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Cleaning the table she turned around and smiled at the people and move towards the counter cleaning her forehead with the napkin.She was about to went inside the cabin when she felt a pair of eyes staring at her intently. She look at her right side and looked at the guy who was staring her intensely. Ignoring the guy she look outside and say while looking at dark grey sky " Its gona be rain soon".
She went to her cabin and sat at the table to check accounts .She heard a knock and says"Come in"
A man in his late 20's came inside.She looked up and saw him staring at her.She felt shiver run down her spine.When she look at him as the past came flooding in front of her.She gripped the papers of the filed tightly in her fist as she remember the horrible part of her life.

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"Please don't ..don't do..do this .I beg"She pleaded as the man try to kiss her forcefully..She kept on pleading but her plead falls on deaf ears..He kept torturing her.

"What the hell is going on here" A loud jerk on door make the man move away from her.She kept laying there lifeless.

"She try to seduce.She came to my cabin and..I try to stop her but she forcefully kissed me" The man stammered with his word.The man gave him deadly glear and move towards and held her wrist ,draged her outside the room.

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"She had been found with your friend in his cabin and still you brought this dirt my home.She was orphan,no family back ground still you marry her and now see she show you her true color.I believe akram.She must have gone to him.I alread.."

He cut his mother in between and turn towards her"Zoya tell me wats the truth.Did you really??"

Zoya give him a bitter smile and say"You tell me first whom you believe me or akram ??"

For others that might be a statement but for her it was her life and the answer to this one question will decide her future.

He look into her eyes and say"Zoya I saw you akram and I guess ,I believe what I saw..."

A lone tear escape her eyes but a bitter,sad smile on her face.

Say the three words and get rid of me..Like you say those three words and get me in your life(Qabool Hai,Qabool Hai,Qabool Hai)

Tears came into his eyes but he say those words"Mai tumhe tallaq deta ho..Mai tumhe tallaq deta ho..Mai tumhe tallaq deta ho"




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Zoya regain her conscious as those three words kept ringing in her ears but she blink away her tears.
"Zoya..." But she cut him and say"I had already read your eyes..so finally you came to know the truth huh??? but its a bit late..just go away ..With great difficulty i had started my life again,I..I started to collect the missing pieces again and now I had moved on"

He took a sigh and replied"I know I had done bad in fact very bad with you..I promise to be with but...nevertheless I am sorry Zoya..I am sorry..I believe Akram over you I knew that he was a bad guy but yet i..."

"Yet you believe him..You knew I don't have any one other you..For you i handle your mother abuses every day but never let you know so that you can live in peace.I told you I had nothing to give but my love and myself to you but still when the times came you don't believe me..Any how every thing happens ,happen for good..

Go away Ayan ..just go away and Move on"

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She come out of her cabin regaining herself.After a long time she felt calm.The guilt which she saw in his eyes some how soothe her..She saw outside and it was raining heavily.She turn back to go to kitchen with an intention to prepare coffee for herself and enjoy rain when she heard"Make it two"
"You" Zoya turn around and saw the same guy who has been coming in her cafe to do nothing but just staring at her sitting there looking at her with same intense eyes and giving her dimpled smile.

Asad Ahmed Khan my name ..not you..I mean my name is Asad not you?? He replied to her giving her a cheeky smile.

Oh..Ah.Mr.Khan,You still here my ..I gona shut my cafe so please go"


He stand up of his seat and come to her "See Ms.Zoya..Its raining outside and I know you are good and would not allow me to go out in this rain"


After a while he again say"Now can I have a coffee"

Zoya nodded and went to bring coffee for him...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww. That was an adorable one. A start of a new relationship! :D
Write more. :)
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Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

Aww. That was an adorable one. A start of a new relationship! :D

Write more. :)



thank you dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazing, loved it! do continue soon
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^ dear I am not continuing its actually one shot ..
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good one. So, it was Ayaan ha...phew!!
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^its just one shot dear..i am not contnuing..for me this is perfect ending..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Incredibly confusing. I could not make sense of this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really cute plz continue 😊
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Hey ...
That was fab !!! :)

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