#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kandygrover

That was superbly amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job. Please pm me when u update.


Sure! 😃
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this is amazing...i love how Zoya forgot her own birthday hahahaha...the teasing was too funny aswel, bless Zoya, and Asad is becoming more fun and sweet aswel 😉 i loved the gift he got her and the precap is upsetting 😔please pm me when you update, pleaseee
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Originally posted by: Alveena12

this is amazing...i love how Zoya forgot her own birthday hahahaha...the teasing was too funny aswel, bless Zoya, and Asad is becoming more fun and sweet aswel 😉 i loved the gift he got her and the precap is upsetting 😔please pm me when you update, pleaseee

thank you! 😃 and don't worry abt the precap, i'm not gonna kill zoya, i promise 😉! and yes i'll pm u when i update.
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Hi guys, so this is chapter 3. Hope u like it! So here goes chapter 3:

Wheel of Desires

It was a normal day at the Khan residence. Najma had gone for college, Asad in his office, Dilshaad was watching TV with Zoya sitting beside her laughing at her own silly jokes, while Tanveer stood nearby and was giving Zoya the Billo Rani Smile. Who knows what she's upto now? "Zoya, are you sure you can stay alone? We'll be back, only tomorrow.", asked Dilshaad and Tanveer tensed a little. Wonder why? "Phuppi! I am not a little kid! Stop worrying, i will be fine." Dilshaad smiled at her, while Tanveer smirked and thought to herself, Yes Zoya, you will be fine alright. Just then Najma walked in, "Hi everyone!" She sat down beside Zoya and started rambling on about her day at her college. "So ammi, when are we leaving?" "As, soon as you and Tanveer get ready. By the way Zoya is not going to come because the silly girl manged to fracture her foot this morning, so she want be able to walk." Zoya gave a sheepish smile and pointed to her plastered foot. "Zoya!", Najma was irritated, because they had some special business to do at the place. Never mind what that business was.

It was Dilshaad's close friend's daughter's wedding and the wedding was taking place at Mumbai. Najma and Tanveer got ready and came down with their bags, while Dilshaad was ready and waiting for them. They wished Zoya goodbye and went on their way, while Tanveer gave Zoya, one last evil smile and walked off to join Najma and Dilshaad. Before she left, she walked up to Zoya and told her, "Don't feel bad that you can't come, I've got a small surprise coming on your way to cheer you up." "Really? What surprise?", asked Zoya excitedly. "You'll see."

Asad was in his office fretting over the fact that four ladies were out all on their own. If only he didn't have this stupid meeting, still unaware of the fact that Zoya was at home. Just then Dilshaad called him up, "Yes ammi." "Asad, I just called up to say that we have left and Zoya is actually at home, because she fractured her foot in the morning and she wouldn't be able to walk. Its not a major fracture, just a small crack. I tried to call you up in the morning, but I wasn't able to reach your phone." "Zoya fractured her foot?! How did she manage to do that?" "She slipped while coming down the stairs, someone had spilled water on the staircase." Asad was confused, who the hell could be that irresponsible in his house apart from Zoya? Oblivious to the fact that Tanveer was behind this, he continued, "Ok ammi, I'll call up Zoya to check on her and you take care on your journey. They both hung up.


"Yes Mr. Khan?", Zoya was watching cricket on the TV, not really bothered about Asad's call. "Apparently, you fractured your foot in the morning?" Engrossed in the match, she absentmindedly replied, "Hmm?" "Zoya?" "Mr. Khan! Guess what?! Dhoni just hit a sixer!", screamed and elated Zoya, irritating Asad all the more. "ZOYA!!!", Asad shouted over the phone to make himself heard, over the blaring noise of the TV. "Yeah, what?!", said a startled Zoya. "I was talking about you foot.", said an irritated Asad. "You were?", asked a confused Zoya. "Yes, you would know, if you actually bothered to take your eyes away from the TV for a minute and listen to what I'm saying!" "Ok, ok! I'm listening." "About your foot?", asked Asad. "Which one? Left, or right?", said Zoya purposefully irritating him. "I'll strangle you once I get home, if you don't answer!" "Fine! I broke my foot by slipping on the staircase.Now I've answered your question. Can you please let me watch cricket now?!" "Wait! Are you ok at home, because you're alone?" "I am fine! Now please stop worrying and bye!", she hung up before he could ask her anymore questions. "Stupid girl.", muttered Asad rubbing his forehead in frustration.

Just then somebody rang the bell, Zoya mumbled to herself, "Why won't anyone let me watch a match in peace?" She opened the door to find a pizza delivery boy standing outside, "Are you Zoya Farooqui ma'am ?" "Yes, that's me!" "This was the order for you ma'am.", said the pizza delivery boy handing over the box of pizza to her. Zoya thought to herself, So this was Tanveer's little surprise? That's so sweet of her. Zoya took the box and went back inside to continue watching the match. She called up Tanveer to say thankyou and Tanveer smiled in triumph. Just when she finished eating about a couple of slices, she started coughing. She got up to get a drink, but her vision went blurry. Her fingers went numb. She managed to walk over to the dining table and get a drink, but after that she collapsed.

half an hour ago:

"Sir, the client has cancelled the meeting due to some other reason, so the meeting is postponed to tomorrow.", informed Asad's assistant. "Alright, so I'm gonna head home now, because there isn't much work left to do." His assistant was surprised, he was expecting him to get annoyed at the fact that the meeting was cancelled at such a short notice, but this kind of reaction- not something that they usually got. Asad thought to himself, Now I get to spend some more time all on my own with Zoya. He smiled to himself at the thought and walked off to get his things.

(end of flashback)

He walked in to find the TV still blaring, but Zoya was not there. He sighed and switched of the TV mumbling to himself, "That girl can't even bother to switch off the TV. He walked into her room, thinking she would be there but she wasn't. He knocked on the bathroom door, no answer. "That's funny.", he thought to himself. He walked back out to the living room. He saw her pizza box on the sofa and he picked it up and put it on the dining table, sighing. He was about to go outside, to check if she was in the garden, but out of the corner of his eye he saw her feet sticking out from the other side of the table. He rushed over. He was shocked. He saw a motionless Zoya lying on the floor, with some white liquid coming out from her mouth. He pulled her up and screamed at her to get up, "ZOYAAA!" He noticed that her fingers had become blue and her temperature was running high. He sprinkled water on her face, with no response. He picked her up and ran over to his car and made a dash for it.

The doctor walked out of the ICU and found Asad sitting with his head in his hands crying his heart out. The doctor came over and put his hand on his shoulder. Asad immediately stood up and spat out a million questions at a go, "Doctor, what happened to Zoya? Is she fine now? Can I see her?" "Mr. Khan, please calm down. We can't guarantee anything just yet. The poison was very strong.We are trying are best but her heart rate is going down rapidly." Asad was shocked, he started backing away slowly and turned and ran off to an isolated part of the hospital. He screamed and shouted like a mad man. He punched the wall until his knuckles bled. He fell to the floor and embraced himself. He sobbed and banged his head against his knees. He went totally berserk. His face went red with rage, he screamed again, "ZOYAAA!!!"

"Doctor, her heart rate is stabilizing!", said a stunned surgeon. The doctor rushed over to see, "Its a miracle!" Just then Zoya gasped for breath. After several gasps, she managed to say one word, "As...Asad?" Immediately the doctor went out to call him. He was shocked to find him in the state he was, "Mr. Khan?" "GO AWAY!!! I don't want to talk to anybody!!! Leave me ALONE!!!", he screamed at the top of his voice. A few people gathered to see what the commotion was about, but the doctor signaled one of the nurses to send them away. "Mr. Khan, Zoya is going to be fine. Her heart rate is stabilized now." Asad immediately got up over joyed, "She's...she's fine? Can I see her now?" "Yes you can, she's asking for you. Its God's grace that she survived.", said the doctor smiling at him. Asad immediately ran over to her ward and burst in. He saw her eyes slightly open, her lips curved into a small smile when she saw him. She weakly held out her hand, gesturing him to come forward and hold it. He walked over and sat beside her, holding her hand tightly with tears rolling down his cheeks. He bent down and kissed her forehead. He wiped the tears rolling down her face and smiled at her, stopping himself from crying. He stroked her soft hair, looking at her lovingly. Both of them lost in their own world, unaware of the universe surrounding them.

1 day later:


Asad, Dilshaad and Najma were standing outside Zoya's ward room, waiting for the doctor to confirm if she can be discharged. Tanveer was also there, but she was looking like a volcano about to erupt. Another one of her plans had gone down the drain as well 5000 rupees just for the delivery boy to add that poison.The doctor came outside after a while and said that she could be discharged now. Tanveer gritted her teeth and followed Asad, Dilshaad and Najma into the room. Dilshaad and Najma sat down beside her. "What happened Zoya?! How did you get poisoned?", asked Dilshaad. "I don't know phuppi. I was eating pizza and then I suddenly started coughing and my vision went blurry. I managed to walk over to the dining table to get a drink but then I fell down and became unconscious." "Wait. You said you were eating pizza, how do you know that it had nothing to do with the pizza?", asked Asad questioningly. Tanveer got tensed and started sweating, but unfortunately Zoya covered her up, oblivious that she was the one who had tried to kill her, "No Mr. Khan. Actually, Tanveer had got the pizza for me, so I don't feel bad about not going to Mumbai. So I'm sure it had nothing to do with that." Obviously, Asad didn't bother to do anymore investigating about his so called perfect friend. "Well, who ever it was, I'm gonna get to the bottom of this.", he said clenching his fists. Dilshaad and Najma were pleased to see his care for Zoya, but then Zoya cut in, "Can we go home now?" She was desperately trying to pull herself up, constantly failing. Dilshaad and Najma tried to help her, but she wasn't able to stabilize herself. Asad smiled and bent down to pick her up, with one hand around her waist, the other below her knees. Dilshaad and Najma smiled, while Tanveer fumed. Asad carried her over to his car, while a few youngsters watching, whistled at them. Zoya turned a little red and avoided catching Asad's gaze, while he smiled at her. He made her sit down at the front seat of the car while Dilshaad, Najma and Tanveer climbed into the back seat, irritating Tanveer all the more.

After reaching, Asad carried her back inside, into her room. Najma was about to follow them into Zoya's room, but Dilshaad pulled her back and teasingly said, loudly enough for Asad and Zoya to hear, "Najma! You should let them have their own private time." Najma grinned. Literally, smoke was coming out of Tanveer's ears, now.

After they left, Asad walked over and locked the door. Zoya was startled, she started fumbling, "Wh...What are you doing Mr. Khan?" Asad smirked at her. He came over and sat beside her on her bed. Zoya tried to backed off as far as possible, but Asad kept closing in on her. "M...Mr. Kh..." Asad kept a finger on her lips, "Najma was right. Why do you still call me Mr. Khan?" "Huh?" He grabbed her by the waist and pulled her closer, he moved her hair, out of her face. He kept closing in on her. Zoya shut her eyes tightly and said, "Mr. Khan if you don't let me go, I am gonna scream now." "Sorry?!", Asad thought she wouldn't have the guts, but guts was something Zoya had in plenty. "PHUPPI!!!!!!", she screamed at the top of her voice, straight into Asad's face, leaving his ears ringing. He dashed over to the bedroom door and unlocked it before anyone came and found it was locked. Dilshaad and Najma rushed in, "What happened?!", asked Dilshaad panicking. Asad looked at her in triumph, thinking she wouldn't be able to get out of this, but actually she did have everything planned, "Mr. Khan just promised to take us to the next week's cricket match in Mumbai!!!" Asad looked at her shocked, while Najma squealed and Dilshaad grinned. He started to say, "Actually ammi-", but he was cut off by Najma, "Bhaijaan, that's great! You are the best bhaijaan!" He managed to give a fake smile, but then he glared at Zoya, who was sitting with folded hands, grinning at Asad at the success of her plan.

When they all left, Asad came back to her, but before he can say, or do anything Zoya spoke, "You want me to scream again?" He glared at her and said, " I'll get back to you." "Yeah, whatever." He glared at her once more and she stuck out her tongue at him. He began to leave when Zoya called him once more and said, "Don't forget to get the tickets for the match, ok?" A small smile formed on his lips and he walked off. Zoya was grinning from ear to ear, she spoke to herself, "That'll teach you not to mess with me, Mr. Khan."

to be continued...

Precap: "What?! No way I'm staying with you alone for three whole days!!!", screamed Zoya. "Then, deal with it.", he said smirking at her.

So that was chapter 3 guys! See, I didn't kill Zoya! And sorry abt using the poison idea again. I cudnt think of anything else apart from a direct murder attempt by Tanveer and if i did that the story wud be over here itself and i dint want that. please comment and let me know how it was! if you have anything that you'd like me to change or add, please let me know. and thanks for the lovely comments on my previous post guys!😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!! unres!!
yipppeee im d frst 2 cmmnt!!!
awwwsssmmm !! awwwssmmm!!!👏👏👏👏👏
luvlyyy!!👏👏👏
zoya is sooo naughty as well as asad!!!😆 😆
OMG!! u r sayn SORRY 4 using d poison idea 😲 oh grl I jst luv seeing zoya's life in danger !! jst luv it vneva she's in danger n MR.KHAN is back AT MANGALPURIYA ISHHTYLE!! haaayeee im a biiig faan of these type of scens!! n u r sayn sorryyy!!???😲
infaact I shld thank u 4 including d scene in ur story!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww, Asad is naughtyyy xD Zoya spoilt the romance, awww ;( eagerly waiting for the next update! :D
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Plz continue soon and pm me thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update continue soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome FF...

Loved all 3 chapters...Would Love to read future updates...PM me whenever u update...Mariam...
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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

awww, Asad is naughtyyy xD Zoya spoilt the romance, awww ;( eagerly waiting for the next update! :D

thank u!😊

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