OS: Problem, Mr Khan? (last part pg 37) - Page 16

Originally posted by: kohli4ever

Aww. Such a cute confession! Zoya eventually did win the race of thier hearts... 😳

I really want Asad and Zoya to call eachother by name now in the show.. And it was so nice that u showed that in this OS! 😊

Amazing OS! Loved reading it!

Originally posted by: darkangel93

awww THANK YOU!!!!!!! i was waiting for you to comment, did u know that????? and im SO glad u made it here, so soon!!!!!! 🤗 you want another part???? i'll hv to crack my head open for that... 😆 i rarely get any good ideas, but i'll try. definitely! thanks, once again, for reading!!!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Part 1

I loved how it all started with Zoyas craziness 😆

I was happy to see that it all started off with the portrayal of Mona&Rabarts friendship 👍🏼

As usual .. Zoya's crazy behavior&language made me laugh.. literally.. especially the "its called being an ass" line.. i couldnt stop laughing 🤣

LOL Asad couldn't stand Ayaan and Zoya spending time together & came out of his room to ask Ayaan to leave 😆

I coud literally picture Ayaans face when Zoya mentioned the engagement 😆

Zoya going all sherni mode and shouting at Asad .. Asad must have been like 😳 the line "saved by the bell" came to mind when Ayaans phone rang saving Asad from further embarrassment in front of his brother 😆

absolutely loved the lines you wrote for Zoya while she was letting all her feelings out in form of tears in front of Mr. Khan 😳

wonderfully written 🤗

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Part 2

Firstly I was like 😭 😳 😲 🥱 🥳 ☺️ when I read this part.. as you can see its all mixed emotions.. i didnt know how to react 😆

finally Mr. Khan let it all out 👏

the words you chose again.. wowww!! if only the CVs could take those lines and actually used them in the show itself 😳 the words were sooo beautiful.. could clearly picture out how he was in love & frustrated at the same time because he couldnt handle the turmoil going on inside his heart 😳

you should be part of the QH team 😆 you wrote such a beautiful confession scene.. it was so serene how Zoya didnt utter a single word and just consented to Asad to show him that her feelings are mutual just by a beautiful hug ☺️

loved how he told Zoya he cant see tears in her eyes 😳

then we get back our crazy Zoya 😆 Asad must have been thinking that he fell in love with a psycho.. after all that happened.. all she cared about was food 🤣

Loved the last bit "so you're still going to call me Mr.Khan" 😆

Beautifulll update 🤗