#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148) - Page 11

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note: hi guys! i'm gonna be making a new ts[two shot] and i've made a separate poll for which story line wud be better, for the ts. here's the link to the poll[plz vote!]:
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Posted: 12 years ago
Continue sooon!! Its amazing!! 👏
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Amazing.. Asad's behavior was just so funny.. loved it!!!
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OH MY GOD!!! that was honestly hilariousss, i couldn't stop laughing, trust Zoya to wake up at that particular moment
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Really enjoyed the story! Please do PM me when you update. So emotional and humorous at the same time! Hahahaha Asad is losing his mind 😆
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Hi guys! I'm back with the next chapter. Also guys, this is my 100th post on IF. On saturday I'd wrote the first part of my new TS[Tied for Eternity], which I think I'll be converting into an SS coz it may not have the desired effect if i end it in the next part itself. if ur one of my regular readers and enjoy reading this, plz have a look at that story as well, its very different from this FF but do have a look at it, if u haven't already. here's the link to it:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3611196/asya-kabhi-ss-tied-for-eternity-epilogue-pg-27
plz do comment on it and let me know how it was.
So, as for now, I'm back with the next chapter. So here goes chapter 7:

Revenge

Asad stared at his ammi, completely at a loss of words. He finally managed to speak, "Ammi...I can explain! What happened is...", he looked at Zoya for some help, but she still hadn't realized the situation. Dilshaad looked at his extremely frantic face. Slowly her expression turned from a shocked one to a slight smirk. Zoya was still unaware of her surrounding and was still bewildered by everyone's shocked expressions. She got out of bed yawning, "Well, I don't know why you guys are looking like the world is about to end. I'll join you guys in a few minutes." She rubbed her eyes and was about to walk of towards the bathroom, but but then she looked around, she looked even more bewildered. "What am I doing in Mr. Khan's room?", she asked to herself loudly. Asad gulped and Dilshaad looked shocked when she realized, her son had initiated the whole 'Zoya in his bedroom' thing. Zoya turned around and that was when realization dawned upon her. She gasped, when she looked at the bed. She turned to Asad who was looking like, he was about to get killed. She shouted, "MR. KHAN!!! WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING?!?!?!" Asad looked at her pleadingly. When she realized that they were not alone, she blushed crimson red. She gave Asad the, 'You are so dead' glare and she turned back to face the shocked faces of the ladies. She immediately started her tornado of words, "Phuppi! Believe me, I haven't got a clue of how I ended up here! Its all Mr. Khan's fault! I don't even remember, when I came here! I don't have such a dirty mind, I swear on my life!" She stopped to catch her breath, Asad was looking like a little kid, caught red handed, stealing sweets from the kitchen. Zoya was about resume her speech, but Dilshaad quickly cut in, "OK! You go to your room and freshen up. I'll go make breakfast." Asad couldn't thank his lucky stars, that Zoya had finally been shut. Dilshaad smirked at him a again before leaving the room, being followed by Najma. Tanveer lingered around for a few more seconds, fumning. She gave Zoya a deadly glare before she left. Asad stared at Zoya and gulped again. Zoya was walking up to him slowly, her face red with rage. She closed in until, they were only half a foot away. She bellowed right into his face, "HOW DARE YOU, MR. KHAN???!!! What happened to your tameez and tezheeb lectures now?! You just wait and watch, if I don't get my revenge on you!!!" Asad opened his mouth to say something, but Zoya screamed again into his face, "BESHARAM!!!" She stormed out of his room, angrily slamming the door hard behind her. Asad rubbed his forehead in frustration. "What the hell is her problem?! What am I supposed to do if she sleeps like a cow?", he defended himself.
After an hour:
Asad walked toward the dining table, to find everyone seated already. He walked over to his chair and sat down, instinctively looking at Zoya. She was not looking at him, but he noticed that her face had become red again. She quickly scoffed her breakfast down and excused herself from the dining table. Asad watched as Zoya left, looking like an idiot. Dilshaad cleared her throat, to catch Asad's attention, "Asad, I've decided the date for you nikaah. It'll be at the end of this month, but if you want, we can have it done earlier, seeing as you're..." Dilshaad stopped when she saw Asad glaring at her. She smirked and continued, "Actually, what I meant was, you and Zoya seem so restless, so I thought...", she stopped to see Asad's reaction. He'd buried his head in the newspaper, pretending not to hear. She looked at Najma, who was trying hard, to control herself from giggling. Unable to stop herself, she let out a spurt of giggles. Asad lowered his newspaper and glared at her, while she pretended as if she was coughing. Dilshaad herself was trying hard not to laugh. Tanveer was watching all of this silently. She fumed with rage. Asad quickly ate his breakfast and left the table, in a hurry to get away from the teasing. Both Dilshaad and Najma started laughing, Asad stopped in his tracks and turned around to see them laughing at him uncontrollably. He gave the a deadly glare again, but that did not stop them. He decided to let them be and walked away to his room.
Zoya was sitting in her room, concocting a plan to take revenge on Asad. She gritted her teeth and spoke to herself, "That jerk. How dare he?! I'll show him what happens when someone messes with ?the ?Zoya Farooqui." Suddenly, an idea flashed in her mind. She smiled evilly to herself, "Asad Ahmed Khan. Be prepared to face the worst day of your life yet."
After a few hours had passed, Zoya walked over to the kitchen and found Dilshaad there, making coffee. She walked over to her, "Phuppi, what are you doing?" Dilshaad replied, "Oh, me? Asad asked for coffee, so I'm making one for him. Do you want one?" Zoya smiled evilly again, "No phuppi. I actually came tell you, that someone's one the phone, asking for you." Dilshaad nodded and walked off to attend the call, while Zoya smiled at the success of her plan. "Here I come, Mr. Khan.", she spoke to herself. She walked over to the dining table and grabbed the small bottle of pepper. She opened the lid and emptied half of it into the coffee and mixed it. Zoya dusted her hands and smirked. Just then, Dilshaad came back looking confused, "Zoya, there was no one on the phone." Zoya grinned at her and cheekily replied before running off, "Late April fool's day phuppi!" Dilshaad watched her run off, bewildered, "What is wrong with this girl?! She's playing an April fool's prank two months after April???" She sighed as she thought about her strange to-be bahu, before taking the coffee to Asad's room.
Zoya was waiting outside Asad's room impatiently for his reaction. Asad, still hadn't drank the coffee. Zoya peeked through the slight gap between the door and the frame. He was still typing away on his laptop, with the coffee, beside it. She finally saw his hands, reaching out towards the coffee. She held her breath in anticipation, as she waited for him take his sip. Asad finally took the cup and sipped. His face went red, he still hadn't swallowed it. He spat it out on the floor coughing and screaming, "What the hell???!!!" He stopped when he heard the sound of someone laughing. He got up and walked towards the door. He opened it to find Zoya laughing hysterically. Zoya stopped her manic behavior for a few seconds and found Asad glaring at her. She laughed even more hysterically and managed between her laughing, "This.isn't.over.yet." Saying so, she left still laughing.
Zoya was waiting in the living room, to execute her next plan. She needed Asad to get out of his room for ten minutes. That was all she needed, she waited impatiently. Finally Asad came out of his room. He looked at Zoya who was smiling at him meaningfully. He glared at her again, before walking off to talk to Dilshaad. "Ammi, I have some important work. I'll be back in two to three hours. Allah hafiz." Dilshaad nodded at him, while he walked off. Zoya smiled again, before walking off into Asad's room.
to be continued...
precap: She screamed, ready to hit the floor, but instead found herself engulfed by a familiar pair of arms. She opened one of her eyes, which had been squeezed shut and found Asad staring at her. They were completely drenched, she quickly got out of the embrace and started stuttering, "Woh...actually..."
So that was chapter 7 guys! I know it was quite a short and boring chapter, but i had to leave something for the next chapter. My brain had decided to go on a strike today and i'm feeling extremely hyper right now and if i try to get my brain get anymore creative, i'll start behaving like a psycho. hopefully when i write the next chapter, my brain will comply with me. but for now that's it. but i don't wanna u guys to lose interest, so i'll just give u a little a hint of what's coming up in the next chapter, bathroom romance it is! i'm not gonna say anymore than that, u'll have to wait to find out. plz do comment guys! au revoir!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippie! Imthe first to comment..🥳That was AMAZING..👏Loved the pepper coffee scene...😆❤️
That was amazing revenge..😉
Precap is interesting & romantic..Waiting for next update..Conrinue soon...
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 I just couldn't stop laughing at Zoya's unawareness of her where about. Poor asad was a fix 😆

Zoya being😡 at asad was awesome...lol!

Can't wait to read the next Chapter. Plz post soon.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just now recieve ur PM..
But i've read ur Update before & also commented 1st..
Anyways thnx for PM...
Mariam..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oooh i can't wait for the next chapter, this one is great

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