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Farhana

@risingsea101

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow, that was beautiful

You should really continue!

Very nice job Nisha :)

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Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mochhug
This is exactly how I envisioned it would happen. That Dilshad would see through Asad's silence and the pain in his eyes. You've written this beautifully. Really, amazing.

Oh! And YOU BETTER CONTINUE IT INTO AN SS OR FF.

Thanks 😛

Thank you!!! and I will certainly think about continuing this.

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tiena395

@tiena395

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Loved it! Please do continue

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canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Love it!! Please do continue :)

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Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: friendsall
yes pl continue!!!! well done!!! loved how Dilo took him to his room n asked him!!!!!!!!!!!

I figured he would never have confessed in front of Zoya. He shuts down when she is around...the words never reach his lips. Even with dilshad they didnt, but atleast he is able to demonstrate how he feels with his ammi.

And god I cant stnad that tanveer...when will she leave???? She ruined today's woderful ammi-son scene by butting her head. If I write this ff...I will deal with her too, not a lot though because I hate thinking about her. But I would see justice happen.