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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: s120
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This was beautiful 👍🏼 A bit shocking but very moving. I loved the way you portrayed their feelings. There was so much intensity, so much pain and so much love. Very well written.

thanks for the comment 😃

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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
omg wat a great os...its just unbelievable...
the way ur potray asad n zoya is so nice n different...
such great emotion...
really great imagination...
its just awesome😊

thanks for the comment! glad you liked it! 😃

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Sadie why did u write such a sad os man
I read it first thing in the morning in this beautiful weather lol
It was awesome

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

You were thinking twice to post THIS?? 😲
this is oh my gosh amazing..👏
The way asad tells her "DO IT" was THE BEST!!!😳

oh my gosh oh my gosh I loved it!!!🤗

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jazmeen
Sadie why did u write such a sad os man
I read it first thing in the morning in this beautiful weather lol
It was awesome

i told in my a/n i had gone mad! looks like my body cnt handle caffeine 😆😆

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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sophiya_92
You were thinking twice to post THIS?? 😲
this is oh my gosh amazing..👏
The way asad tells her "DO IT" was THE BEST!!!😳

oh my gosh oh my gosh I loved it!!!🤗

blush blush!

thankyou thankyou! ^__________^

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giee

@giee

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

OMG that was shocking

at first I was not able to understand what was happening
But fir sab samaj aa gaya 😆

Zoe killed humzie becuase of Asad 😳

"I closed my eyes and went down the memory lane. I remembered about our times together, cherishing those memories, embedding them in my mind forever because once I shoot him, once he is no more these memories will be all I'll have of him.

I reminisced our past, those nights that we spent in each other's arms. No one can ever touch me like that. I will not allow it. I am his! Only his! I belonged to him and even after his death I'll belong to him.

Why? Why did I have to fall for my enemy? Why did I have to fall in love with him?

"I love you Zoya." He whispered and looked straight in my eyes. A sob escaped my lips as I squeezed the trigger and fired."

This is my favorite part 👏

my heart was in my mouth when she fired

I loved the OS ❤️

It was BEAUTIFUL 👍🏼

Edited by giee - 12 years ago

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: giee
OMG that was shocking

at first I was not able to understand what was happening
But fir sab samaj aa gaya 😆

Zoe killed humzie becuase of Asad 😳

"I closed my eyes and went down the memory lane. I remembered about our times together, cherishing those memories, embedding them in my mind forever because once I shoot him, once he is no more these memories will be all I'll have of him.

I reminisced our past, those nights that we spent in each other's arms. No one can ever touch me like that. I will not allow it. I am his! Only his! I belonged to him and even after his death I'll belong to him.

Why? Why did I have to fall for my enemy? Why did I have to fall in love with him?

"I love you Zoya." He whispered and looked straight in my eyes. A sob escaped my lips as I squeezed the trigger and fired."

This is my favorite part 👏
my heart was in my mouth when she fired
I loved the OS ❤️
It was BEAUTIFUL 👍🏼