Ring ki Raaz ~ Product of Gutter

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Posted: 12 years ago
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On Demand of Bunny (sophiya_92)

The only missing link in the SBB and SBS is how Asad goes and brings a ringed Zoya back home.

Hence my wild imagination comes out late at night and Bunny gives me Hukum to pen down an OS. But i lack patience so issey se hi kaam chala lijiye 🤣

Kindaa Goes like this

Khan Residence

Asad sits in his room and cries cause Zoya has left (crying spoiler).*bg Kyun Main Jagoon* Dilshad Moma meanwhile comes gives Asad the recording which proves the innocence of Zoya (the Laptop Spoiler). She tells Asad that he should go and stop Zoya.

Airport

Zoya is crying like hell. She is inconsolable. *Bg Kyun Main Jagoon* while she remembers the moments on Bhopal with Mr Khan and family and how he badly behaved with her. She is hiccuping and crying. Mr Whatever and Dolly try to console but then its of no use.

Khan Residence and Airport

Asad runs to stop Zoya. He drives to Airport while the moments of him accusing her of the mistakes she hadn't even thought of committing. Asad is teary *Bg Kyun Main Jagoon*

Airport

Dolly tires to talk with Zoya while they lead her to Departure and makes her sit. Zoya feels dizzy cause of the stress she has been through. She cries thinking how badly Asad had treated her and she tells Dolly Asad didn't even care to listen to her while she cries her heart out. *Bg Kyun Main Jagoon*

Asad reaches Airport just when the flight is scheduled to be delayed. Asad like a manic searching for Zoya but is unsuccessful. Meanwhile Zoya falls asleep and Mr Whatever and Dolly feel very sorry for her. They wish they could do something but then Mr Whatever starts his Kaidey plus Kanoon dialogue and how Zoya has to leave. 😆

Asad reaches the Departure waiting area and requests Mr Whatever to make him talk with Zoya once. Mr Whatever says she is asleep Asad still insists. Mr Whatever looks at Dolly and they allow Asad to meet Zoya. Asad is teary and crying.

A relief runs over him when he finds Zoya asleep on the chair. He kneels down in front of her and cries more. He takes her by her arms and hugs her as he cradles her head in his AAK style! And he mumbles a sorry as he buries his face into her hair. *mitwa in the bg*

Mr Whatever and Dolly are witnessing this. Dolly tells Mr Whatever that Asad loves Zoya a lot and Mr Whatever was right. Mr Whatever says 'Koi naii baat batao Dolly' 😆 Mr Whatever says 'We have to do something!' 😉

Meanwhile Asad cups Zoya's face and Kisses her forehead and his tears wake her up.

Zoya wakes up in confusion whereas Asad tires his best to smile. Zoya smiles sleepily when she finds herself in his arms. Asad mumbles a Sorry for everything and Forgive me again as he looks into her eyes which are clouding. Zoya protests in a small sleepy voice 'Go Away from here Mr Khan.' as she fidgets to release herself from Asad's arms. 😃 Asad says 'Haan, main chala jaunga. Jaise hamesha karta aya hoon.Apne cheeze ko apne saath leke apne ghar. Hamesha ki tarah' *mitwa in the bg*

Mr Whatever whispers to Dolly that 'Yea dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai! Magar inko pata nahi!' Dolly replies 'Sir you are genius!' Mr Whatever says. 'Koi naaii baat batao Dolly!' 🤣 Mr Whatever continues 'Abb hume hi kuch karna padega Dolly!' 😉

Mr Whatever clears his voices as Asad and Zoya regain their composure. Mr Whatever says that it is time for the flight Zoya should get ready. Asad's eyes go wide in horror as he grips on Zoya hands a little tightly. Zoya's knee tugs at Asad's coat (He is still on his knees 😆) and he feels the ring box there. He immediately takes it out and pulls out the ring and slips it on Zoya's finger.

Mr Whatever and Dolly grin while Zoya is stunned looking at the ring in her fingers all of a sudden. Tears pool into her eyes as Asad declares that Mr Whatever cant deport her as he holds Zoya a bit more tightly. 😆

Zoya looks at her finger and tears roll down her eyes. Next moment she pouts and fidgets from Asad's arms and says she wants to go. 😆

Asad smirks naughtily and says 'Nahi abb kahin nahi ja paogi kyunki hamari sagai hogai!' 🤣 😉

Dolly passes Asad the coke can's opener which Zoya drank from. Asad gives that Zoya and she slips that into Asad's sleek ring finger without a hassle 😉 🤣 🤣

Asad then says with a big grin 'Abhi toh aur bhi nahi!' while Mr Whatever and Dolly laugh privately.

Zoya smiles but she again pouts and finally rests her head on Asad's shoulders as she hold's Asad's elbow. 😃 Asad smiles as he looks at her, relaxing into him.

Mr Whatever starts his 'Apko toh pata hi hai main Kaidey plus Kanoon ka kitna sakht insan hoon, abb ap dono ghar jaiye yaa phir main Miss Faroqqi ko deport kar dunga!'

Zoya clutches on Asad's elbow tightly as she hears the word deport again Asad holds her hands in an assuring way, and helps her to get up. Asad looks around for her luggage and Mr Whatever says he will let the porter drop that to his car, he should take care of Zoya cause she isn't well. Asad nods while Zoya sleeps on Asad's arm.

Asad softly says 'Ghar chale Zoya?' Zoya says yes and says a bye to Mr Whatever and Dolly. Before they leave Mr Whatever interrupts that he would come for a surprise inspection again! Asad pinches the bridge of his nose and says an OK And leaves.

Dolly says 'Sir ap toh Genius hai!' Mr Whatever says 'Koi naii baat batao Dolly!' 😆

Asad helps Zoya into the car and helps her to put on the seat belt. She fidgets and he growls. She remarks 'Complicated Man' he rebukes back 'Confused Ladki'.

Asad drives back home and notices in between that Zoya has fallen asleep again this time a big smile playing on her lips. Asad smiles as he brushes her hair back behind her ear with his free hand and holds her hand while he drives with his left hand back home. 😳

~~~~~~~~End~~~~~~~~

So kya apko lagta hai ki aisa hoga? 😆

I intend to write an OS on this but then i didn't have any patience to sit and pen it down. If you guys like it, IF YOU GUYS DO ( that means lengthy Comments and Likes LMAO yes I am hungry this time 🤣 🤣 🤣 Just kidding! 😆 😆) i promise i would sit back after May exams and give a think to ornate it with flowery words and present you all with a perfecto OS.

Read : I WILL THINK 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

😉 Ankie


Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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ap toh genius hai behen ji😆...dont say kuch nayi baat batao😆
i also feel is type ka hi kuch hoga show mein😃
bt da fact dat zo put a can opener on asad's finger cracked me up🤣
bdw ring ki raaz toh padli bt mereko tu ye bata k tere paas itna tym hone ka raaz kya hai?
tere mein itna patience ati kahase hai 2 write such entertaining posts?😲
anyways luvd reading it & i'm da 1st 1 2 comment😎
chal bohot lambaish comment ho gaya khush ho ja baccha😛
PS-comment kar dia iska matlab ye nahi k kal ki baat main bhul gaya...i'm still angry at u

Edited by ras224 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First things first: Agar aisa sachi mein hogaya to main toh khushi ke maare pagal hi ho jaungi!!!! hayee asad mere laal, agar tumne sachi mein itne romantic hokar ring pehnayi to hum logon ko hyperventillation ho jayega!!! Filmy filmy!!! and coke can opener?!🤣 and i can just imagine BCA's expression when they both enter the house!!! Shock laga laga laga!!!!
This is really good ankie di! itne short notice mein itna kuch imagine karna aur likhna koi easy kaam nahi hai!!! Isiliye apke Gutter dimag ki jai ho!!!
Edited by loveQH - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww, that'd be so cuteee! I wish that happens :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayeee!!! What a filmy love story 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oyee hoyye...!!! :P Kya imagination hai...:D
It was Awesomeee :D Wat a filmy story Appieee :D
But I loved it...:) Hope QH mein bhi aisa hi ho :D

Love you for writing this! :D :*
Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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o wow nice observation ankie...agar aisa hua to finally mai rat bhar so nahi paungi😆...
i would love to seee this...
fingers crossed
Edited by shank201 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a product of ur gutter mind???? its freaking awesome man

you should start writing an ff on asya. it will be too good i bet.

i so hope aisa hi ho, par aisa ku6 nahi hone wala. asad is too shy to be this romantic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was awwwooosome hope we show same thing in the serial to.
Posted: 12 years ago
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Anku this became an os

I loved it

I wish aise he ho par par par dnt 4get and point 2 be noted he is akdu ahmed khann

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