AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK THE LORD YOUR'RE NOT DISCONTINUING! 😃😃😃

As for the ideas... Hmm maybe a little Jab we met :P I like the song called Tera Na Hona though I know it doesn't really fit with the story. But a girl can dream

Another good one is bheege hote 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh, I ain't discontinued.. I m happy now..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice ff

plz.. update soon

i only read the part one amezing


Rukshar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the Note!

Please please put up and Index on Page 1 so that it is easy to locate the chapters on the thread!

Love,
Mrina
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Posted: 12 years ago
don't worry ruksar baji...aap preshan na hoiya...jab bhi time lage toh update kr dena yr...dost hote kis liya hain tang khichna ke liye...so chill...jab bhi waqt mile update it...& ya don't forget to PM me...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Allah ka shukar hai yar! pheww m happy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god you aren't discontinuing this FF as it's one of my favourites, we can understand that you are busy and the promise to update 2-3 super long chapters at once seems amazing, can't wait for them...i would love to see Asad and Zoya get closer and i also want Tanveer's truth to come out so that she can go away from Asad and Zoya's life and they can get married
I mentioned in a previous comment that i would love to see them dance to Saans from Jab Tak Hai Jaan, i love that song, also the song Sunn Raha Hai from Aashiqui 2, i know its a bit of a sad song but i still love it, and if not a dance then it could be when they admit their feelings etc etc.
i know you are busy but still please please please try and update as soon as possible, i can't wait for the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 12

Precap: Zoya received a call telling her that her Aapi and Jeeju passed away in a car accident. She makes arrangements to leave and is getting ready to leave but Dilshad finally comes down and sorts out the misunderstanding. Zoya wonders who could play such a disgusting joke on her. She gets up to go to her room but faints cause of a fever. After she wakes up Asad and Zoya share a very romantic moment between each other but it gets interrupted by Tanveer breaking a flower pot who vows to create misunderstandings between the two of them to separate them.

Tanveer was pacing her room thinking of a way to create major misunderstandings between Asad and Zoya. She knew that they were getting to close and she had to somehow get Zoya out of the picture soon so she could marry Asad and become Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan. She smiled at the idea of being married to him.

In the meantime Asad went back to sit next to Zoya. Zoya was looking everywhere but at Asad her cheeks were a crimson shade of red after what happened between the two of them just minutes ago. Asad looked at Zoya's expression and smiled to himself. He just loved how just his mere touch on her body made her go extremely quiet and she stopped her blabbering and was this very different shy girl. He lifted her chin up and looked into her eyes. Asad smiled at her and leaned in closer to her. His breathe fanned against her cheeks and it sent shivers down her spin. Zoya averted her eyes away from his deep brown orbs which she would lose herself in if she looked at him. Asad smiled seeing a shy and embarrassed Zoya. He pulled her in for a hug and as he spoke his hot breathe fanned her neck she shuddered against his body and Asad's hold on her tightened. He whispered into her ear and he felt her snuggling into his body even more.

Asad: "Mashallah Zoya you look so beautiful when you blush."

Zoya muttered a small thanks to Asad but still don't pull back. She felt so comfortable in his arms and she never wanted to let go. Asad leaned in more and placed some more kisses in the nape of her neck. She felt Zoya clutch at his shirt and gave him better access of her neck. Asad continued placing kisses up to her jaw and then back down to her neck. He bite down hard on her skin and she let out a small groan. Just the way it sounded from her mouth made him lose complete control of his actions. He came up and smacked his lips to hers in a very passionate kiss filled with immense desire. He sucked and nibbled on her lips. Zoya was so lost in the moment that she was trailing her hand all over his body especially his six packs. She had always wanted to touch them ever since she had gotten a glimpse of them when she had walked in on him when we was taking a bath. Asad and Zoya pulled apart in need of oxygen. Asad looked at Zoya and saw her eyes sparkle with passion and desire. He knew that they got lost in the moment and had to make sure that they didn't go too far. Zoya looked up to see Asad staring at her lovingly she turned her gaze to the side and was shocked when she saw what Asad had left on her neck after he bit her. She turned and smacked Asad on the chest sending him a deadly glare.

Zoya: "Allah Miyah what's wrong with you Jahanpana six packs! Look at what you have done to my neck! What will Phupi and Najma say! Najma will literally tease me to death! Ya Allah what do I do now. Mr. Khan you are going to be so sorry for messing with me! I will get back at you!"

Asad: "Give it your best shot Miss Farooqui! But you asked for it! (he said in a teasing tone and was smirking at her) Besides you will never be able to get back at me! So try all you can."

Zoya: "You wait and watch Mr. Khan I will get back at you and that will also happen before this day ends. And when I mean this day ends I mean by midnight."

With that she got up huffed and made her way towards her bathroom. Before she could close the door of the bathroom Asad came and blocked her from shutting the door.

Zoya: "Asad what are you doing? I have to go shower and change and get out of these wet clothes. Please leave so I can freshen up."

Asad: "Are you not going to invite me in to join you?" (in a naughty tone)

Zoya was shocked at Asad's statement and looked away embarrassed and then started to push and yell at Asad out of the way.

Zoya: "Allah Miyah what's wrong with you Mr. Khan! Stop acting like this and get out! I mean where is your tehzeeb and tameez now!"

Asad smiled at her and winked and then leaned in gave her a peck on the lips and turned around and walked out of her room and left a shocked and flustered Zoya standing in her bathroom with her mouth open. She thought that Asad had left but then came back in saying one more thing which quickly made her shut her mouth.

Asad: "Woh Zoya your mouths open you realize that? I mean if you want I can come over and close it for you and make sure to keep it closed for some time!" (In a teasing tone)

Asad shut the door of her room and leaned against her door with a big smile playing on his face. His ammi and sister say him smiling and decided to ask what had happened.

Dilshad: "Asad what happened why are you smiling so much?"

Asad: "Umm…woh…actually….its nothing ammi. I have some work to do. I will be in my room if you need anything."

Dilshad: "Theek hai."

Asad walked into his room and sprawled out on his bed thinking about what took place between him and Zoya. He smiled as he trailed his hands over his lips remembering there passionate kiss. He didn't know what was going on between them but he knew for sure that there was something between the two of them which he could not deny or hide. He also knew that Zoya had the same feelings since she did not hesitate in kissing him back. As he stared up at the ceiling his thoughts went back to Zoya and what all had taken place in the last few days. He still had to find who had set fire to Zoya's room and wanted her dead. He also had to find out who was messing with Zoya and had played such a dirty trick on Zoya by calling her and telling her that her Aapi and Jeeju were killed in a car accident. For some reason he understood that these two incidents were connected and he had to find out how as soon as possible before Zoya was harmed even further.

Hey guys so that's chapter 12. I have no idea what the heck I just wrote cause it just came to me. Not the best update. but it's something I didnt want to leave you guys hanging. I hope you liked it sorry its short I had limited time for the update. Feedback would be great! so please do comment and let me know how it was and if i should continue with chapter 13.

Ruksar 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy!!! Me first!!!!

This was such a CUTE update! I'm so loving this Asad.. ❤️ Unlike Asad in the show who is gutless!

I swear you should go and give tips to the writers of the show! You are one of my favourite writers in the forums dear! ⭐️

WAY TO GO! 👏

Continue super soon!

Will be waiting!

Love,
Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Soo cute their kissing sessions and naughty Asad 😆
Hope he find out it's Tanveer cat chudail behind all the problems and the fire
BUT so short 😭

Can't wait for your next update 😃
Thanks for the PM!

P.S. DID I MENTION I LOVE YOUR WRITING!? I just reread it again Seriously their bond in this FF (SS? not sure lol) is tooo adorable! And he's sooo open about how he feels about her, its refreshing. 🤗
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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