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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Its so painfull yet so beautiful I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
omg wat a great os...its just unbelievable...
the way ur potray asad n zoya is so nice n different...
such great emotion...
really great imagination...
its just awesome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zoya's dilemma was beautifully pictured!
Nice one


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey amazing updte...it was abit confusing bt i luvd
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

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Yippee!! I'm the first one🥳

OMG!!

This was soo shocking...

A beautifully written heart moving OS indeed.

Zoe aimed the gun at Asad and wished to kill him😲

Humaira was asking Zoe to kill him😡

In the beginning,I thought it was Tanveer who created some misunderstanding between ASYA😆

But slowly I got the whole story.The beginning was so mysterious that it got me hooked like crazy.I was eager to know what will happen next.Gosh!! Girl u made me skip so many heartbeats when Zoe shot.I was so afraid.*phew*She killed Humaira.😆

I loved the way Asad kept on asking Zoe to shoot him but ultimately love won.

The end was soo beautiful.Asad showed Zoe a new life ahead with them together in it forever..

I was smiling like a fool when Zoe gave into his requests..

A mindblowing OS indeed.

Saddie you write wonderfully dear.

Keep up the good work!!

Take care!🤗


i'm sooo happy you liked it!

i was confused whether to post it or no!

glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

ers


i LIKED it.

Yes cause Humera being a Razia this is FAB GREAT GREAT GREAT

Where's grumpy grumpy grumpy ? ?

Nayy! cause Snape's here


seriously?? o.O o.O

it was snape approved good???? 😲😲😲

^______^ yippieee!

mehnat safal hui!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey ...
That was fantastic !!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: blueflames

res


unres

well thats one hell of an OS..
curiosity killed me, and i had to read without glasses on.but it was worth it.😉

i have no idea what happened in the past, or about the future, but that one scene was amazing.👏



eeeppp! thankyou thankyou thankyou shooo much!

i was really worried about this OS *phew* it was good! 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

its beautiful👏

you almost made me cry..!!
love it will you continue this sadie...
the intensity the love part and the dialogue..was a killer!!!
BANG ON!!!!👏👏👏


Awww! i'm glad it moved you so much!

sorry no continuation as i said i cant make a head or tail of it! how will i continue!
dont worry ive got 5 other OS n SS lined up i'll be updating soon

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