FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Wow what a lovely update...only zoya can be chirpy even in such a situation...and asad was so sweet..."aap kahen to pura mumbai darshan kara doon" well i guess asad par zoya ka asar pad gaya hai 😆...beautifully written...continue soon😊...i am so excited to see if asad gives zoya the gift and how?really looking forward to the gift scene...

Thanks Anushree...yeah their banter has to go on even in the most serious situations😃

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#892

Wow! Another awesome update. 😊

Loved how Asad teased Najma. That was so cute. And AsYa were adorable. Loved the way Asad rescued her and her reaction when they reached home. "Itni jaldi aa gaye." 😆

Looking forward to the next update. Want to see how he gifts her the watch and her reaction. 😳

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paagal_

@paagal_

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

That was such a adorable update! cont soon :D

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Homaira

@hummi16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Amazing update xx luv da way asad saves his musibat xx plzzz update soon nd plzz pm me once updated xx

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: s120
Wow! Another awesome update. 😊

Loved how Asad teased Najma. That was so cute. And AsYa were adorable. Loved the way Asad rescued her and her reaction when they reached home. "Itni jaldi aa gaye." 😆

Looking forward to the next update. Want to see how he gifts her the watch and her reaction. 😳

Thanks Shreya...let's see how they spend the second half of the day/evening on Eid😳

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

Read all parts this weekend! Wow! How did I miss this before? Glad I caught up! Great story! Asad's a naval officer! The whole story is so different than the show! One constant is their nok zokh! Loved it as I was missing seeing it on TV! The early "miss the ship" escapade made me relive my all time favorite movie DDLJ! Poor Dilshaad has cancer! Please don't kill her, instead cure her completely! Wonder what the history between Dilshaad/Rashid and Ghafoor is? Is it related to Zoya's ammi's death? Also, who is Aapi's Ammi? If she is mean, is it Razia?! Will Asad gift the watch to Zoya? Will Akram show up when Asad is in town? What will Zoya do when Asad leaves? Will Asad get a transfer to Mumbai? Lots of tracks to unfold!

Enjoyed reading it. Now can you please write one Tho OS?!

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: hummi16
Amazing update xx luv da way asad saves his musibat xx plzzz update soon nd plzz pm me once updated xx

Thanks Hummi...Asad is always there when she lands in trouble...😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: webuser7
Read all parts this weekend! Wow! How did I miss this before? Glad I caught up! Great story! Asad's a naval officer! The whole story is so different than the show! One constant is their nok zokh! Loved it as I was missing seeing it on TV! The early "miss the ship" escapade made me relive my all time favorite movie DDLJ! Poor Dilshaad has cancer! Please don't kill her, instead cure her completely! Wonder what the history between Dilshaad/Rashid and Ghafoor is? Is it related to Zoya's ammi's death? Also, who is Aapi's Ammi? If she is mean, is it Razia?! Will Asad gift the watch to Zoya? Will Akram show up when Asad is in town? What will Zoya do when Asad leaves? Will Asad get a transfer to Mumbai? Lots of tracks to unfold!

Enjoyed reading it. Now can you please write one Tho OS?!

Thanks RK..I am honored that u read all the parts. I have to go back and recall some of the details I have written😆

Very valid and apt questions...u are close on some of those guesses😉

will write an update to the 'tho' series tomorrow...assuming we don't have much to discuss on the show

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Vineeta...yeah, you caught that hint from that one line from Asad😉...after all Zoya ka character growth dikhaana hai 😃

I have incorporated some details about the Muslim traditions based on info given to me by some online Muslim friends...I am learning too. I was hoping QH would educate us but right now I have learnt 101 methods of breaking weddings and killing people from the show...not much about Islam

😆 😆 Hopefully you'll never have a need to put what you learnt to use! Don't forget, we have also learnt how to torture people, be dumb and dumber, slapping (how many have we seen so far?! One more coming up!), and the quintessential one: how to have 2 spouses/relationships!

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#900

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks RK..I am honored that u read all the parts. I have to go back and recall some of the details I have written😆

Very valid and apt questions...u are close on some of those guesses😉

will write an update to the 'tho' series tomorrow...assuming we don't have much to discuss on the show

We are honored and blessed to be able to read your wonderful writings! Yay for the OS! I'll look forward to it! 😊