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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all thank u for including what I had wanted to read in this chapter...you r awesome..

I loved this chapter a lot..I m glad zoya told asad about Altif...I hope they somehow get rid of this mad guy. Loved the way asad told zoya that she is his life.

I totally felt zoya's pain.poor girl sure is in great danger...I wonder if that's the only danger.

Plz post the next update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
PERFECT! i'm glad we know who the person is...what a weirdo, why doesn't he leave her and asad alone??
asad is so sweet bless him
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Interesting. Eager to read next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg what a beautiful update👏👏👏
asad trust on zoe so much , he cares for her so much😳
and that bloody altaf😡 no matter fr the devils
they always try to distrub the angels😭
but our angels the asya wuld find a w😉ay
and be always with each otther contented and happy😊
😊wating fr altaf face of
update soon




Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for unburdening her heart..and for him to listen patiently.,,
ab mujhe halka mahasoos ho raha hai...
aagay cheejay handle karnay may aasani hogi...
thanks for the pm. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.. such a beautiful update !!!!!!! 😊

u reveal that mystery man thats sooo nice of u 😛

like that moment they share, zoya share her past & Asad assured her that he is always with her
& i like that last line most " we should always sort everything out in the way, before its too late "

continue soon plz ... & pm me if possible 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update Farah...
Finally she told evrything to ASAD...
So ALTAF is back...I hope that he will not harm ZOYA or anyone else...
Loved the update...
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg tis is a wonderful update...just luv it...it awesome...
wow zoya had an possesive ex boyfriend but luckly she told the truth to asad n nw asad will stand by her in everything...wonder hw did altaf manage to find where zoya is n hope he will nt harm her n hope zoya will always be protected by asad...
thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next update...thx fr the sweet reply...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Asad is sooo understanding!!!!! Loved the update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19:

They ate their dinner and retrieve back to their room While Asad and zoya were lost in their own world.

Zoya: Asad I'm starving.
Asad: chalo khana kha lete hain.

They went to the dining table and saw the food covered while there was a memo note placed beside.

"For my handsome son and my beautiful bahu:

Khana garam karke kha Lena. Zoya must be starving.

Love,
Ammi"

Zoya smile while removing the plate from the top.

Zoya: it's our favorite bhindi.

They sat down on their seats and zoya started eating while asad was admiring her.

Zoya: kya hua? Khao Na.

Asad: tum khilao mujhe.

She feed him and then he feed her back. They enjoyed their dinner with feeding each other.

Zoya: movie?
Asad: it's already late. Don't you want to sleep?
Zoya: no not yet.
Asad: okay then let's watch a movie.
Zoya: on second thought, leave it. Tum jaa ke Aram karo.
Asad: I'm not sleepy. Which movie should we watch? Let me see what we have.

He checks the DVDs and there were some action movies and some romantic.

Asad: we have jab tak hai jaan, bodyguard and commando.

Zoya: JTHJ! You serious! You have jab tak hai jaan?

Asad: you don't like it?
Zoya: I love it. Mein hazaar baar Kiu na Dekh loon. I will never get bored of it.
Asad: Toh chalo. Hum yehi dekhte hain.
Zoya: mein snacks leke atti hoon.

She went inside the kitchen and got a packet of chips with two cans of diet coke. When she was about to move, she saw a shadow of someone behind the curtains. She went towards the direction but no one was there. Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder, her heart started beating fast. She turned back and saw Asad standing behind her.

Asad: kya hua zoya?

She shakes her head and embraces him.

Zoya: chalo movie dekhen?

She went into the living room while Asad stood there puzzled. He looked around but he just didn't understand what zoya was doing there instead of being in the kitchen. Did she saw someone again??

~~

He entered inside the room through the window. Though it was dark, he could see her sleeping peacefully. He slowly paced towards her bad and sat on her bed admiring her. He leaned in and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead which woke her up. She got frightened since it was dark n he couldn't see his face properly, she screamed on top of her lungs. He placed his hand on her mouth preventing her from screaming.

"Shh.. its me, please chilao mat" he pleaded holding onto the hand on her mouth. She recognizes the voice, the voice she was longing to hear.

'umm...amm..." she tried to speak but the hand on her mouth wasn't letting her. She removed his hand from her mouth.

"What are you doing here?"

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They started watching the movie, right after five minutes she felt his lips on her cheek. She turned towards him saw him looking at her, then her lips. He gently brushes his lips against hers and he moved back gazing at her. He placed his palm on her face and leaned in again. She moved her hands around his neck while he slid his arms around her waist making her lay on top of him. They kiss passionately while he invaded in her mouth. He slid his hands under her kurta to which she moan. All of a sudden, she heard a scream, she moved back while he looked at her confused.

Zoya: apko Sunai diya?
Asad: kya?
Zoya: kissi ki cheekne ki awaz.
Asad: nahi Toh. Leave it.

He kissed her lips again when she moved back.

Asad: Zoya!
Zoya: please ek baar check kar lete hai.
Asad: I don't want to.
Zoya: please?
Asad: no.

Zoya leaned in and kissed his lips moving down to his neck.

Zoya: As...ad...

"hmmm." he murmured while receiving please from her touch. She licked his earlobe which arose him even more.

"We...should...check...right?" she said between placing wet kisses on his neck.

"Hmmm...We..Should." He was out of sense now. He didn't know what he was saying. All he knew was he wanted Zoya.

Zoya: yay! Okay let's check now.

She rises up from him standing on her own feet.

Asad: you did all that to...?
Zoya: of course. Aur Waise bhi u just said ke we should. I can't say no to you baby. let's go.
Asad: iska badla mein zarur long a zoya. Be aware!

"I missed you" and then suddenly heard a knock on the door.

Zoya: najma open the door.

She half opens the door and half close.

Najma: yes?
Zoya: meine kissi ki cheekne ki awaz suni thi. Kahin tum-
Najma: haan woh actually, woh zoya...
zoya: najma tumein apni bhaijaan ki bimari lag gayi hai kya?
Najma: zoya actually there was a cockroach isliye mein...
Zoya: cockroach? kahan? Darwaza kolo mein dekhti hoon.

She pushed the door slightly when najma prevented her from going inside.

Najma: nahi zoya meine handle kar Liya. Zoya bahar kissi ki awaz, koi hai kya?
Zoya: haan woh mein aur Asad movie Dekh rahe the.
Najma: okay then you go and watch movie warna Koi scene miss ho jaiga.
Zoya: already bohot kuch miss ho gaya. Choro mein cockroach ko dekhti hoon. Pata hai mujhe pachpan mein cockroaches ko marne ka bada shoinka tha.
Najma: nahi zoya woh.

While the two of them were struggling with push-and-pull-door, Asad spot a male figure from the mirror behind najma.

Asad: chalo zoya. Hum apni movie dekhte hain.
Zoya: par Asad.

Before she could further protest he kissed her in front of najma to shut her mouth.

Asad: goodnight tamatar. Chalo zoya.

Najma closed the door while they went back to their movie. They sat on the couch watching the movie when Asad placed his arm around her.

Zoya: hath mat lagana Mujhe!
Asad: Kiu? Ab meine kya kiya?
Zoya: tumne Mujhe najma ke samne Kiu kiss kiya? Don't touch me now! Chup chap movie Dekho.

They sat there watching movie but it was silent maybe because she wasn't talking to him; he turned and saw her sleeping.

Asad: no wonder itni quiet hain. Meri favorite movie hai, I'll never get bored of it. Dikhai de raha hai kitni favourite hai.

He switches off the TV and carries her in his arms. He moved towards her room when he bumps into someone.

Asad: ammi app?
DS: haan woh Pani Peene Ai thi. Tum dono abhi tak yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Asad: oh woh hum movie Dekh rahe the aur zoya fell asleep. Toh mein usse uske kamre mein leke ja raha hoon.
DS: Acha Jao.

He moves to her room and place her on the bed. He was admiring her when Dilshaad came inside and asks him what he is admiring.

DS: kya dekh rahe ho asad?

Asad: chand Ko dekh raha hoon ammi, bohot khubsurat hai.

DS: woh toh hai. Meri bahu bohot hi khubsurat hai.

Asad: soon-to-be-bahu ammi, Abhi tak bani nahi hai.

DS: haan toh kya hua? Bohot hi jald ban jaigi Na. Waise tum dono ke baach sab teek hai Na? Aur doctor ne kya kaha?

Asad: doctor ne kaha ke apki bahu apne shohar KO sab kuch bataye kare and ya ab sab kuch teek hai. Zoya ne sab kuch bata diya.

DS: acha? Kya bataya?

Asad: who toh hum dono ka secret hai ammi.

DS: oho. Bade secrets rakhne lage ho. Ammi se bhi chupana?

Asad: ab mein bacha thori Na hoon. I'm a grown up ammi.

DS: oh aisi baath hai? Isliye tum us din meri ghod mein roh rahe the "ammi mujhe zoya na dhoka diya!" aur ab gayi ammi?

They both started laughing wholeheartedly. He embrace her and thank his mother for everything.

Farah<3
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peeps sorry agar update utna bhi acha nahi hua like the other updates because now i have to focus on two stories so its quite time-consuming. but i tried my best to stand on ur expectations so enjoy :)

and ya i wanna shoutout to my friend's (Meself) story :) The night train at Deoli.
please read if you have time and i assure u that u'll love it because the concept is very unique.

here is the link :)

Edited by Sirit-of-Dead - 12 years ago

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