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Posted: 12 years ago
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please update soon
wonder what will her gift be
i think she is pregnant
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start. Pm me when you update please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!! Sooo adorable and Asad's lil confession was so heart-felt and just oh so perfect! Maaayyynnn ! You're too good! Please PM me for next chapter!!! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice!! pls continue...and pm!! thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: irock321

Awesome!!! Sooo adorable and Asad's lil confession was so heart-felt and just oh so perfect! Maaayyynnn ! You're too good! Please PM me for next chapter!!! :))




loved your comment...thnks!!.😊...more of asya wud be coming in the next part😳...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Nicely written...Please update soon!!!!!😛

PM me...thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys….loved your comments and appreciation…..this is my first asya os and its really special………………….so here is the 2nd part…….hope you all like it:😊

Asad: mai bhi to tumhara gift dekhne ke liye betaab hun….ab batao na!!


Zoya: aise nai "mr. khan"(she said teasingly)…special gift ke liye aapko special mehnat karni padegi!!😉


Asad:matlab??


Zoya: matlab ye ki I will give you some hints and you will have to guess it….mai bhi to dekhun ki "the asad ahmed khan" kitne intelligent hai!!



Asad: ok fine..!!

Zoya:bas ye samajhiye ki aapki ek badi khwahish aaj poori hone wali hai…

Asad smirked hearing this…he cudn't get it.


Asad: meri khwahish?? Kaisi??...ohh…ohh…I get it…you mean…..!!!

Zoya's face lightened up. She thought asad guessed it right.

Zoya: you mean kya asad….??

Asad: are lekin ye khwahish to maine kal raat bhi poori kari thi….ab ye tumhara gift hai to chalo room me chalet hai…..its really good…(he winked and gave his sexy expressions)😉

Zoya blushed hearing this😳 but soon realized that his husband has guessed it all wrong.


Zoya:aghhh!! Mai aapka kya karun asad?? Aap itni jaldi room me kyu phunch jaate hai?? Mai "usss" khwahish ki baat na kr rhi thi…..khair chodiye.😡

Accha aapka gift aisa hai ki you can't see it right now….bas mehsoos kar sakte hain…

Asad: (again confused and after a lot of brain storming his face lightened up)….i get it madame……

Zoya(happily): bataiye asad…jaldi….😃

Asad: tumne shireen aunty ko humare saath rehne ke liye convince kr liya hai!! Omg I love you zoya….just love you!!

Zoya's face again fell down…….her husband the great asad khan,Bhopal's youngest millionaire could be so dumb😔….

Zoya: allah miyan wats wrong wid you...agar shireen aunty convice ho gayi hoti to abbu ne sabse pehle aapko bataya hota…….kahir chodiye……ye aapka last hint hai…so be smart this time..kk……


Asad: tum mujhe gift de rahi ho ya hints bata bata ke apni tarah pagal kr rhi ho……..you knw what iss baar koi dhang ka hint dena….pata to chale aakhir meri zara pagal begum mujhe kya gift dene wali hai!!😆

Zoya(irritated after hearing"pagal"):agar iss baar aap guess nai kr paaye na to kal ke paper me mai notice chapwa doongi ki famous industrialist asad ahmed khan ka dimag kahin kho gaya hai….aapko mile to zarur bataiyega.🤣

Asad: HINTT!!!😡

Zoya: arz kia hai gaur farmaiyega….

Nikaah se hi mukammal koi rishta nai hota,

Nikaah se hi mukammal koi rishta nai hota,

Mukkamal to tab hot hai jab…….????

Asad was so confused in all these hints that he cudn't get what she ws trying to say….and shayari hint..my god he was too bad at sher shayari and all…….the damn irritated asad cudn't take it any more..

Asad: oh god itn bada gift kya hai tumhara? Meri khwahish poori hogi……mai mehsoos kr sakta hun par dekh nai sakta….nikaah mukammal….offoohhh……I can't get it…aise koi gift hota hai kya…..tum kya keh rhi ho…
😕

Zoya cud just smile on her asad………he was looking so cutely confused unaware of what surprise is waiting for him….she wanted to see his reactions and……

Asad: (still blabbering)..pata nai kya keh rhi ho…….clear batao kya gift hai…or else.😕

Zoya: I m pregnant!!(and her face was going all red after tis confession)


Asad: (still murmuring and cudn't get was zoya just said)….oh tum pregnant ho…..i ws so confused….aise hi bata de-ti- itne hints ki kya zarurat thi………….wait a minute(realizing wat she said)…..wat did you said(with a shy smile covering his face)……what did you just said zoya(this time even louder)…

Zoya: I said I m pregnant…..u r gonna be a dad!!(she said it with more confidence this time realizing what this confession meant to asad)😳



Asad(in a very loud voice):oh my god……I mean you r pregnant…..matlab mtlb mai dad……mtlb our baby……dada dada mumma mumma……..right!! you r not kidding hai na(his eyes were all red and his face all brightened like never before)



Zoya:(her eyes were wet too as she knew what this child meant for bith of them especially asad) asad aap dad banne wale ho……..this is true….7 mahine baad you will hold your baby in your hands……..its true!!


Asad(tears rolling down his cheeks and happiness engulfing his face)….zoya I ove you I love I love you….and he cudn't say anything more…..he hugged her 🤗as tightly as he could as if he was holding his whole world in his arms and then swirled her in his arms……


This moment was the most beautiful in his whole life…he so badly wanted to be a father to their child as he was deprived of all the fatherly love in his childhood he wanted to compensate all that with his child and they both were planning this for past 5 months…..and the lucky day came. Zoya was very well aware about asad's sensitivity towards their child……she too was on cloud nine receiving the good news.

Asad:zoya you have completed me today…..jab tum aayi meri life mein…….i thought mujhe kuch nai chahiya ab khuda se aur aaj mujhe wo tohfa bhi de diya tumne jisse humari zindagi bilkul poori ho gayi……mai agar apni saari daulat bhi kharch kar deta to bhi itna khubsurat tohfa nai de pata…….you won zoya you won!! ek saal to kya mai poori zindagi tumhara ghulam hun……THANKYOU for this beautiful gift….(his eyes were wet)❤️❤️

Zoya: (wiping his tears)I can't see you cry ……pata hai na!!



And they both smiled after this….they both tossed their foreheads together and asad put his hands on her belly and said"baby come soon,ur dad can't wait to hold you in his hands" dropping a kiss where their love was growing…..



This was strange…..two people,madly in love, gifted each other the most beautiful moments of their life and made the other cry with their gift………kya aapko ye bepanaah mohabbat QUBOOL HAI??❤️❤️

Pheww……..i m done……..tell me how was it……I knw it was kabaada ……….tell me shud I end it here or shud I change it into a ff with asya pregnancy zone??

Hit the like button and drop your precious comments….they encourage me to write more….

With love,

Jiya!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Haeee dat was such a cute ending..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
that was super sweet...
loved it...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guessed right man! she was preggy! heheh! Cute cute! loved it!

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