AsYa SS: |Busted| (Epilogue, Page 54, Complete)

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soniaanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

OMG This is the best update till date , now want the next chapter more better, waiting eagerly

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

"But God, if you take me instead, give me a chance...a chance to tell her that I love her."

👍🏼 i like it!!!!congratulations!!

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krati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

ha ha ha... after this senti part... u r nt gng to propse me... oh let me wipe my romantic tears first... i got emotional... fab update dear... so lovely... thnks 4 pm

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

totally enjoyed reading this part

do continue soon

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

so beautiful.. Love the way how u pen down it...

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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

I had tears in my eyes reading this.. This is just wonderful..Keep writing more..

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

aww it such a lovely chapter...

the prayer tat asad made fr zoya is sooo sweet n sooo touching...

it was just brillint...luv ur writing skiils...

thx fr the pm...finally asad did say the 3 magic word to zoya...

it was just awesome...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Awww that was so good !!!

Omg ... The way Asad prayed for Zoya actually made me so emotional ... :(

And yes, the confession and the most awaited kiss was fantastic ;)

Thanks for the pm

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Whoa!!! So, well written my girl... The start of this chapter was just unimaginable.. I din't ever thought it will be like this... The way you wrote the entire thing was just too good... How can he take away her soul.. Her soul belongs to someone special.. To Asad.. And, he'll never let her go. She has to live a lot.. As she said , she has to marry him, have small Asya's around their house and off course grow old with her only love , Asad!!!

Amazing.

Waiting.. Continue soon!!!

Dee