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amala

@zoyaquboolhai

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

luved it...👏...and emotional too...actually i want a mitwa moment tooo

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

That was absolutely lovely!! (: I do hope something along these lines actually happens in the show. I would love to see Tanveer get kicked out in the most unceremonious way possible :p

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@Asya6

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I loved it!
While I was reading this I knew that I either this is dedicated to Ankie or she persuaded you to write this OS. I was right!
I too wish this would come true!

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

loved it...really wish tanveer is out of their lives now...

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: webuser7
Awesome! There are some truly talented writers on this forum! You need to send it to the CVs so they don't make us wait too long for the AsYa love confession and kick Tanveer out of their lives!

Thanks for the comment 😳

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nihamrm
wow another mangalpurish os
the only difference is this time its ajmer wala asad
and i love this asad more cause he isnt scared of showing his feelings for zoya anymore and another character i loved in your os is dilshad
yes cause she slapped that billo
and Why don't you yourself get lost! that was the best line in the whole os well according to me
and hope something like this will happen in the show
but lets face he truth asad isnt that smart to figure out the true colors of tannu so i dunno what to say
but this one is amazing as usual actually its better cause its a bit dramatic

Thanks for the comment! 😃

yep u r ryt Aak aint that smart to figure out the real face of tanveer but it's a fiction and anything can happen in it! 😆

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow!!! The mangalpur-dahad wala asad is back! And how! This is exactly what i want the ajmer track to be like! Just AWESOME sadie!! Thanks 4 d pm!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: loveQH
Wow!!! The mangalpur-dahad wala asad is back! And how! This is exactly what i want the ajmer track to be like! Just AWESOME sadie!! Thanks 4 d pm!

thanks for the comment! glad you liked it! 😳

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

this was SUPERB! how do you write so amazing things? I loved it so much. Asad going crazy for Zoya, the family crying & praying for her safety, n Zoya trying to gather all her strength to get back to her family, it was just superb. I really loved how Asad dragged dat witch out of the house, she supposed to be thrown out this way exactly. I hope Asad does this in QH too. Asad searching for her frantically reminded me of mangalpur, their hug n the kiss on the forehead showed da deep concern n love Asad has for her.

love.