NEW AsYa FF : Broken Strings| Chap 4-Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Meself
Girl do you realize how heartbreaking that sounded? Firstly this song carries such a melancholic aura and then next that we have is an update that makes you "nahiii" in the most dramatic way. I simply can't wait for the next part of the story! What happed between them? Zoya carries her maiden name and is not ready to acknowledge Asad. And Asad seems to be one of those self destroying artist. I so wanna pull my hair out. You've go to update soon. Please!!

P.S. @bluflame: Main chodugi nahi tumko. You reserved it before I did!!!

LOL... I am sorry about that gal!!!

But... I'll try and give some AsYa in the next update hun...

Promise...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Rockstar in short! BRAVO. 👏

@ Bhaijan! : WOHOO! You are THE APPII of the forum 😃 :-*

Thankswa Anki ji...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Hey yashi, loved the updates really intriguing FF. Continue soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Hey Yash, dis was not random but AWESOME. u described their situation so well. so dey r still in love wid each other. update soon abt their past.

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giee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

"ASAD AHMED KHAN. The man she had loved with all her heart who took so much care of it only to break it and crush it into pieces as she claimed. To say that she had changed her feelings for him would have been foolishness. She had changed her feelings that she held for herself. She despised herself for loving him so much. She despised for not being able to hate him for whatever had happened. She hated herself for he still had that same effect on her that could pull her towards him" 😲👏

WOW SIMPLY WOW 👏
i loved each n every word of it
but it was so heart wrenching 💔
wat happened ?????
cummon dont leave us like dat ?? 😆
i really wanna know
dey r sooo much in love dat,each odr's name can make dem cry der eyes out 😭
n wen r dey goonna meet?? 😲
ohh gosh i have sooo manyy question??
wen r u going to answer dem?? 😆
please answer dem sooonn
pleeejjj *puupy face* 😃

I LOVED D UPDATE 👍🏼
U R AN AWESOME WRITER
DIS STORY IS JUST SOO DIFFERENT N GRIPPING 👏
U HAVE CONTINUE SOON
I LL BE WAITING 😳

n ya thanx for d pm 😃

Edited by giee - 12 years ago