AsYa SS: |Busted| (Epilogue, Page 54, Complete)

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Hey dear sorry for late comment

what an update really i love it👏

love the flashback too much

the clues, all gifts, roses, dinner & finally the confession gr8, the way u written so nicely

& the ending so heart touching the gift from zoya that moment is remember forever for asad

such a romantic & sweet update !!!!

but i feel sad that this is a last update of the story, hope u will come back with ur another beautiful creation soon & don't forget to pm me 😊

love u dear & thank u so much for pm 😊

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

This was amazing. i really loved it. read it in one go. the Epilogue was super emotional and amazing .

Do PM me if you write something else :)

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princess14

@princess14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

hey I loved the story and your writing. PLz pm me whenever you write more.

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Priya

@MysteryLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

This is brilliant! 👏 I loved the ending 😊

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lovepkdh

@lovepkdh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

OMG!!! the end was fab😊..Ur a gr8 writer...keep writing more..

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

OMG! 😲 It's over?! 😭 I can honestly say, this was the most adorable thing I have EVER read in my life!!!!! It's just SO cute and beautiful. 😳 I can't find words to describe it! 😊 That was an AMAZING ending! 🥳 And really creative with the presents and dialogue! 😃 Outstanding job! 👏 You have a ton of talent! 👍🏼 Loved it sooo much! ❤️

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Gr8 ss

Nice work

The last part was best... The notes... Clues and roses

I am unactive but it would be unfair not to comment

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Such a nice SS. They really make a good team. The way he proposed her was soo romantic. Loved it!

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arshiasya

@arshiasya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#399

I wish this happened in the show :( ur such a good writer...u should b on the CV team...great story, read it all in one go...loved it all, especially the last chapter, such a cute proposal 😃

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sucker4arhiluv

@sucker4arhiluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Thata was the BEST!!!!!! You Are the BESTEST!!!!!! (im aware thats not a real word, but it describes your writing perfectly!!!!) It was AMAZING!!!! AHHH I have no idea why i have so many exclamation marks!!!! LOL the story excited me ;) lol