OS - An Asyalicious First Date! - Page 7

Originally posted by: Starrydee

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Goshhh I am smiling like a mad person i was laughing like a mad person while typing it! 😆

This OS I <3 it to the core ur a fantastic writer sadie I say next time i demand a SS n u shud start thinking about it seriously I'm not gonna leave u ok widout my SS 😡 don't worry dearie i've the plots of 7 SS and FF and OS lined up in my diary i just have to write and type them down! i'll start with an SS once that is finished i'll start with the FF!

Now coming to this OS I must say u have a good sense of humour like I loved that part look asad that tree luk at that dog look at that stone my god I was laughing so badly at that point 😆 just came up randomly with it then i made my bff read it and she was like, "sadhna you have to have to put it in your story" 😆😆

I loved all the songs u used specially kissi disco mien jaaye that was awesome once again 😆 the bg music was ankie (MissHumptyDumpty) choice and the radio songs i had to search on google for old retro songs and then i selected the apt ones (yeah ik writing requires so much mehnat 😛 )

Awww Zoe I found her super adorable n asad he's becoming my cutie day by day 😳

I luved the emotional aspect of the OS 2 where Zoe tells asad of her childhood 😭

U noe I love emotional OS u shud try one 2 jaani i'm a total drama queen all my OS are kinda emotional melodramatic and angsty! only 2-3 are humorous! i'm making an index soon then you can read all my works both humorous and emotional! 😃😃

I luved that scene too bhaisaab bhabhiji toh gussa hogayi it reminded me of MBKD

I so wanted Zoe to say how katrina says hey don't call me bhabhi 😆 sorry i've not seen MBKD!

N that man my god how do u get these ideas 😆 Arrey asad miyan pe toh sab fida ho jate hai that's why i made the guy gay! had this idea in my head for a very long time but i was too lazy to type! it was such a huge OS that the forum was not accepting it that's why made it into two parts!

I loved Zoe wen she said I will also save u mr Khan frm all psycho rapists it made go awww 😳

All in all I luv this OS <3 but of course not more than u 😳 🤗 ILurvYouToo! :*

N another siggie dedicated to me yipeee 😃

Kitna hugs logi mujhe se chal ek aur le

Gives u *an asad tight wala hug* for you! ^__^

Love u sadie 😳

N once again Congo for becoming a goldie 😃 ThankYou! 😃😃

P.S. sorry for the late reply I was busy in holi n all

hope u had a wonderful holi n happie holi 😊

Originally posted by: sophiya_92

When are you planning to upload the second part??😉
cause this is just MINDFREAKING AMAZIING...I LOVED IT TO THE CORE..😃
You are a fantastic writer--yes FANTASTIC is just the word for you!!!!!😊
A perfect treat🤗