AsYa OS ~ When I Found You! ~ - Page 5

luved it...👏...and emotional too...actually i want a mitwa moment tooo

That was absolutely lovely!! (: I do hope something along these lines actually happens in the show. I would love to see Tanveer get kicked out in the most unceremonious way possible :p

I loved it!
While I was reading this I knew that I either this is dedicated to Ankie or she persuaded you to write this OS. I was right!
I too wish this would come true!

loved it...really wish tanveer is out of their lives now...

Originally posted by: webuser7

Awesome! There are some truly talented writers on this forum! You need to send it to the CVs so they don't make us wait too long for the AsYa love confession and kick Tanveer out of their lives!

Originally posted by: nihamrm

wow another mangalpurish os

the only difference is this time its ajmer wala asad

and i love this asad more cause he isnt scared of showing his feelings for zoya anymore and another character i loved in your os is dilshad
yes cause she slapped that billo
and Why don't you yourself get lost! that was the best line in the whole os well according to me
and hope something like this will happen in the show
but lets face he truth asad isnt that smart to figure out the true colors of tannu so i dunno what to say
but this one is amazing as usual actually its better cause its a bit dramatic

Wow!!! The mangalpur-dahad wala asad is back! And how! This is exactly what i want the ajmer track to be like! Just AWESOME sadie!! Thanks 4 d pm!

Originally posted by: loveQH

Wow!!! The mangalpur-dahad wala asad is back! And how! This is exactly what i want the ajmer track to be like! Just AWESOME sadie!! Thanks 4 d pm!

this was SUPERB! how do you write so amazing things? I loved it so much. Asad going crazy for Zoya, the family crying & praying for her safety, n Zoya trying to gather all her strength to get back to her family, it was just superb. I really loved how Asad dragged dat witch out of the house, she supposed to be thrown out this way exactly. I hope Asad does this in QH too. Asad searching for her frantically reminded me of mangalpur, their hug n the kiss on the forehead showed da deep concern n love Asad has for her.