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Posted: 12 years ago
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SWITCH ON UR SPEAKERS

Faces poke through the haze, linger, fade away. They peer down, ask questions. They all ask questions! Do I know who I am? am i hurt anywhere? I know who I am for god sake! I want to speak but my voice seems to be lost somewhere and there's this weird pounding in my ear which I want tell but just cant.. And slowly my eyelids felt so heavy that I had no other option but close them and go to a faraway place.

Faces again! They're all wearing green hats so out fashion I must say. They slip in and out of view. They talk rapidly use words I don't understand. I hear other voices, other noises, beeps and alarms. And always more faces which I don't recognize except for one of them who reminded me. That's funny and I wanna laugh but before that I want to know where am I why is there so much white around me
but before I could find my voice
I fade out.

A man is standing at my bedside. I know him. He has this weird hairstyle and dressed like a pop star, He is wearing such bright colors that my eyes started to hurt and reminds me of someone I know and someone my instinct told me I should remember but my retentivity seems to fail me in remembering but later i started remembering many phupi najma.My head its suddenly so heavy that I can't lift it up.
I fade out.


Zoya slowly gained consciousness..She saw a nurse coming to her and was injecting a injection! but zoya who is scared of injections didn't care what nurse was doing..her eyes were busy searching Asad!

ZOYA:As..a..asad!

Nurse gave a smile and went outside

Zoya got a smile on her face thinking nurse went out to call asad.
But when nurse came back

ZOYA:Asad kaha hai...unhe leke aao!

NURSE:Ma'am koi asad nahi hai aap rest kijiye!

Zoya clenched her fist..

ZOYA:Nahi vo kaha hai batao...

she tried to get up..she was acting like a trapped bird..later nurse tried to make her better but But zoya took the scissors which was at the side table and

ZOYA:Asad ko leke aao varna..
Zoya was shouting and felt weak so she stopped for a second So nurse gave her a injection! After the injection was given zoya left the scissors and it fell on the ground and she rested!

ZOYA:A..a..s.s.d
Tear flowed from the side of her eye and fell on her hand!

There was a person who was witnessing it Ayaan.

ASAD:Hello ayaan.

AYAAN:Aap zoya ke sath aasa kaise kar sakte ho? App jante hai mei janta hun khuda jante hai ki aap zoya se pyaar karte hai toh phir kyun Bhaijaan?

ASAD:TUMHE PATA HAI KYUN! Kyunki vo Gaffur Siddiqui ki beti hai...Abb vo NY mei hai theek hai issiliye mujhe zoya ko bhoolna hoga!

AYAAN:Bhaijaan.. zoya NY mei nahi hai aur vo theek bhi nahi hai!

ASAD:Kyaa hua usse?

Ayaan clenched his teeth in anger..
AYAAN:Uska accident hogaya hai bhaijaan aur iss halat mei bhi vo aapko pooch rahi hai..vo theek nahi hai bhaijaan.Apko abhi pata chala ki vo mamu beti hai uski pehele toh aap usse pyaar karte the na?

ASAD:mei abhi usse pyaar karta hun par...

AYAAN:Apse yeh umeed nahi thi bhaijaan..vo yaha par apko dekhne ke liye mar rahi hai..thadap rahi hai vo jab bhi hosh mei aati hai apki naam leti hai zid karti hai apni jaan leni ki baat karti hai aur behoshi mei bhi apki naam..doctors usko injections deke sula rahe hai kyunki vo kisiki baat nahi sun rahi hai..vo apse mile bina!
A silence was spread all around and asad could here prayers through phone.But later he heard a engage tune.

Asad turned and punched the glass and let his hand pass through the glass..there was a sound of the glass breaking and blood started oozing from asad's hand.

ASAD:Kash mei aur tum"hum" ban pate..Mei tumse milne aaunga zoya tumhe aase nahi chod sakta mei

He went to the drawer opened it and took out her earrings in his mind 'tu jahan mei wahan sang sang unn chalu teri jaise tera aasmaan" He held the earring in his palm

ASAD:Zoyaa!




Do comment 😃
Edited by -cyndu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
loved it.plz update soon.you are awesome ya.
Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

loved it.plz update soon.you are awesome ya.


sachi accha tha cause mujhe hi pata nahi ki meine kasa likha cause i wasn't well but anyways
thanks 😃and i am awesome
😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
AS usual you are amazing
main obvious statements nahi banana chahti hoon
ek doubt that ayaan ko kaise pata chala ki zoe hospital mein hai???
nice part aur asad man why are you so complicated??
and the music is awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: nihamrm

AS usual you are amazing
main obvious statements nahi banana chahti hoon
ek doubt that ayaan ko kaise pata chala ki zoe hospital mein hai???

nice part aur asad man why are you so complicated??
and the music is awesome


Kyunki ayaan is the one who brought her to the hospital but starting zoya ki point of view se hai so she doesn't know that ayaan brough her there! 😃
and ayaan doen't want to go in and see her cause usse pata hai zoya is gonna be more ziddi and might hurt herself 😭
Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Wow dear again a wonderful update from you. Waiting to read next part. Update soon. Get well soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cyndu_


Kyunki ayaan is the one who brought her to the hospital but starting zoya ki point of view se hai so she doesn't know that ayaan brough her there! 😃
and ayaan doen't want to go in and see her cause usse pata hai zoya is gonna be more ziddi and might hurt herself 😭


hayye you added my part i dint see that earlier
aur haan zoya will not hurt herself
and that pop star dude is Ayaan if you dint make it out 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Beautiful! Loved how Ayaan made him realize :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was realy emotionaly
Superb
my heart was crying while reading this
poor zoya
loved it
bt sirf ek hi problem hai
bohoth jaldhy hatham hogaya

please please please
update the next part soon
excited for the confession im hoping to come

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