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NephilimByHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

three parts in a go ..

girl u r amzing .. i can even imazine the concert ,,, guitar .. crying zoya .. helpless nazma .. pacifying karthik n questioning tannu ..

u handled every character like a piece of art ...

loved it .. n would be eager to read next part .. do pm me vn u ll nxt update ..

till dn keep thinking .. good stuff about ur writing 😉

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Buddy u rnawesome...I m in love with this story. Ever little detail of emotion is described so beautifully. I look forward to read more.. Please update the next part soon.

Btw..congrats!

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kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

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Unreserved

Allah Miyaan! Sweetuu, this was so beautiful.

Poor soul, my Zoya She's so heart broken. My heart bleeds to see her in this state.🥺

Itna dard, itni takleefein, itna sunapan.

Asad is such a big jerk

Why couldn't he trust Zoya and why didn't he trust her? What happened that brought them where they are today?

I know I'm being restless but your update made me so

And yeah, how could I forget to mention that the flashback was as beautiful as AsYa are

Mashallah! You rock girl. You just rock.

Aise hi aap mere favorite writer thodi na ho Come here for a jappi🤗🤗🤗

P.S. I'm sorry sweetuu for not unreserving the previous reserves

Oh God! I see you throwing chappals at me

Main abhi saare unresrve karti hoon.

I'm so sorry

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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kajenvirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

again an awesome update :)
loved this..

so tanu is a positive character? or is her evil side hidden? ;)

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
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Allah Miyaan! Sweetuu, this was so beautiful.
Poor soul, my Zoya She's so heart broken. My heart bleeds to see her in this state.🥺
Itna dard, itni takleefein, itna sunapan.
Asad is such a big jerk
Why couldn't he trust Zoya and why didn't he trust her? What happened that brought them where they are today?
I know I'm being restless but your update made me so
And yeah, how could I forget to mention that the flashback was as beautiful as AsYa are
Mashallah! You rock girl. You just rock.
Aise hi aap mere favorite writer thodi na ho Come here for a jappi🤗🤗🤗

P.S. I'm sorry sweetuu for not unreserving the previous reserves
Oh God! I see you throwing chappals at me
Main abhi saare unresrve karti hoon.
I'm so sorry

Jappi pa le Jungleee!!!!

🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

And Aaawww that was such a sweet comment!!!

Dont worry... I am not gonna throw Chappals at u...😉

Main apni Junglee ko kyu Marungi??

I Laaaooo u Jaani...

I am glad u liked it...

And I am even more glade that I am one of your fav writer!!!

*blush* * blush*

😳

Loads of love...

Yashi

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: giee
excellent piece of writing 👏
i just loved it
n that song...wowww 😳
suited them ssooo well

but i still have soo many questions
did he doubt her cheating on him??
why is najma living with zoya?? 😕
n is tannu living with asad?? 😲
what happened??

ufff inne saare questions 😆
aap answer kab doge??
please jaldi jaldi dena 😃

n AGAIN THE UPDATE WAS FREAKING FABULOUS 👍🏼
n thanx for the pm 😃

Hey there... yeah, too many questions na? Sabka jawaab mil jaayega!!

And u liked the song??? I am toh in love with it!!!

And once again... I am glad u liked it!!

Yashi

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
Amezing yaar... Its caught my breathe
and Tannu z Good here???!!
*SHOCKED*
Really??
Updt soon

Thank u so much hun...

I am glad u liked it

Yashi

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: shivangi1112
three parts in a go ..
girl u r amzing .. i can even imazine the concert ,,, guitar .. crying zoya .. helpless nazma .. pacifying karthik n questioning tannu ..
u handled every character like a piece of art ...

loved it .. n would be eager to read next part .. do pm me vn u ll nxt update ..
till dn keep thinking .. good stuff about ur writing 😉

So this piece of work is readable in one go?????

*shocked**

But I am glad that you liked it.

Your comment made me look up to my work yaar😛

Thank u!!

Yashi

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Yasshii! You dont write Crapopo at all darling! 🤗

Very nicceeooo it was! 😳

Its just as nice s this >

Waiting for the next partoo 😳

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Buddy u rnawesome...I m in love with this story. Ever little detail of emotion is described so beautifully. I look forward to read more.. Please update the next part soon.

Btw..congrats!

Hey... I am glad u liked the story.

Thank u so much for the complements...

the next chap will be updated soon I guess...

Yashi