#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

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^Dude I don't have school today, its saturday, I just logged in now n yeah I read ur comment n thank u so so much for giving such a long review. I'll be back to reply in an hour or so, be back soon! :)

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

GOOD THING IT'S A SATURDAY TODAY !!
my internet expired today morning and i went to recharge it !!
that's why i couldn't log in in the morning !!
but now my net is connecting alright !
YIPEEE!!!!!
now i can spam all i want !!😆

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

oye by the way when will you update , huh ???

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

^ok I'm finally back, sorry I'm late! Well its blazing hot here, as usual, it hardly evr rains properly here.

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

i love rains !!
and anyway where's my reply???

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
i love rains !!
and anyway where's my reply???

I'm on it

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kiki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

dude i'll be back soon !!
my sis needs the system now !!
catchya soon :)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
chapter 14 !!

urrrgghhh !!
i hate that evil one eyed black cat tanveer !!
she's the sole reason for asya's nasty seperation !
what's wrong with mr. khan ???😡
hge's making poor zoya suffer !!
but i can't blame him !!😕
his miserable childhood doesn't let him accept her !
in his eyes zoya is his enemy's blood !
but can't he just open his eyes and his see the love for her ??
i guess that he thinks that zoya will choose her father over him and his family !!
and i think he fears that it will break dilshad & najma 's hearts !!!
i think he's afraid & that's why he's trying to hate her , hurt her to make her stay away !
i think i'm reading too much into the lines!!

is zoya gonna leave him????

i remember you called your writing crap in chapter 13 !!🥱
let me remind you ! never do that😊 ! you write beautifully kiddo !😛
i love everything you write !!

ain't i keeping my promise !! i'm giving looong comments !! and i spam too !😆
now one more chapter to read !!
can't wait to see what really happens next !
let's see how zoya deals with the news of her father !

Well I'm getting rid of tanveer ri8 after this, well abt asad, there r certain things he's afraid of but he's not exactly thinking ri8 at this time, he's only able to see the one fact that zoya is Ghafoor's daughter, so he's not exactly started to think more deeply into the whole thing, n for the same reason, I included that lil Dilshaad - Asad scene, so thats where asad will actually start thinking abt it properly.

Thank u so much!

Oh yes u r keeping ur promise n I so luv u for it!😃