Shadows FF Last Chapter & Epilogue (strictly 16+)

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#601

That was simply beautiful.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#602

What a sad past...
At least asad be man enough to make that move...
to come to her... clear the misunderstanding

Poor zoya she have bad past...
suffered a lot...

like very bold asad...

finally their married ...

love the update...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Hey Dear,

This was really nice. Finally a happy ending otherwise I was scared that you were planning on a sad one. But this was just great.

Asad is really sweet. I was surprised at his sudden entrance & proposal but it all showed his strong undying love for her.

Zoe's past has really been harsh. No wonder she was an ice queen in the start. You really have to guard your emotions after such a big mishap in your life.

But thankfully, now the past can be put where it belongs, in the past & they can step in to a bright future which they certainly have. I really love them.

Thanks for writing & sharing this beautiful story with us.

Do continue writing please.

Love lots..

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Omgg !

Zoya had such a bitter pastt!!

Am happy they got married 😳

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

awesome part👏

so they r finally married🥳

Zoya's past was really painful😭

give epilogue soon😉

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shewolf.

@shewolf

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#607

aww this is over :( damn you need to come up with something new soon.

I loved the ending but I wanted to know more about how they spent their days without each other, lol I'm a sadist 😆 but then every thing is fine and it makes up for that xD and Zoya's past :( Farhaan was such an animal. :x I'm so glad Zoya came out of that (: and now Asad and Zoe are together <3

give us an epilogue soon :)

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Wow! What an awesome update...totally loved it. Asad came back 😊
Zoe's past was painful glad she has Asad by her side now.
They got married 😊 and the last Asya scene was hot:)

I loved this story and will miss it a lot. Do give an epilogue if you can. Please start another story soon. You are an awesome writer. Thanks again for sharing this lovely story with us.

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Read lst two orts onbe go
Awesome
Loved it

Waiting for epilogue

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#610

I enjoyed reading your story; while the premise was nothing new and what i have seen in this forum over and over again - hot and handsome Asad, many women, never been in love breaks the icy exterior of Zoya Farooqui who has had a terrible time in love...you kept our interest by inviting us into a lovely wedding.

However, your ending did not fit in well with the style of the story - the light and warmheartedness of romance with a tragic closure with the two departing over a misunderstanding did not fit well but was a still a good ending and did offer the reader an interesting twist. I believe your viewers will be disappointed...and i have a way to bring it back...

Overall, I liked that what you wrote was your work and an original as i have seen stories here that look plagiarized...

Perhaps you can share with other writers what it is that allows you to write the way you do...