "Jammy, its not Zoya's fault she was just trying to help. And please I don't want to cause of you guys fighting. Cos this will affect your relationship" said Tanveer sweetly touching Asad's shoulder. Zoya looked at Asad whilst the tears streamed down her face. "Yes, Tannu you would appreciate relationships" said Asad "But someone you hasn't had any wouldn't understand" said Asad coldly. He will never trust me leave alone love me thought Zoya, that hurt more than his words right now. Zoya said nothing to defend herself, she just stared at the man she loved..Signs from above are not always right!

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Na Dhoop Chune Na Chhanv
It's neither sunlight nor shade
Kaise Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Kisi Thor Tike Na Paanv
Your feet don't settle any place

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Na Dhoop Chune Na Chhanv
It's neither sunlight nor shade
Kaise Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Kisi Thor Tike Na Paanv
Your feet don't settle any place

Ban Liya Apna Paigambar
You've become Your own God
Tar Liya Tu Saat Samandar
You swam all the seven oceans
Phir Bhi Sukha Man Ke Andar
Still You are dry inside Your heart
Kyun Rahega...
Why do You remain so?

Re Kabira... Maan Ja...
O Great One (Hero/Leader)... Heed to this
Re Fakira... Maan Ja...
O Deep thinker... Heed to this
Aaja Tujhko Pukaarein Teri Parchhaiyaan
Come, Your shadows are calling You

Re Kabira... Maan Ja...
O Great One... Heed to this
Re Fakira... Maan Ja...
O Deep thinker... Heed to this
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi, Kaisa Harjaaiya...
Why are You so detached and cruel?

Asad finally looked into Zoya's eyes. Zoya eyes conveyed her pain. She was silent, he was expecting an arguement. But she looked really defeated. That caused a dull ache in Asad's heart. Say something he tried to say with his eyes. Tell me this is a mistake that you would not do something so foolish, pleaded Asad's eyes. Zoya looked blank. Everyone had a breaking point. They were reaching theirs. They could never be happy in reality. It was my fault thought Zoya, I got my feelings involved in this "nakli" pretence. I hoped that for a minute this would all be real. I was even fooled by my heart when my heart saw your eyes. How wrong was I, grimaced Zoya silently. New tears found their way down Zoya's cheeks. Her tears also effects me though Asad. No not this time. Asad closed his eyes for a brief moment to push away these feelings.


Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Lab Naam Tera Mera Misri
Your name is lips, while mine (my name) is sugar
Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi
What's this selfishness of Yours?
Tujhe Preet Purani Bisri...
You've forgotten Your old love

Mast Maula, Mast Kalandar
You are a free-spirited, careless being
Tu Hawa Ka Ek Bawandar
You are like the storm in the winds
Bujh Ke Yun Andar Hi Andar
Still You are extinguished from the inside
Kyun Reh Gaya...
Why do You remain so?

Re Kabira... Maan Ja...
O Great One... Heed to this
Re Fakira... Maan Ja...
O Deep thinker... Heed to this
Aaja Tujhko Pukaarein Teri Parchhaiyaan
Come, Your shadows are calling You

Re Kabira... Maan Ja...
O Great One... Heed to this
Re Fakira... Maan Ja...
O Deep thinker... Heed to this
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi, Kaisa Harjaaiya...
Why are You so detached and cruel
Maybe signs from above is not always enough..
Part 2 - Page 4
Last Part page 8
Please Please do comment..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT :O NOOO! You cant end it! NOOO
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please countinue
i want to read more
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It's super 👏.. Plz plz pz continue... Don't stop there 😭
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Too short but beautiful
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arre why did u stop...its beautiful
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no u cant end it just like that. Do continue it plez...
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How can you end it there ??
plz tell me theres another part to this
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its so poignant...wat makes asad so self righteous...why is he forgetting that he is also a mere mortal like everyone else???why is he conveniently forgetting that he had made a mistake himself, wen he almost got zoya deported back to USA???
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Nooo u cant stop thereee!!

Pleaseee continuuuee!!!

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