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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: kajenvirman
again an awesome update :)
loved this..
so tanu is a positive character? or is her evil side hidden? ;)

Jawaab mil jaayega Mohetarma 😉

And yeah... Thank u😳

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..
beautiful update dear...i am really shocked to see tannu as positive character!!!
i want to know what exactly happened in the past...continue soon!!

Hey dear... Thank u so much..

The past will be revealed soon..

Yashi

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Madhumita Saravanan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

superb update!!!

Please Update sooner..

PM me ples!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Yashuu, it wasnt crap..

i stared at the screen as if a movie was being played in front of my eyes.

*facepalm* shak insaan ko kisi nalaiq nahi chorta.. 😳

ufff dono tarap rahe hain, jaldi update kar dein so that their agonizing pain gets some relief 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

I womder what happened between AsYa man! :O

This breaks my heart seeing Zoe likke this!

And am i seeing things or tannu is actually good here??

Flashback was beautifuuul

Please update soon Yashi! ❤️

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Hey ...

That was just mindblowing !!!

You've got NO cloue how wonderfully well you write and it WASN'T crap ... :)

Seriously !! I could visualize everything happening ...

Whoa !!! Asad didn't trust her ???

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Hey interesting take on AsYa.. look forward to reading the rest!

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Asyalover
wow great ff plzzz pm

Sure hun...

Thank u so much!!

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: blueflames
Yashuu, it wasnt crap..
i stared at the screen as if a movie was being played in front of my eyes.

*facepalm* shak insaan ko kisi nalaiq nahi chorta.. 😳

ufff dono tarap rahe hain, jaldi update kar dein so that their agonizing pain gets some relief 😳

Firstly I am so sorry Aapi ke aapko I didnt send the PM properly...

And secondly... Thank u so much!!!!

And I Promise...

Sab kuch theek ho jaayega..😊

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Peppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

oh my GOD!!!! i just caught up with ur ff and i LOOOVVVEEEDDD it!!!!!!! wow wow WOW!!!!! u write so well, yashi!!!!! ammmaaazzziiinnnggg story!!!! i could actually feel their pain and their helplessness!!!!! PLEASE update soon and pm me!!!!!