OS - An Asyalicious First Date!

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anushka

@anushka2112

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

It's really pleasure to again read it ...superb OS dear with so much fun ...

Anushka

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow , amazing, Loved it ..Why can't Cvs think of these ideas, instead of showing all the negativity..

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

On of my fav os!!

Well written and hilarious!!!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mochhug
AWWW he took her to the fair!? That's my idea of a perfect first date 😛

And the Gay guy! 🤣 I couldn't stop laughing. First I thought it was Ayaan, but then when she asked him to take off the jacket and that he looked hot without it I had a hunch LOL

And loved how he was caressing her cheeks and her hair. Too cute. This was really adorable. From start to finish. I love how he teases her and his inner monologue on the scooter. Really nicely written :) Please continue!!!! Or do you have another OS in mind 😛

Yea the fair was unexpected right?😉

the gay guy thing i had in mind as a different OS but then i merged it into this😆

thankyou so much for the review😃