AsYa OS: Wait for me Zoya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Helllooo, hehe, It's Farhana, and I'm back with another OS, Again this is a random OS, okay all of my OS's are random :P lol😆

But any way enjoy

……………

"I love him? Oh my god I love him! I love him!!"

She screamed jumping up on her bed

"I love him, I love him, and I love him!"

Her sister walked into the room hearing such ruckus.

"Zoya? Love who?" He sister said shocked

Zoya turned, still atop her bed, and a huge grin on her face

"Appi!"

Zoya jumped down and started spinning her sister around

"Appi, I love him, I'm in love with Asad!" She screamed in excitement

Her sister's jaw dropped

"Asad, voh Akdru Asad?" Zeenat asked

Zoya looked down blushing

"Haan, Akdru Asad"

Zeenat's face lit up with a smile.

"Oh Zoya, I'm so happy for you!"

She pulled her sister into a hug

A couple of second's later Zeenat pulled out of the hug

"Wait, did you tell him yet?" Zeenat asked

Zoya shook her head, and her smile faded

"Kaise kahoon, what if he doesn't feel the same?"

Zeenat smiled

"I'm sure he feels the same, bhala meri behen ko kaun pyaar nahi kar sakta?"

Zoya smiled

"Meh abhi jaati hoon usse milne!"

She ran out

"Zoya sambhalke!" He sister yelled from behind

……………

Zoya sat in the car and let out a deep breath

"Asad, I love you…. No if I tell him directly it'll be too weird"

She put her hands around the wheel

"Lets try again. Asad, bohot dino se meh tumhe…no too filmy"

She let out another deep breath

"We'll just have to see"

She started the car

"Asad I… wait lemme' call him first" she said to herself

She took out her cell phone, but it slipped out of her hand

"Tsk, ugh!"

She looked down to pick it up, and took it in her hands

She smiled, but when she turned back to the road, her smile faded and eyes were left wide.

……………

Asad stood in front of the window, a picture of HER in his hand, and tears sliding down his cheeks.

He remembered Zeenat Appi's shaky words

"Voh tumhe hi milne jaarahi thi"

He closed his eyes and remembered seeing Zoya in the ER and her last words to him

"I love you Akru Asad…." And with a last smile she closed her eyes

Asad's eyes shot open, and he turned to the wardrobe, slowly he walked to it, and took out the gun Ayaan had given him to hold.

Looking at it, he wiped his tears,

"Wait for me Zoya…" he whispered

He looked at Zoya's picture.

"I love you too Zoya" he whispered

BAM….

Asad's body fell to the ground and he managed to pull of a last smile at Zoya's picture before he too closed his eye's.

...

So guys how was it?

This OS is for everyone who loves AsYa

...And I'm sorry for killing both of them off in my OS😆

Do leave your comments

Did you like it? Did you hate it?

And and and...

<3 Farhana

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crazy4KASH_AR thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes I wanna kill u Farhana for killing my beloved ones. 😡
😆
A very emotional OS indeed.
I had tears in my eyes at the end.
Zoe was soo excited to tell Asad that she is in love with him but then she died. 😲
That was soo sad
Asad committed suicide. 😲
A very emotional and unique OS indeed.You are a wonderful writer darling.I loved this OS a lot.
I loved the title a lot.
Keep writing jana
love u
Muah!
Take care!
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
sowmy18 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was freaking awesome!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
It was so beautiful.
I was all excited reading that Zoya was going to confess but as I read the last part I became sad. But, it was a great concept and well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Sad but beautifully written os :-) loved the Zayn part at the end :p
NainaAlex thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Why did u kill them😭
but u really write well...
CrazyBilli thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Dono ko hi maar dala apne OS mein.. :'( :'(

btw wonderfully written os..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
😭 my reaction after reading it
such an emotional os
and you killed both my sweethearts
hows that even fair i mean in the beginning when zoya left i thought probably she will propose and asad will accept it
and even the title was something like that
but even though it was a sad one and i had tears in my eyes i like it cause
its heart touching and loved it
good one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Like your Siggyy says! Whaatt??!

Face Palm!

Back to the OS. Picture perfect Muaah!

Mere dil ko choo gaya am crying 😭 😭 😭
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Amazing ...

Both r dead poor ...

Liked the os

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