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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

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OMGJKGIVGHGJMCBVHKM!!

THAT was wonderful!!!

I could actually imagine something like that happening 😃

Aweee poor Zoya,she is so broken after all that happened. I love how you portrayed how changed she had become and how Asad was the only one who could bring that old zoya back!
Only he can be her pillar of strength and bring her back on track!

How sweet was it of him to try comfort her. Its obvious he cant offer more physical comfort because he is afraid of admiting the love between them but in the end, He cannot let her walk away. He will never let her be so broken.

The last scene was just... 😳 So intense!

Seriously Sru, I can actually see this happening! Asad pulling her back like that gave me a flashback to Teri Meri dance sequence.

Its a beautiful OS Dear!

Thank u so so much for dedicating it to us! 🤗
Love u meri mona darling! ❤️ 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
Awww, it was so sweet :)

Thanks! :)

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Res :)
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Oye Hoye Shruti, what an OS👏
Aww, what a cute OS, I should say
Beautifull written
Loved the ending
Thanks for the OS and for the PM hun
<3 Farhana

Thanku ji thanku. 😆

Vaise, tu bhi kuch kam nahi hai. 😉

Originally posted by: Drea_QH1fan
Awww this was sooo nice 😊

Thanks! :D

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
Sruthi, hun this was amazing and so well written! you need tto write more. I loved it :D

Thank you so much dear! 🤗 Yes, I will definitely write more and more. After all, it's Asad and Zoya! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Irresistible.
Res.

NAWWW <3

Sozza, I haven't been updating mah res-es, but
The god damn wifi I have here is SLOW.

SLOW.

So imma update when I get back, kay?

Love you <3
x

I'm so angry. You expect me to wait till April 26th?

Anyway, I'll wait.

Originally posted by: havokhotline
This was the best thing to wake up to in the morning! :D

Beautiful oneshot with so many emotions all over the place. :) I could literally picture the entire scene in my head, something which you get credit for!

I loved the chemistry between Asad and Zoya! Moreover, I loved how your writing was so detailed, it was like you were etching the scene into my peanut-sized brain.

Gosh, wonderful writing! :D

Thank you so much hunn, feels great to see such good feedback. 😳

Glad I could make you smile early in the morning. :D

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight
Awww what a beautiful OS Sru!!

Thank you re Shikha! 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveAsYa222
Omg that was just wowww 😳😳😳 I wish u were the CV 😆 Then we could have such amazing scenes to look forward to 😃

LOL! I loved those pics! 😆 Don't worry, I'll surely write more. ;)

Glad you liked it! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sucker4arhiluv
Awww it was soo cute! ❤️

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
Sruthi that is so perfect. DAMN! I have no words left right now. That's my kinda OS. I absolutely loved it and I had Goosebumps during AsYa part. You are a brilliant writer hun. Keep writing more please. Im a fan now.

Kirannn! 🤗 I knew you would like it. ;)

Haha, I'll surely write more. :P Thanks again. ❤️