Asad Zoya FF OS:Normal is overrated - Page 2

You write very well... This OS is beautiful and captures their emotions very well. 😊

AWESOME!! well written... love the description of feelings!!

This is really great! You wrote their emotions beautifully 😃

Very well written. Loved how you portrayed their emotions. It was beautifully descriptive

Wow... that was really good,,, I could feel every emotion that you had described,,, really good writing!

Originally posted by: Aphroditefallen

"They were standing close. So close. Not close enough. Their bodies did not touch, but their clothes kept brushing. Their heads were bowed into each other'foreheads brushing but not resting'.breathing the same air. Strawberries and musk. This moment'this closeness'.they felt at once wound tight but also peaceful.

Zoya's eyes were focused on her hand resting on his chest. She could feel his heart pounding a beat against her hand; and, had the urge to lay her head on his chest, close her eyes and wait to see if their heartbeats would sync. She wanted to look at him, but did not think she could handle looking into his eyes right then. It was too much'yet she wanted more. More of what'.she did not know... She just knew she wanted to stay there forever."

this is simply beautiful.. perfect words to describe the situation.. need less to say u write beautifully.. plz do me a favour continue writing.. this touched me..:)🤗

Thank you so much. A lot of that part was added in the final edit, so I am glad it worked; and am immensely grateful for your kind words😳. I will do my best to write more. *hugs back*

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Oh... it was beautiful, main dil tham ke pad rhi thi, abhi kuch hoga.(Dirty mind)... but it was wonderfully written and their emotions wer so beautifully explained... keep writing...

aww thank you so much! And don't worry I plan on writing more; hopefully some of it will satiate that dirty mind 😉. But in all seriousness, thank you for reading and commenting😳 .

Originally posted by: havokhotline

Okay, if you dont write more I will send you to jail cause that's a crime, fellas! It's a frickin' crime!

This was the most amazingly descriptive Oneshot I've read in a very very long time! You've painted the most beautiful picture of this in my head.

You're such a brilliant writer! Your flair for language is astounding. :D

Please write more? Please please please :D

Haha ur so funny! and so kind😳. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I promise to write more😊.