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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update, let him beg for forgivness.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Yaz-

I laughed so hard at this because it's just like Zoya to not allow Asad to get a word through edge-wise and even though sometime's I really wish she would just shut up and let him talk I was so glad that she hadn't allowed him the opportunity this time round, I want him to sweat a little bit more before she finally listens to him, however that doesn't mean that I want her to forgive him because honestly the kind of damage that Asad has caused could never be mended by a simple apology, he has to do something quite extreme, something that will prove to Zoe and to us that he will never repeat those mistakes again, that he actually understands Zoya and loves her just the way she is and that means accepting her way of dressing and behaving. He need's to understand that Tehzeeb and Tameez are inside a persons soul and heart and not in the clothes they wear, he also needs to see how perfect Zoya is for his family, I want him to actually pay attention when she interacts with his mother and sister and see how much she loves them and how much they love her, after that he could work on his redemption but first he needs to come out of his regressive way of thinking.


Once again an amazing update and I'm eagerly awaiting the next one.



Exactly :) you described what i wanted to convey so beautifully :). Abd you gave an idea for a chapter :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Yaz-

I laughed so hard at this because it's just like Zoya to not allow Asad to get a word through edge-wise and even though sometime's I really wish she would just shut up and let him talk I was so glad that she hadn't allowed him the opportunity this time round, I want him to sweat a little bit more before she finally listens to him, however that doesn't mean that I want her to forgive him because honestly the kind of damage that Asad has caused could never be mended by a simple apology, he has to do something quite extreme, something that will prove to Zoe and to us that he will never repeat those mistakes again, that he actually understands Zoya and loves her just the way she is and that means accepting her way of dressing and behaving. He need's to understand that Tehzeeb and Tameez are inside a persons soul and heart and not in the clothes they wear, he also needs to see how perfect Zoya is for his family, I want him to actually pay attention when she interacts with his mother and sister and see how much she loves them and how much they love her, after that he could work on his redemption but first he needs to come out of his regressive way of thinking.


Once again an amazing update and I'm eagerly awaiting the next one.



Exactly :) you described what i wanted to convey so beautifully :) and i got an idea for another chapter šŸ˜†
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update šŸ‘
Yayyy!! even Zoya's Jeeju realized that she's in love now I hope he plays the role Dilshaad played with Asad so that Zoya can also realize that she's in love with Mr. Tameez&Tehzeeb šŸ˜†
conversation between Zoya&Anwar was touching šŸ‘šŸ¼ I loved his dialogues to Zoya.. made her think twice even though she reached the wrong decision at the end about it being just a physical attraction when its indeed love between the two šŸ˜”
i loved how you described the place and what it meant to Zoya could clearly create a picture of such a calm and peaceful place
and the final scene just had me in awe.. the way Asad was helpless and couldnt do anything to get rid of the sorrow he caused in Zoya's life 😭 i never like picturing a helpless and sad Asad but the picture I created in my head with your words was just beautiful.. the way I wish Asad would be this soft and understanding in the show itself but I dont see it happening any time soon and again.. Zoya leaving just like she did a few days ago 😭
I love Asad but I just hope Zoya makes him beg for forgiveness after all those harsh words .. I obviously dont want it to go on for so long but I still want him to plead for forgiveness from Zoya 😳

Amazing update šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
PLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!! Continue!!!!! as always it was amazing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update yet again 😊 you never disappoint, i really loved it, i'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, please update soon and pm me when you do
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

amazing updatešŸ‘

Yayyy!! even Zoya's Jeeju realized that she's in lovenow I hope he plays the role Dilshaad played with Asad so that Zoya can also realize that she's in love with Mr. Tameez&TehzeebšŸ˜†
conversation between Zoya&Anwar was touchingšŸ‘šŸ¼I loved his dialogues to Zoya.. made her think twice even though she reached the wrong decision at the end about it being just a physical attraction when its indeed love between the twošŸ˜”
i loved how you described the place and what it meant to Zoya could clearly create a picture of such a calm and peaceful place
and the final scene just had me in awe.. the way Asad was helpless and couldnt do anything to get rid of the sorrow he caused in Zoya's life😭i never like picturing a helpless and sad Asad but the picture I created in my head with your words was just beautiful.. the way I wish Asad would be this soft and understanding in the show itself but I dont see it happening any time soonand again.. Zoya leaving just like she did a few days ago😭
I love Asad but I just hope Zoya makes him beg for forgiveness after all those harsh words .. I obviously dont want it to go on for so long but I still want him to plead for forgiveness from Zoya😳

Amazing updatešŸ¤—



Aww thanks :) yes i wanna make him beg a bit more lol. But his apology will be grand :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE SOON THANX FOR THE PM CAN'T WAIT FOR U TO UPDATE :):):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it! Absolutely amazing!!! Perfect in every sense ! Exactly how I want her to treat him in the show!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 15 A/B

The Khan family in New York - would have liked to see this in the show and would so like to see Asad working hard to win back Zoya. And, would also like to see Zoya having conversation with Anwar. These two parts had so many things that I would like to see in the show 😊. Per abhi ke liye enjoyed in the FF. Their first meeting was well-written, and I am very much liking Zoya's reaction. Good going….Thanks for the PM.

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