AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sasir

nice one continue soon



Thank you 😊 And I'll try to as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Hey Sana.
The title - I love it. It gives u a feeling of nervousness and tension revolving around characters. Its catchy.
I love how you have potrayed the feelings specially of Zoya. The turmoil in her mind, the change in mood and her feelings. You have described their emotions in depth. Asad as usual " Dil mai kuch aur Zubaan pai kuch aur " . Frankly, wen I was reading your story I cud relate to the characters. In simple words I loved the story uptill now.
You are an amazing writer. I really appreciate how u have used a single scene and depicted the emotions so well. Its my first AsYa SS :-)
Keep up the good work and update soon^^
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
I absolutely love this one. I'd rather you give this story another part. That would just be perfect. Nevertheless, you know you're amazing. So keep going.
:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Oh!!! Poor my zoya... I could feel her pain. Its too bad. Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan what do you think of your self? If I m so hurt just because of his action , imagine how crestfallen she is.. God, how much I want to give him a tight slap and tell him.. You fool, You are in love , for gods sake just understand this part and rest will be fine..

Listen , you write too well. I m in love with this story. You need to continue this sooner. Will wait for the next update.

Keep smiling and keep writing because that keeps your readers going.

Dee
Edited by Enchantress - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Amazinggg...asad dont do this...pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Beelte003


I absolutely love this one. I'd rather you give this story another part. That would just be perfect. Nevertheless, you know you're amazing. So keep going.

:D



Awhh.. Thank you loadz!! And don't worry.. This will have another part! Two more parts.. I think
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Enchantress

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#330066">Oh!!! Poor my zoya... I could feel her pain. Its too bad. Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan what do you think of your self? If I m so hurt just because of his action , imagine how crestfallen she is.. God, how much I want to give him a tight slap and tell him.. You fool, You are in love , for gods sake just understand this part and rest will be fine..</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#330066">Listen , you write too well. I m in love with this story. You need to continue this sooner. Will wait for the next update.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#330066">Keep smiling and keep writing because that keeps your readers going.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#330066">Dee</font>




lol! Well Asad is an idiot!

😆

thanks loadz. I'll try continue as soon as I can :)

love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
I wud love to write a long comment to tell u how much I loved this but ... righot now I cant. So i will just say its amazing. Pls cont super soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazinggg...asad dont do this...pm me



It's alright. I'm sure if Asad had an IF account he'd pm you about his problems😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awessomme updatee! This was quite a sad and depressing update... yet I still loved it cuz you described AsYa's emotions and feelings so well! I loved this part! Great work and do continue soon cuz I absolutely can't wait to read the next part :))

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