#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

^ finally you are back !!

Lol missed me much?😆

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Ur always welcome! I'm gald I made u happy! :)

Yeah a lot of my other readers dint like the fact that asad had reacted that way, even I cringed when I read through that chapter myself but its only to make asad realize that zoya is not his property. :)

well !!! asad's actions are justified according to him whether we like it or not !!
he is short tempered and he thinks with his mind and to him now zoya is his enemy's daughter !!

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
can i ask you a question if you won't hit me with a vase ?
well here it goes anyway !

ummm !!how was school ?
😆
don't feed me to your dogs !😆

Arre yaar ur sounding like my mum when I was in 5th standard 😆. Well unfortunately I don't have a vase with me ri8 now so thank ur lucky stars 😆.

God, did u have to ask me that question? It was terrible as usual. My maths teacher, I dunno y but she aleays has her eyes on me n I'm not even one of those troubles ppl. If she catches me opening my mouth she'll make me stand up for the rest of the period. She basically turns to me every 5 seconds to check if I'm talking. One of my friends asked me a doubt n I answered n for that she made me stand up for the rest of the period. Pathetic. 🤢

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Lol missed me much?😆

😆
kindof !!
i was watching a movie with my sister !!just finished watching it !!
so couldn't read the rest two chapters ! she was pestering me to watch it !
anyway i have to go now!
the thing is i have to do laundry today ! if i don't wash my clothes soon ! i won't have anything to wear tommorow ! all credit to my lazyness 😆!

funny nah !
when you finally came i have to go now !!

so bye for now !!
see ya later :)

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

gosh man !! you'll never let me log out i guess !!😆

poor you ! !!!
you had to stand up !! that sucks !! your maths teacher appears scary !!
i understand what you are feeling !!!
my friend who sits next to me was a target to our physics teacher !!
so as i sit next to her i too was watched along with her!! gosh it made my sleeping in the class very difficult ! 😆

okay !! i'm going now !

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

😆
kindof !!
i was watching a movie with my sister !!just finished watching it !!
so couldn't read the rest two chapters ! she was pestering me to watch it !
anyway i have to go now!
the thing is i have to do laundry today ! if i don't wash my clothes soon ! i won't have anything to wear tommorow ! all credit to my lazyness 😆!

funny nah !
when you finally came i have to go now !!

so bye for now !!
see ya later :)

😆

Hey sew ur lazy too! N u always complain that I'm lazy!😆

See ya!

Bye! :)

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

^ ohh come on !!😳
i'm sure i'm not as lazy as you !!😛
okay okay maybe a little !😆
but what can i do dude🤔 ? i just can't help feeling lazy !!😉
you of all the people should know that fact !🤣

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#628

I HATE MY NET CONNECTION 😡😡😡😡
i have already loaded the rest two chapters !
but my superb sis closed those tabs !😕
now i have to load them all over again !! superb !!
just superb !!

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#629

chapter 14 !!

urrrgghhh !!
i hate that evil one eyed black cat tanveer !!
she's the sole reason for asya's nasty seperation !
what's wrong with mr. khan ???😡
hge's making poor zoya suffer !!
but i can't blame him !!😕
his miserable childhood doesn't let him accept her !
in his eyes zoya is his enemy's blood !
but can't he just open his eyes and his see the love for her ??
i guess that he thinks that zoya will choose her father over him and his family !!
and i think he fears that it will break dilshad & najma 's hearts !!!
i think he's afraid & that's why he's trying to hate her , hurt her to make her stay away !
i think i'm reading too much into the lines!!

is zoya gonna leave him????

i remember you called your writing crap in chapter 13 !!🥱
let me remind you ! never do that😊 ! you write beautifully kiddo !😛
i love everything you write !!

ain't i keeping my promise !! i'm giving looong comments !! and i spam too !😆
now one more chapter to read !!
can't wait to see what really happens next !
let's see how zoya deals with the news of her father !