OS: Problem, Mr Khan? (last part pg 37)

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Yaaayy!! What a wonderful surprise!? Another chapter... I loved the surprise :)) And a lovely update! Great work and thanksss sooo much for the pm.. I really appreciate it! Now, I can't wait til the next part :)

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Perfect. Now , just make zoya's confession hell romantic. I loved this part. Do continue soon!!!

~Dee~

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Wowww!! the first part just left me grinning 😳 ahh the description of Mr. Khans abs .. hayeee ☺️ i mean even i would stand there and stare at them like Zoya 😳 i mean.. "Come on Mr Khan.. aap bhi toh dekhne layak cheez hai" ☺️ .. Jahapanah Six Pack 😆 loved the first bit.. Jahapanah Bond to Zoya's rescue.. half naked 😳 but I could picture Zoya's expression.. literally 🤣 their little argument and Asad's sarcastic response made me giggle 😆

wasn't really expecting the return of ammi and tamatar .. an unexpected entry that went quite well for me.. i could picture their faces when they saw Asad and Zoya like that from when he was describing Zoya recently from the episode.. Thats how I was picturing Dilshaad and tamatar 😆 and tbh.. their expressions fit in perfectly with this scene.. well described 👍🏼

another unexpected entry was Ayaan.. But i couldnt stop laughing when he entered .. i dont even know why.. but i was laughing with his entry 🤣 kudos to Ayaan for bringing up the previous AsYa fight.. if that didnt happen then they wouldnt have gotten into an argument and Asad wouldnt have left everyone including Zoya awestruck with his "I got jealous because I love you dammit!" definitely has to be the best dialogue of this update for me 😳 Poor AsYa had to leave because of embarrassment that they caused themselves because of an argument 😆 Mr Khan had left Zoya on her own to handle the situation.. How mean! 😆 but Zoya is our dramebaaz.. she managed to run from the embarrassing situation 😆

Great to see that Dilshaad, tamatar and Ayaan will work together on 'Mission Zoya's Confession' i can't wait to read what's coming next 🥳But really after reading this all I could picture was Asads six packs because of how you described them so perfectly.. A Greek God ☺️ left me daydreaming for quite a few minutes 😳 🤣

Amaziiing update 🤗

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Awesome part.
I loved the cute fight of ASYA.
Finally Asad confessed.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

1st-I loved loved loved the update.It was full of fun,and also romantic!! Awesome combo!!👏 Loved how Asad confessed accidentally.😆

2nd-It is so easy to convince you to write more.😆 Some writers eat too much bhaao.😛 It's nice to see you so sweet and down-to-earth.🤗

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Wowww!! the first part just left me grinning 😳 ahh the description of Mr. Khans abs .. hayeee ☺️ i mean even i would stand there and stare at them like Zoya 😳 i mean.. "Come on Mr Khan.. aap bhi toh dekhne layak cheez hai" ☺️ .. Jahapanah Six Pack 😆 loved the first bit.. Jahapanah Bond to Zoya's rescue.. half naked 😳 but I could picture Zoya's expression.. literally 🤣 their little argument and Asad's sarcastic response made me giggle 😆

wasn't really expecting the return of ammi and tamatar .. an unexpected entry that went quite well for me.. i could picture their faces when they saw Asad and Zoya like that from when he was describing Zoya recently from the episode.. Thats how I was picturing Dilshaad and tamatar 😆 and tbh.. their expressions fit in perfectly with this scene.. well described 👍🏼

another unexpected entry was Ayaan.. But i couldnt stop laughing when he entered .. i dont even know why.. but i was laughing with his entry 🤣 kudos to Ayaan for bringing up the previous AsYa fight.. if that didnt happen then they wouldnt have gotten into an argument and Asad wouldnt have left everyone including Zoya awestruck with his "I got jealous because I love you dammit!" definitely has to be the best dialogue of this update for me 😳 Poor AsYa had to leave because of embarrassment that they caused themselves because of an argument 😆 Mr Khan had left Zoya on her own to handle the situation.. How mean! 😆 but Zoya is our dramebaaz.. she managed to run from the embarrassing situation 😆

Great to see that Dilshaad, tamatar and Ayaan will work together on 'Mission Zoya's Confession' i can't wait to read what's coming next 🥳But really after reading this all I could picture was Asads six packs because of how you described them so perfectly.. A Greek God ☺️ left me daydreaming for quite a few minutes 😳 🤣

Amaziiing update 🤗

awww THANK YOU mishti!!!!!!!!! i LOOOVVEEDDD your comment!!!!!! thank you for reading!!!! and i LOOOVVVEEE ksg's 6 packs so i just HAD to bring them in, at least ONCE!!!!! 😆 wish i could somehow bring his tattoos into the story... but that won't be right, coz AAK doesn't do tattoos... anyway, im going off the topic, here... thank you, once again, for such a lovely comment!! i promise to update the next part soon!!!! 🤗

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
1st-I loved loved loved the update.It was full of fun,and also romantic!! Awesome combo!!👏 Loved how Asad confessed accidentally.😆

2nd-It is so easy to convince you to write more.😆 Some writers eat too much bhaao.😛 It's nice to see you so sweet and down-to-earth.🤗

Firstly, thnx for reading!! and LOVE u for commenting!!! 🤗 secondly, yeaahhh... i get pretty excited seeing all your lovely comments... so i become greedy and feel like writing more and more... so that i get to read such comments more and more!! 😆 so, yup! im not a tough nut to crack! 😉😆😛