An AsYa OS : UNTIL YOU (part 3 page 20) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Laila2009

😆

It was not that great, but let me re-edit it for you and give you some other fun lines you can use:

For me, this comeback from Zoya is what was missing; how about something like this with Zoya saying - that it did not matter how a woman was dressed, these men would have harassed her...and then she asks him, I'm dressed this way, but you didn't bother me...so perhaps it is because you're either not interested in women,or because you might have this tehzeeb in you that you think should only belong to women? And then she flashes her dimple smile and winks.

And then Asad gets flustered and reprimands her under his breath with "Batameez ladki."

Zoya asks, "Me batameez? Seriously Mr. Khan...i'm the victim here,..not those guys...it takes a real man to know where to put the blame..'

Asad (fuming): I'll show you what and who a real man is...

Zoya (smirking): Really, and how do you plan on doing that (batting her eyelashes)

Asad: (annoyed with her; not wishing to entertain her further): Get in the car

Zoya: (laughing and challenging him): Are you going to show me there or are you going to save it for later?

OK...there you can have some fun with lines like that..

Originally posted by: Enchantress

ahan!!! Its really good. Even me bored of weekends , no QH you see... can't stay a single day without watching Asya... But, then these short stories over here make me all happy and jump and bounce with joy. Perfect!!!

I wonder who is the girl our Akdu ahmed khan gonna meet, Is it zoya herself or someone else.. Well then he should be happy because either way he doesn't need to go looking for another girl when his girl is there with him.

Eagerly waiting for the update.

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~